Reviews For Jingle Bellies
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Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 5:45 PM Title: Double Attraction

Finally a 2nd chapter :) I really hope your time plan goes well I am a little worried this wont get finished and make progress until Christmas. Sorry if youre in a stressful time. But this chapter was awesome and a nice lookup for whats to come!! Loved the last part where Cat made some intruging ideas by looking at Bobby and Francine. Maybe Bobby gets some unfortunate one way trip through Tommy or Tommys "new gf". I also would love to see some unaware insertion by shrinking them to dust mite or ant size, maybe Tommy makes for some anal play in a private room. Anyway, looking forward for the next parts already!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I dont think any characters will be shrunk that small, but there will definetely be more insertion and unaware vore! and I think youll like where the whole love arc thing is going...

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 10:46 PM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

Great story and love your descriptions! Will there be any aware vore done by people other than Cat?

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! No, Cat's the only one in this story to do aware vore, but there will be lots more unaware vore by other characters.

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 6:28 AM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

I really liked The Party, but not the starving aspect of it. I am not a fan of "big bellies", "baby ballies"or call it starving, because it's a little bit unrealistic to me. I like normal flat bellies much much more, especially on cute girls ^_^ Hope you wont focus too much on the starving thing, but it's already nice to see youre putting in much more unaware vore! Hope to see some onion dip part and "a swim in a party cup". I guess this story wont be around Tommy having a new gf, so that's already a nice idea for whats coming after this story! Thank you again so much for finally writing again, Ive missed your work, really. Hope for a soon next chapter :)) <3



Author's Response:

Well, I've got some good news and bad news for you, then. Bad news is that there will be a fair amount of belly-stuffing (just a preference of mine), but I will try to tone it down a little bit to focus on the vore more. As for Tommy getting a new gf, maybe he'll meet somebody at the party...

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 6:23 AM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

You're back!!! Ahhh :) this already looks like a great plot, even though you're busy and Christmas is still so far away, hope for some sooner updates. I liked the fact of Simon not getting an officially invitation, maybe he gets an unofficial one :p but not under the party guests but as party snack ingredient. Awesome seeing you back!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear your feedback, as always. I think you'll like what I've got planned for the whole party thing, as it will be similar (but not too similar) to the setup in The Party. I'll be sure to have some more unaware vore this time around, so I'm sure you'll like that too!

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 5:50 AM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

Sounds like it's going to be 1 hell of a Christmas party indeed!
Can I go too? haha :) love it.
Cant wate for chapter 2.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to have Chapter 2 up soon!

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 11:11 PM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

Great to see another story going by you. Love your stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the five stars! Also glad you enjoyed my other stories. :)

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 10:46 PM Title: A Bellyful of Trouble

I love these stories. So well told, sometimes and good vore scenes. I'm happy you're making another one.



Author's Response:

I'm your happy you're happy! It's good to be back on this site!

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