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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

So is Giant Judy naked? It doesn't really say and clothes don't shrink with the person being shrunk, so they probably won't grow.



Author's Response:

Her clothes were grown with her here. The nice thing about these little alternate reality stories is I can pretty safely ignore a couple common sense things without much consequence ;)

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

Thank you for the fan service!

I was secretly hoping this would happen.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

Great idea, and I agree with Nostory. It really does seem like the natural culmination of what Judy and her buddies want, and this has potential beyond three chapters. It makes me wonder, what other "professionals and leaders" will also get this treatment, and how and where would they live? Finally, I'd recommend not mentioning anything beyond Scott growing in the description, to make it a surprise twist.

 



Author's Response:

It's definitely fair to say this kind of thing likely has entered the latent fantasies of Judy and company. For now, these three chapters will be the only peek into this reality, though I'm sure there are others in this side canon who will grow. I understand what you mean about the spoiler in the summary, but these chapters are brief and action-focused enough I wanted readers to be able to pick out a short story to read based more on the full concept.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

I feel like this should be made canon,feels like the final step in Judy's plan. Make herself large and in charge, a group of normal sized people underneath and beneath them, little shrunken people to whom she'll be the size of a mountain. 



Author's Response:

Hehe. I'm sure this would be a popular canon, though it conflicts somewhat with what I have planned for the actual series

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

.........Scott.....Scott's had a hard life.



Author's Response:

An understatement

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