Penname: bartek21 [Contact] Real name: tom
Member Since: January 19 2011
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Summary: Past Featured Story

(Paramouth's First Annual "Nommies" Nominee for Best Story: runner up!)

A Hungry vampire and a humble borrower seem like an unlikely pair of friends, but when times are tough and they're both down on their luck, maybe they can find what they need in each other. 

Edit: 8/12/2021 Back with a MASSIVE chapter. Obligatory "a bit late for 8/8." Hope you all enjoy! (Also, wow! almost a year since I began this! That's wild!) 

The tags listed are all included in the story so far. I'll add more tags as I go.

For the record, the violent, tag does not apply to how the main characters interact, but there is violence in the story. The primary G/t relationships in this story are all gentle/non-fatal.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90622 Read Count: 84618
[Report This] Published: August 18 2020 Updated: August 12 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 27 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

super written chapter.
I look forward to the next adventures.
please continue this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bartek21! I really appreciate your second review to let me know you're keeping up with the story! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, so don't you worry! You know, just when I'm not busy with life and work. But it shouldn't be too long! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

great story.
I'm curious about Leo Vel's further adventures.
more please.
I like such stories non-fatal .
you describe it great.

I'm sorry, my english is bad.



Author's Response:

You certainly don't have to apologize for any level of English skill, I'm just glad you left a review! So, thank you! 

I also really enjoy non-fatal vore, and I wrote this story just to do that. This is the most reviews I have ever received and the story has been posted less than a day, so maybe I will have to make more of it. 

Thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 05 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

I see you have great talent. I can't wait for the next chapters.
 (reading the next chapters I feel like a child who got a dream gift for a Christmas tree, for his birthday ;)  )



Author's Response:

Ah! Thank you very much! And I'm so glad you get so excited just to see me posting more content. Then I'm happy to tell you that I just posted another chapter! Very productive weekend. I hope you enjoy it! And thank you again for your consistent feedback and enthusiasm!

Summary:

James is eager and excited to learn about his new promotion! But when he goes to learn what it is, something goes awry leading to quite an adventure to place far far from home. Thankfully a new friend he meets is there to help him get back home and protect him along the way. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48002 Read Count: 87833
[Report This] Published: September 23 2020 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Promotion

Interesting story start. Please continue.
Sorry my English is terrible.



Author's Response:

Planning on it! No worries either.

Summary:

A couple of close friends, Emeline and Stephan, spend some quality time together to unwind over a movie after taking their finals for the semester at the University of Augural Sciences. What begins as a casual evening takes a turn for the fantastic, however, when some of the content in the movie inspires a particular reaction in Stephan that leads Emeline down an interesting line of questioning. 

 

This was done as my half of an art trade with Gershwin! My first story of that sort. 

Disclaimer: this story is for entertainment purposes only, it was based on a brief prompt, and any resemblances to persons in real life or in other intellectual property is coincidental. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 6024
[Report This] Published: September 30 2020 Updated: September 30 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: October 01 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Cause for Celebration

WOW! This I can only say WOW! . Amazing story. Amazing description (almost felt like a part of it.)
I have the impression that there will be more chapters of this story ?



Author's Response:

Hey, Bartek! Good to see you in the reviews here! And may I just say, I think your English has gotten better with each one! 

Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad that you were able to feel immersed in the experience! 

 

At the moment, I have no real plans of continuing this story because it was part of a trade, and I want to get back to writing "Borrowing a Bite," but if I ever need another change of pace, I'm happy that I left this one open ended. 

Summary:

One sudden day, my friend know for all life Laura came to my place and asked me to do something out of the uncommon, how will this turn out?

 

 

A short story just for enjoyment.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3804 Read Count: 7800
[Report This] Published: January 23 2021 Updated: January 23 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A friend request

I really like this story. :)
I like the details you describe. :)
Is short :(
Sorry my English is terrible. :(



Author's Response:

Oh, don´t worry about that! You write it all good!

