Date: December 02 2015 10:48 PM Title: A Fresh Start
Awesome set-up. I love multi-sized worlds and I like that the ladies seem to be gentle and friendly. Judging by the people's reaction, it seems like there isn't much contact between the different sized races.
The line about the Chinese place has me curious. Did the giants learn to make Chinese food or are these girls normal humans and the townspeople are tiny?
Author's Response:
You're right in guessing that it's a really tiny and the girls are "normal". It just makes sense that the world will support tiny people much easier than it would with giants, resource-wise. Then again, it's all relative. I wouldn't be surprised if the tiny people are still in denial and living under the "I'm not shrinking, the world is growing" umbrella. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2015 10:34 PM Title: A Fresh Start
Seems like a fun little tale, a lot less serious and more bubbly in tone than your other works. So far, I'm loving this!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's definitely got a light tone, but who knows where it will go. All stories need some sort of conflict.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2015 7:15 PM Title: A Fresh Start
What makes this for me are the likeable characters. Really can't wait to see what happens at movie night or what movie is chosen. I hope that the tiny/normal sized woman(or people if they decide to go) can somehow get the attention of the giantesses when the arrive at their house. Is there some sort of doorbell or maybe somekind of intercom system. At any rate this is shaping up to be a great story and I cant wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS are their walls soundproof? Just curious if their lovemaking will disturbe the entire town lol.
Author's Response:
The next chapter takes care of all that fun little worldstuff, except for that last question...
All I can really say is that I hope they have a loud enough bang playlist.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2015 5:06 PM Title: A Fresh Start
A interesting start to an interesting story. I'm excited to see the worldbuilding of this universe. It seems like a more modern spin to the whole Lilliput/Brobdingnag situation, with no Gulliver needed inbetween.
Honestly, my biggest hope is for some bold, adventurous cutpurse to try to break in and unsuccessfully snatch something from the home of these two ladies. It would be neat to see their reaction.
Any chance of continuing Rehabilitation as well? Love that story to bits.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's definitely avariation of the Lilli/Brob set up. Multi size worlds have a lot of potential for good content. As for the thief, I sure pocket change alone is worth the risk of getting caught for the price of scrap metal alone.
As for Rehabilitation, I'll continue that story when I feel I'm ready to go back to the heavy subject matter, though I really appreciate that you like the story. Anyways, thanks for reviewing.
Date: December 01 2015 7:14 AM Title: A Fresh Start
This is brilliant, love it and the larger implications for the world you've made here. These giantesses, how they will impact the neighbourhood, what they'll do, who will they sleep with, everything is just so exciting! Glad to see you back!
Author's Response:
There's definitely going to be some fun stuff with this set up. Once again, I find myself really liking the characters. Whether they like it or not, the two are definitely going to have a large impact on the town. Full pun intended.