Date: March 22 2019 1:20 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Are you still planning on continuing this story? And if so, any updates on when?
I absolutely love your work, with The Escape being my favorite story on this site and Downtrodden running a close second. Unlike the other authors I’ve seen, you actually write your characters in a way that makes them seem like real people rather than just tools to make giantess things happen.
Jessica specifically is written very well in my opinion. She has more personality than most main characters in professional works while not being a shallow gimmick character.
I really hope you haven’t abandoned this story. If you’re having problems in real life or going through writers block, I wish you the best of luck.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2018 3:37 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Any news on an update? I'm really looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks, I'm writing the next chapter but its difficult with my writer's block :/
[Report This]Date: January 10 2018 6:10 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
It’s so nice to see an update to this story. I do love how well Jessica takes the mishap, and how absolutely, positively angry it makes Caitlin that Jack was trying to, or, was going to try and help Jessica out.
I imagine that the cameramen lucky enough to catch a pic at the perfect time are going to think very carefully about what they do with their prize. I for one would keep it safe and private. A little memento from a meeting with such a amazing giantess.
Eva has that motherly kind of affection for Jessica. It’s subtle, yes, but it’s there. She clearly sees Jessica as more than just something she can profit off of, although the revenue is undoubtedly a welcome side benefit of such a relationship. And if Jessica is getting some much needed work experience in then all the better!
Fantastic chapter as always, look forward to seeing what you intend next!
Author's Response:
If that cameraman showed that picture around ,he might find an angry giantess at his front door. Thanks for the review as always!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2017 1:21 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Thanks for updating the story!
Does having a stomach flu cause you to have less time for other things so more for writing, or do you mean that it causes you to have less time for writing?
In any case, I hope you get well soon.
Also, will Caitlin become a giantes?
Author's Response:
Thanks man for the well wishes. Caitlin will remain a normal woman for the rest of the story.
Date: June 17 2017 3:11 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Nostory, please send to this adress (Alexandergranadox@hotmail.com) the 2 original stories you wrote about the Giantess Jessica Gomez and which you are remaking now: ¨The escape¨ and ¨Afthermath¨. Feel free to send them either by Microsoft Word or PDF format.
I would apreciate your answer.
Author's Response:
Hey I've sent it, let me know if you didn't get it.
Date: October 10 2016 6:00 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Hey there, I really like your work; have you thought of an infrastructure build/repair job for Jessica (I.e. Super linesman) factually the work would be well suited and would be worth 8-9 figures; plus the outroads and sidetrails for the plot would be endless. Maybe not where you wanted to go, but it might add a lot of interesting scenarios and depth. Respectfully speaking there are a lot of GTS stories about models, this route would be different because it would center on her redeeming herself and connecting with society; while zoltan and jack work on their home brew in the background for awhile.
Again, this is just a suggestion , looking forward to your reply.
Author's Response:
Thank you for review and your suggestion here. I think its fair for me to say that Jessica would not necessarily be limited to model work, she may engage in other forms too if she should feel the need to. I don't think she really needs to redeem herself, she hasn't killed anyone so the story won't really be about that. She'll get her chance to connect with society soon, trust me. It will be touched on, its just up to Jessica if she wants to grasp it.
Date: July 05 2016 12:03 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I'm wondering if Caitlin is lying trying to get Jack to hate Jessica.
Author's Response:
She has the motive to do it, that's a given. Jessica is this giant problem that wandered into her life. She's also not too shabby on the eyes, causes mayhem wherever she goes and Jack so far is defending her. It would be in her best interest to get Jack to remove Jessica from their lives asap. Good theory!
Date: July 05 2016 9:42 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Caitlin's gonna have some near death experience and Jessica's gonna save her, I'm calling it right now.
Author's Response:
Oh , she is? *looks ahead* Maybe.....* nudge nudge wink wink*
Date: June 05 2016 11:47 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I like it, good job.
Author's Response:
Why thanks, so great to see a review from you!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2016 10:07 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
I'm with versusterminus7. I've seen so many versions of this, so many different trials, not to mention I saw the original draft months ago it feels. Those were excellent as usual from you, don't get me wrong, but this seemed... more refined? Kind of like the difference in sweetness between sugarcane and the refined powder. Equally sweet, but one is more pleasing to the palette.
I look forward to future chapters!
Seeing as how you've finally submitted this, I suppose it's about time for me to post something...
Author's Response:
Yeah you have, you saw version 1 when she was more of a dick, you've seen into the future of this series. Thanks for the help with this prologue and of course the fact checking about American things. Its partly because of you that this is more refined.
You could post something related to Intersizables, that would help ;)
Date: June 04 2016 2:16 PM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
and it continues! Glad to see this up and honored to have contribute a couple of lines!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2016 10:17 AM Title: Prologue: Can't A Girl Get Some Privacy Around Here?
Good it continues. :)
Author's Response:
It definitely will, now I just need to break my writer's block .