And I have to say myself that English is not my native language either, its spanish! :D

Summary:

Me and my girlfiend already had some stag/vixen experiences, but this time we decided that she would be completely on her own for her to enjoy the experience, and I would be there all the time without the second guy ever noticing.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15205 Read Count: 36639
[Report This] Published: March 20 2021 Updated: September 17 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

I really enjoyed the chapters.
I like the description of what heroism feels like.(I really like how you describe the details).

Luckily, the cervix wasn't hungry and ate it (And he didn't end up in her womb.) :)
Please continue .

I'm sorry, my English is bad. :(



Author's Response:

Not into womb thingies either (as I said in another review), sorry! but I will continue, that's for sure. Thank you for your review

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Interesting start. Please continue.



Author's Response:

Will do for sure! Just give me time as I work full time and this may take some weeks to finish. 

I also like positive criticism: any orthographic mistake, any way to express things better, just tell me so I improve me & the story!

Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 97796
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 10 2021 Title: Chapter 1: CH1. Evicted

A very interesting start. Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm currently working on the second chapter, hope to have it out before the end of the weekend!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 11 2021 Title: Chapter 1: CH1. Evicted

I really like this chapter.
Please continue.
Let me just say WOW great.
You have a talent for writing.



Author's Response:

I'm already working on the next chapter, hope you look forward to it! Thank you for the kind words, they mean a lot!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 14 2021 Title: Chapter 3: CH3. Teased and Confused

I will write this is an amazing story. Amazing attention to detail in this story.
 WOW !!
Please continue.
Please more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you've stuck around, can't wait to bring you more to read! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 27 2021 Title: Chapter 4: CH4. All Work, No Play

WOW !!!

Amazing story.

Such gems are very rarely seen here.

Please continue this story. I am curious what will happen next. 



Author's Response:

Appreciate the review, wanted to wait till I updated before responding.


Sorry for the wait!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: February 05 2022 Title: Chapter 5: CH5. A Day Like Any Other

I like this story very much.
You describe the situations very well.
Please continue.
I'm sorry, my English is bad .



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it, and thank you for the praise!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 21 2022 Title: Chapter 6: CH6. Getting Comfy

I really like this chapter, please continue.
You describe the details very well.

I'm sorry, my English is bad.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! And your English is good!

Summary:

Tony is 3 inches, indestructible, and at age 18 his Mom, Amelia, started dating again, having been single for her entire life. She met Isabella, another single mom who has an 18 year old daughter Lauren. Tony and Lauren have feelings for each other from the first day they met and during the honeymoon the two finally confess their feelings to one another.

Important update: Amelia no longer dies. This version is overall happier and contains less grief, this will come into play more during later chapters.

Their relationship is very playful and founded on trust and consent. They can go from being extremely sarcastic with each other to extremely open with each other, although Lauren isn't as used to affection so she gets a little shy and blushy.

There will eventually be smut and them truly playing around with Tony's size and all sorts of fun, but the beginning sets up how they care for each other.

I'll update the tags as I go along. Even though I haven't gotten to it yet, there will be plenty of tags included. Butt will absolutely be one of them.

Italics on their own paragraph are Tony narrating, and Italics in a paragraph with non-Italics are his thoughts.

This is a slice of life, starting with the fluffy entries before we get into the smut. 


Huge shout out to Vorepop, https://www.giantessworld.net/viewuser.php?uid=33866 I got inspired to actually start writing this after reading his superb "I'm a Little Curious About Your Taste" before that this was just an idea in my head. I loved reading the sarcastic back and forth and it helped me find direction for this story. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Couples, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: (Tony and Lauren)'s/(Jack and Jenny)'s Adventures
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9120 Read Count: 4949
[Report This] Published: April 24 2022 Updated: April 24 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting the Girl of My Dreams

A very interesting story. Please continue.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I appreciate every comment. 


I certainly plan to continue, I don't know when the next addition will be, but it will be uploaded.

Summary:

While on a holiday at sea with his mother, the barely above 1 inch tall, young man, Andrew gets lost.

Follow Andrew on his struggle to return and how he meets his rescuer, a cute, Asian girl.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2352 Read Count: 6895
[Report This] Published: May 22 2022 Updated: May 23 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: June 13 2022 Title: Chapter 1: A nice quiet holiday

A very interesting story. Please continue.