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[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
27 Aug 2015
I have just read your Randall storly for the first time, to Chapter 21, and have found it to be fascinating, with good action, and reasonable characters. Not only that, but I found that your English and grammar are good enough to allow the reader to enjoy the story without frequent re-reads to understand the background. You may not be a writer, according to your intro, but if you keep with this quality of writing, you will never hear me complain. Keep up the good work. (Note: I usually try to stay away from writings based around teen-aged / precollegiate backgrounds, as I am constantly looking for more mature stories. But you have done very well. Wish I could write as well as you do!)
Date: August 14 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will you be continuing this one? I really like Randall and Ashley, its very interesting to read and high school giantesses are really fun to read about, how they cope with their size in a normal setting.
Author's Response: I eventually plan on continuing this when I get some free time.
Date: March 12 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
nice story! one of the better stories i've read here!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: March 11 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I see I chose well, this was a fun chapter. When Ashley pinned him down I,kind of thought it was with her boobs.
Both of their reactions were amazing and I can't wait to see how the rest of this story plays out.
Author's Response: What else could she have pinned him down with? Ashley just used the right assets for the job.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite stories and I belive you should continue it. «¢r0$$»
Date: October 31 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was reading through, and I noticed that you need 2 reviews of your story in order for you to continue writing it, and I noticed we only have an odd number and that the last reviews previously were from too long ago to have counted. I feel like this story would generously benefit the site, and that you're doing an excellent job pumping out such great romance stories. I sincerely enjoy the storyline so far, and hope to see more size difference interactions between Randal and Ashley. Continue this story for me and others who enjoy your writing. Hope to see more from you soon, also, love the other story you're writing 'Terra' :-).
Author's Response: The only reason that I asked for reviews is so that I know that someone out there is still interested in the story. I stopped a while ago because the readers seemed to have lost interest. Seeing that there is still someone who likes this story and being a writer of my word, I'll continue working on this story along with Terra.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do continue this story, it's pretty good! I would want to see how their relationship progresses and whether Alekrsandr will eventually attack Randal..
[Report This]Date: June 20 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gotta say, I love that little bastard Randall. Its the title of this story and he truly MAKES the story, if you know what I mean. Hes my second favorite male character next to Niall from Titan Physics. It really takes a LOT to make me like a male character, mainly cuz Im a dude and I come here for the GTS, so props to you for making this little champion so likable!
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to make a character that was strong and independent, but caring and fragile at the same time. Also if it wasn't for the fact that I made this character then Naill probably be my favorite also
[Report This]Date: June 18 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
L,
The development of the story is actually rather well done. Certainly well written for someone who say's he's not a writer.
I might suggest using paragraphs a bit more. You did so at first but sort of grew out of it on most later chapters. A BIG wall of text can be difficult to read. You editing is well-done, not too much to pick on there. Good work.
As far as the story itself, you're introducing characters well & giving them backstroies to help understand them. Thus far they all seem to have a place in your world although I'm wondering about the inclusion of another short guy. I'm not currently seeing why you'd add him, although I did enjoy the bit where Jason got stomped. You get what you give. I'm sure all will be revealed soon enough.
As far as interaction goes, it seems to go well considering the characters' mindset. Her anxiety & his hardheadedness really make their interaction more alive. I am very interested to see if things become more intimate between your main characters as the story seems to be working up to that. Perhaps it might mellow the poor guy out a bit, he's a very stressed out guy.
Cheers & good luck.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I choose grade 11, I want more sexy stuff between Ashley and Randall, I mean she DID have it stuck in her mind, maybe she'll try being sexy to seduce him or something. Great chapter by the way, Im looking forward to seeing more interaction between Ashley and Randall, sexy or not.
Date: May 31 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Some more Ashley would be apprecheated, I mean she is the GTS right, Im waiting for another chapter with her.
Author's Response: this is partially my fault as I had to write a couple chapters to set up Alexksandr s character. Now that I'm satisfied I promise that the next few chapters will be Ashley based. Also nice to see an Ashley fan.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad for the update, I used to love this story! Great chapter into the Alexander character, hes quite the little boss isnt he?
Author's Response: I went on hiatus because people lost interest in the story
Date: December 02 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
You could have had randall dressed up as a leprechaun and Jason trying to stab him with a pocket knife...do you think Randall would bleed lucky charms if that happenned?
Author's Response: Hilarious suggestion, but Randall would never allow it.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
not bad i like it alot
Author's Response: I find it funny that this is a story that I want to see continued even though I am the author. Anyways, thanks for the review!
Date: November 27 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks good so far, except you need to separate the speech from the description. Shame the first chapter is a bit short, could have done with a bit more introduction. Still, I have high hopes for this story, so I move onwards, to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks on the advise of separating the speech from the description, I'll be sure to do that. Also thank you for reading!