Reviews For Gods and Mortals
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 -part 2

I'm sorry. But, you are going to have re-edit this chapter. I can't make out where the narrative text ends and the character dialogue begins!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 -part 2

You need to indent your paragraphs, hard to read a single block of words. Other than that I liked it but cannot wait to see how things are from the giant's POV. 

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