"Having somehow ended up tiny and in the parking lot of a local Vorex Foods, Mark’s life is about to take a turn for the worse when energetic teen girl Ashley discovers something interesting on the floor."
My second story ever. Like the first, this is just my one of my attempts at making some sort of cohesive story but this time much longer than 400 words. It's not finished, and I don't know it if ever will be, but I think it was a decent learning experience about writing size. I typed this all up in a matter of an hour or two, no revisions, just straight typing. While I was planning to delete it permanently, I decided to just keep it up on here so maybe I can get criticism to improve. I know I'm far from the best.
Heavily inspired by VortexFoodsTM's untitled Vortex series, this story was never meant to be my own, but a test to see if I have the smallest amount of talent for writing this stuff, so I borrowed some elements to fill in the blanks.
If I were to guess the biggest issues right now, I think I could go into much more detail, I just sometimes didn't do that and other times it was hard to integrate details without it reading like a old sleazy magazine. I don't know when my next story will come out if ever, but I really want to capture the hopelessness, cruelty, and fear of size interactions.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1573 Read Count: 2644