Date: October 06 2018 11:37 AM Title: Introduction
Your story is incredible! I love the build up and amazing detail you put into your writing. Please have a look at my challenge! It’s inspired by this story and might be something you could build upon in future.
Thanks a lot for your comments. I read your "Caught Red Handed by Mom" challenge, and I have to say you're a very good writer. It was erotic and exciting (and I'm not really into feet much or older characters). I'd be more into a mother that's in 30's or younger. But your challenge is well-written. If you wrote a full chapter/story, I'd recommend breaking it into paragraphs rather than a single block of text. Other than that, you definitely have talent. Just to let you know, I very rarely log on, so I probably won't be able to respond to any comments for a long time. Thanks again for your interest.
Date: September 02 2018 11:26 AM Title: Introduction
Another great chapter in an incredible story. Maybe season 2 could be Laurie abandoning the rules and making guy tiny permanently.
Interesting suggestion. Thanks a lot for reading... and thanks for all your comments.
Date: September 01 2018 2:12 AM Title: Introduction
Thank you very much for finishing. I'd like to see season two, but I'm just happy you finished this. Great writing, and good slow buildup
Thanks a lot for the nice comments... and thanks for all your comments.
Date: August 30 2018 8:43 AM Title: Introduction
Forgot the stars!
Message me if you're keen, thats a thing on here, right?
*takes the stars*
Thanks a lot for reading/commenting. And thanks for the inspiration. I won't be using the site for a long while, but maybe we could share ideas eventually. I don't think the message system works with my account--for whatever reason. Using the comments is probably better... though I won't be checking for a long time to let you know. Thanks again!
Date: August 24 2018 5:39 PM Title: Introduction
For the most part I love this story, there's good pacing and balancing and I like how each episode starts and ends in a similar way
If I did have a gripe it's that lauriesse's (was that her name?) character started to get on my nerves, and I was honestly hoping Guy would just punch her and end it.
But yeah, overall I liked it
Thanks for reading/commenting. I'm glad you liked the story overall.
Date: August 24 2018 3:45 PM Title: Introduction
this is my first review but i feel i HAVE to leave my thoughts on this masterpiece of fetish work
do not ever ever EVER delete this story it is one of if not THE best i've read on this site
the pacing the descriptive words the amazing balance between story and "action" it's a story that i read in whole no skipping to the "good" parts as everything ties in so well
the last chapter of season one will be coming soon so i know it's too late but..may i throw some directions or plot points to incorporate in later chapters?
1: at some point Laurissa drinks Guy's medicine resulting in her actually becoming taller and resulting in
2: her breasts gradually increasing in size and some "unfortunate" side effects..one being heavy lactation..which "requires" Guy's help (maybe the milk can affect him or she can use it to her advantage
either way thank you for writing this (and 3 stepsisters anger) and keep up the awesome work!
Thanks so much for your nice comments. It makes me happy that you enjoyed the story. And I appreciate the suggestions.... as it's fun to brainstorm ideas. I've fantasized about similar ideas. Thanks again.
Date: August 24 2018 1:12 PM Title: Introduction
I've absolutely loved every single chapter in this story. So sad it's about to come to an end. Like so many others, I'd love to be in his position, especially since his sister likes to dominate him, but isn't out to end his life. Makes a great change in a lot of stories,tbh. Also, just got to say, that from the very beginning, I've always imagined his sister to be like Natalie Alyn Lind from Gifted. Just an incredibly beautiful young lady. Thanks for the story. Great job.
I really appreciiate the comments. I like the show gifted, and Natalie is hot. Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: August 03 2018 1:33 PM Title: Introduction
Such a great story. I’m in Love with her. Just wish I ( hehehe) I Mean he was a lil bigger.
Thanks for your interest. I understand. I'm glad you still enjoy the story, despite the size not being the ideal for you. Thanks for reading.
Date: August 03 2018 9:58 AM Title: Introduction
This is a fantastic chapter in an already amazing story. I really appreciate you worked the toy city theme into the plot, and I would love to see that storyline culminate in her becoming an actual 400ft giantess. She is really enjoying the role and owning it more and more as she transitions her mindset of her brother being shrunk to her being a giant. It's really great to watch unfold. Perhaps next time she could be barefoot for a more intimate feel of the collapsing houses? Thanks again for writing!
Thanks for commenting. You're the second person who expressed interest in her being a real gts. I see the appeal. It would, as you said, need to "culminate" as a real gts since it can be problematic for the storyline. Though I don't know if I'd get that far into the chapters--that's why I did a toy city. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
Date: July 20 2018 1:24 PM Title: Introduction
Great story n fun I prefer slow shrink and I guess very personal is I like idea of 6 to 10 inches in height.
Thanks for commenting, DollSize. Slow shrink is fun, too. I usually like 3 inches or smaller, but different sizes offer different experiences.
Date: July 20 2018 9:58 AM Title: Introduction
Enjoyable as always. Sucks having to usually wait so long for updates but it's worth it. I really liked how it ramped up and ends, I really want to see the next part
Thanks a lot, Cameron99. Always like your comments. I have ideas for the next episode... just need the motivation. Thanks!
Date: February 02 2018 3:09 PM Title: Introduction
just to screw with him more laurie could put the protagonist into unwaware situations with his mom as she does stuff to him without realising.
Interesting idea. Thanks for reading/commenting.
Date: November 05 2017 4:22 PM Title: Introduction
I thought of an ending to the story. You could technically write it up as two different endings if you wanted to. You could either have him succumb to his sisters beauty and constant sexual plays OR have him defeat her advances. Thus, helping him finally control himself while being around other women. :-)
Indeed. Not sure which direction. Thanks for reading!