Date: January 14 2018 9:20 AM Title: Little Tease
An amazing story so far, particuarly the third chapter. I love this scale of giantess but it's incredibly hard to keep interesting, even more so if you're to have any interaction between the giantess and the tinies.
Godesses are also equally hard to make work, while maintaing any kind of internal logic, so you've really tackled just about the hardest thing in giantess fiction and managed to make it all work.
I did kind of expect her to grow a few humans to have sex with her, but I hope if that happens they're only women.
Date: January 12 2018 7:08 PM Title: Little Tease
I like the interactions between Liara and the tinies, she oozes power! You have a knack for this!
Thank you very much! Part of the reason I wrote this was because one criticism I keep hearing about giga scale stories is the lack of interaction. So I was like "challenge accepted" and I guess I'm doing a good job of it. With this chapter I think Liara's personality has really started to come through. I can't wait to get the next one out!
Date: January 11 2018 5:08 PM Title: Little Tease
Giga is hard to make work but when it works it's out of this world. Military at her breast gotta be my favorite part since she didn't even mean to do that.
Wow thanks! I guess that means I did it right then. I'm glad you liked that scene, it was a lot of fun to write. I'm always trying to cram more and more detail into every little part I can because I know there's always something going on even with the most mundane actions. Or at least there COULD be something going on. I think I still have improvements to make though but feedback like this really inspires me to keep writing.
Date: November 04 2016 3:37 PM Title: Little Tease
I made an account just to rate this. I'm surprised no one gave it a rating.
Wow. Gotta say that's one of the best things to ever hear.
"Yeah I made my account /because/ of you."
Thank you so much.
Date: October 29 2016 7:46 AM Title: Little Tease
Your description of Liara's ethnicity seems to vary? Is she Indian or is she a mix of other ethnicities too? Also, who would she look like in real life.
I'm so thrilled you put this on World after seeing it on City. I hope you update this soon, its too good not to update or finish.
Thank you very much Nostory, I'm glad you like it! I do plan on continuing it, maybe that wasn't the case at first but now I have lots of ideas. As for why Liara appears to be described differently in different places it's all a matter of perception. Technically the multi racial way I first described her boils down to Amanda's perception that she looks "indian." In the real world this is because India has something like the second most genetic diversity in the world. The first being South Africa I believe. It's already is a mix of many different races. Thus when Amanda looks at Liara she's not going to go "oh, she has all these different racial traits" She's gong to go "Oh she looks kinda indian." Because according to amanda, she does.
As for a picture of what she might look like, sorry, can't provide one. I didn't base Liara off of any real person at all. She is a composite of traits. If you want an idea of what she looks like your best bet is to look up images of polynesians, latinas, africans, asians, caucasians, etc, as well a mixes of all of those and figure out what traits are distinctly "that race" and then image what a composite of all of them together would look like. No ones single interpretation is going to be right, but that's why I described her face as, sort of, vaguely as I did. everyone can pick out their favorite looking overlay to add to the traits I explicitly state.