Date: May 01 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed reading your different versions , your writing style is great and you make the characters seem gentle and fun loving with what is going on. Would definately love to see you explore more interactions between these characters with Mark becoming a few inches tall in her world whilst she is enjoying teasing him with her new sized assets!
Date: May 01 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, you should continue ending 3 and/or 4!
Great story!
Date: April 30 2015 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh third one didn't end well for Sarah, her sister got to be huge in the end. I enjoyed the other two, making Mark small. Will the fourth one end with an even bigger Sarah ?
[Report This]Date: April 29 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I love the dialogue, the action, both characters and their reactions seemed so authentic and realistic.
I wish this story could go on forever, and perhaps Sarah can show off her size to her family.
I like how Mark is trying to resist but Sarah is just too powerful for him.
Sarah just sounds sexy, as if her word play can turn Mark on.
That's how good your writing is, and I can't wait for more!
Date: April 28 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really loved Sarah's dominance, how she enjoyed her new size and power and wasted time in showing Mark how powerful she can be, the role reversal is too good!