Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 11:34 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Good start with the shrinking. Curious to see where this goes. Im into the core stuff, so I'll enjoy if he gets swallowes. But I kind of hope he doesn't. He's portrayed as a decent guy trying to do the right thing even if he wants to do the bad. And he tried to be respectful to her. So I'd love to see some mouth play and teasing, but ultimately not being eaten. Could be interesting to see her grow him back, and tell her mother how good he was, so she begins putting more responsibility on him and he has to watch her more often, so he constantly gets shrunk, played with, and regrown.

 

Will continue to read and enjoy no matter where you take it though

Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron99 despite Sadie's initial impression of Lew she has now taken a shine to him and intends to have some fun. As for Lew, he just really wants to be hself again. The next couple of chapters will see where this ultimately goes.

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 5:46 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

I like how you're putting this together. Good job!

Author's Response:

I appreciate it so much. You know.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2017 7:03 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Solidly written. Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks Recoveringlurker, I will be uploading another chapter very soon.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2017 11:38 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Liking the setup so far, curious to see where it goes. The writing itself is solid. 

Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron99 I appreciate that you took the time to read this and provide some feedback!