[Report This]Date: February 05 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sweet Jesus... A sexy milf. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope it involves her feet.
aaron
[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear, what will Cheryl's mother do them? I can't imagine it would be anything good. I really missed this story, glad to see it is still alive!
Author's Response:
So far in the story, Abby for the most part has seen, and been part of, the real action. Things will change for Mark drastically soon...
[Report This]Date: December 12 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Cherly is truly despicable, storing Abby in such a place, hopefully Lauren can right those wrongs! Your description of events is truly top notch and I hope this story doesn't end too soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks again Nostory! If my writing does end up waffling on, you must tell me otherwise I'll just end up writing more rubbish haha! Glad you're enjoying it so far, and don't worry! The story won't be ending any time soon!
[Report This]Date: December 06 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well at least it's over for night, pity Abby spends the night in Cheryl's mouth but I would not mind spending the night in her breasts, if I had a GTS girlfriend or wife I think I would spend all night there.
Date: November 23 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Very well writen and I could not stop till the end!
Not my style to have someone, who has to die, but story rocks!!
Take care
curtis
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
I'm not sure what you meant about someone dying but please keep tuned!
Date: November 23 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Incredible.... I love where this is going! Im curious... mark walked up to the stone in chapter 9 and almost touched it. Had he actually touched it, coulld he have shrunk again?? ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Who knows? The mystery of the stone is yet to be exposed!
[Report This]Date: November 22 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your updates are pretty fast, so the delay was not noticed. I consider weekly updates to be fast.
Cheryl is really exploiting the situation, hopefully if Lauren finds out she is kinder to the couple. Abby is getting the brunt of it and I hope for her sakes that things get better. Great story so far so keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your constant reviews!
We'll have to see how Lauren behaves later in the story! Keep tuned and I hope to hear from you again soon!
Date: November 22 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow... just wow...
Author's Response:
Thanks!
More "WOW" moments to come!
[Report This]Date: November 18 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
You weren't kidding about kicking it into high gear. Awesome chapter.
aaron
Date: November 17 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sweet. Hoping for an evil, curvy giantess that may enjoy some more mouthplay in the future. Really fun read over all.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Brilliant and it seems Cheryl is going to give the a very rough time or great time depending on how you look at it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews! I was going to write two chapters to upload but I have any early morning start, so expect the next to be uploaded tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter. I'm looking forward to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! We will continue with Mark and Abby's adventure soon!
Date: November 11 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is very entertaining! I wonder if this "stone" is powerful enough to cause a shrinking epidemic?.. :O
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks buddy!
Date: November 10 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow nearly swallowed alive without the giantess ever knowing, hope things improve!
Date: November 10 2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wish lauren would have burrowed the panties. Good story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nicely edited. Much better, not that it was all that bad anyway, just trying to help you get better, ya know?
Well, looks like Lauren just walked into an emptie bedroom,...Hm, she can just climb in, get undressed, slide into that nice warm bed and get a good nights sleeep, huh?
Hide quick! Here she comes! aww, yes... nice! ;`)
Two tinie's to play with for the giantess Lauren...
Author's Response:
Criticism is always welcomed! I can only get better when I'm told my faults, so thank you kind sir! I'm currently writing up my next chapter, literally as we speak so expect a new chapter hopefully within the hour!
And I may not meet your expectations or your predictions, but I do hope to exceed them!
Thanks!
Date: November 09 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
I knew Abby should not have touched the stone!
Author's Response:
Are you enjoying the story? The reason it's taken me so long to update is because I wanted to figure out what and where I want the tale of our protagonists to go! I predict this will be a fairly long story but I want it to be consistently entertaining!
Thanks for reading my stories and keep in touch!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start.
aaron