Date: October 26 2018 5:55 PM Title: Prologue - Dream Job
Great story all around, but this most recent chapter is INCREDIBLE. The way Maria and so casually handles the capsule and Sasha's reaction was great. Loved how Sasha basked in the power that she had over him on the massage table, and above all else..I LOVED how she saw the opportunity to drop him down the back of her panties, and social ettiquette pretty much forbade her from retrieving him! Just so fantastic..hope to see more of this kind of stuff
Date: October 26 2018 3:31 PM Title: Prologue - Dream Job
Wonderful work and marvellous chapter! Although I would have loved to see an unaware episode. Like, going to the spa and being lost, and the, someone finding the necklace and wearing it like a normal one.
Date: August 20 2018 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: Sleepover
This is an amazing story. So many different plot lines. Maria gets off on her size--great description of the soap dish. Then Cassidy does Tommy-- detailed and well written almost realistic description. We've got the dream sequence, which was hot. The monopoly game. Then we're left with the tantilizing story for the next installment, Maria and Bill's budding but deflated (literally) attraction to one another. Can't wait till Tommy finds out. Wonder how he'll find out? Minuss is the best
Date: March 04 2018 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pet Husband
They call what just happened here “abuse”. It could either be because of my bias opinion on marriage but that’s not healthy(kinky in a good way but unhealthy) I’m hoping for the sake of narrative something like a divorce or an intervention happens. It’d be more interesting than giantess fetish scenario 133 alpha:the slave
Date: January 12 2018 8:51 AM Title: Prologue - Dream Job
I was really happy this story was continued after a nearly year long hiatus. Minuss' tales are original both in plot and description. I don't think there is another author at this portal who would write about the shrunken character (Tommy) being mistakenly considered dumb, explaining this misconception with the concept of a 'sensory deficit' rather than a lack of intelligence? This detail allows the reader to understand the thoughts and conclusions of the characters. The same could be said about the backstory of Maria's powerlessness regarding her promotion. Minuss delivers on completing details like these that are central to his characters' motivations or beliefs, making his stories more realistic.
Beautiful chapter. That being said, I'll go lowbrow and agree with the reviewer who requested pee domination. Or how about a threesome? Was Chapter five--the one that had Maria imagining a tiny Tommy trying to block her vagina from a giant cock--a prelude? Awesome story from the best writer out there.
Date: January 10 2018 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: Second Thoughts?
The king has returned! And with a magnificent chapter too. I was kind of hoping Maria would've either pissed on him, or farted on him, but still the chapter was great, really gives the pains that a couple must go through as one of them becomes essentually an invalad.