[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
now that's a story. The first BFG was great, but this was a great backstory for Jessica. Loved all the characters, well written!
Author's Response:
That's great and thanks for rating it. I am a little surprised that you gave it a fairly low rating though.
Date: May 20 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Oh I forgot to add, the explanation of why she cannot shrink down again was very well done. I believed it.
Author's Response:
Great, if a story isn't believable it is not enjoyable.
Date: May 20 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Oh my, that was pretty sad. Jessica being told she'll never be small while conscious is something horrifying. Not to mention now that Alicia is gone, her father is far away. However, she does have Bobby. So there will be someone .
Still, back to Angleland?
Author's Response:
Yep I'm going back to Angleland for a while before the next BFG prequel story.
Date: May 14 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Bicovium makes Jessica age? Interesting side effect there, I hope she'll be fine.
Author's Response:
Not really aging, just draining the life out of her.
Date: May 07 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
I have a half down chapter two of Dance, should be up by next week after my last paper.
Author's Response:
Great, I can't wait to read it.
Date: April 30 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Oh dear, Jessica needs a shoulder to cry on now.
Author's Response:
Soon, she will have more to cry about.
Date: April 23 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Hmm,Alica might be in for a huge letdown.
Author's Response:
Probably she'll have as much fun as she can get.
Date: April 10 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Nice to see Jessica have fun, although those problems with her size are worrying.
Author's Response:
Well she had to have a little fun, maybe things will work out for her soon.
Date: April 02 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Think the reappearance of Bobby was good , Alicia won't be too happy with that though. Hope her little fainting spell isn't a sign of something worse.
Author's Response:
We'll have to see what happens when Jessica learns about Alicia's true feelings. Also what exactly is happening to her is yet to be seen.
Date: March 26 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Ida will be a problem, I can feel it. She might even drug Jessica and rape her.
Author's Response:
I don't know if it would go that far.
Date: March 19 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
A harsh judge or panel of them could hit her hard for the reason of " Rules are rules."
Author's Response:
Yep but they did take circumstance into consideration.
Date: March 13 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Felt Jessica was right to use her powers but rules are rules. However I think she should get off with some light punishment, if there is even a punishment to hand out.
Author's Response:
We'll have to see what happens, she could be imprisoned or given a slap on the wrist.
Date: March 04 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Think Jessica overreacted too much, she only failed once. If she had still gotten the same result after several runs then its fine but first try is a little too much.
Author's Response:
I think it was more of the shock than anything really. She didn't realise how much destruction she could cause until then.
Date: February 25 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Last part will be something Jessica will be doing a lot and I must admit I didn't see it coming ,Fredericks asking the scale of the city be reduced to allow her to practice being a giant.
Author's Response:
Yeah I thought that it would be a good way for her to practice being a giantess without having to grow.
Date: February 19 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
To anyone reading this, just know that I'm currently writing the next BFG story starring Dawn. It'll be out when I complete it, hoping it'll be soon but if not, expect it in March.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the update, I can't wait to read it.
Date: February 18 2015 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
Quite enjoyed the part about why Jessica can't help the Dolorians, it'll come in handy for future stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment. Shame that you're the only one who seems to do this.
Date: February 12 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
I think I'll like Agent Fredericks, he seems like a man who knows how to enjoy life. Will we see Shelly and Bobby again?
Author's Response:
Yeah they will pop up at some point, not sure when but they will come back. For Agent Fredericks he is a man who became a walking tub of lard through no fault of his own but has seen the bright side to what happened. Maybe Jessica can learn from him.
Date: February 01 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Birth Of A Paragon
I like this start, Jessica seems more real here, her grief over suddenly becoming a giant makes her easier to relate to when you also throw in her sham date.
With over 200 years of history to tell, there is an entire series of stories to be found in the years between Jessica joining Park and the main story.
Author's Response:
Yep that was what I was going for. There is a lot of material set before the main series and we'll get through it in time.