Penname: bartek21 [Contact] Real name: tom
Member Since: January 19 2011
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Tom's Story by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1033]
Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2406333
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

I think that it would not end quickly and knowledge of Tom Cassidy

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 19 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Serena and Lina

interesting
please more



Author's Response:

As you wish

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 06 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Truly Hot for Teacher

She may forget where is the tom, or do not have time to pull it out?
She may wish to keep him inside yourself (a safe place)?

 

Reportedly say the small size ... it is bad? hehe

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

Janine Cassidy and join forces to hide toma?
Before parents Janice and Tom?
or Tess join?
Tom survive being very long in the vagina or uterus, Janine Cassidy?
I can not wait the next chapter !!!!
Please more !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Cassidy sees Janine in a different light and there's no telling how long Tom could survive buried insiode a vagina

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: July 12 2016 Title: Chapter 106: Four's a Crowd

please more

it seems everyone is tempting Tess says Tom is capable of

the question whether tess will be able to protect (hide) toma front line.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 10 2016 Title: Chapter 90: What Did You Do Over Lunch Hour?

great chapter!
More please!
I'm curious to see how it looks from the point of view of toma
as long as there is tom
or Katie will be able to hear the tom
  the tom will be heard katie



Author's Response:

Thanks I will keep them coming!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 13 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Student/Teacher Conference

more please!
amazing story!
Only there ..... he does not lose tom he he !!
the tom will be an adult it can successfully work as a gynecologist ?!




Author's Response:

We are still a ways from ending this tale I fear...

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 05 2016 Title: Chapter 79: Truly Hot for Teacher

please more!
this is great!

Tom Good job!
Cassidy let him keep as long as possible inside.
I'm curious how it looked from the perspective of Tom's of this event (orgasm Cassidy).
if the tom is very deep inside Cassidy?

The "Ins and Outs" of the Disneyverse by iambeowulf Rated: X starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A first-Person POV story! A young man finds himself mysteriously shrunk and sent Quantum Leap-style through various Disney worlds. On his journey to get back home, he’ll encounter various giant-sized (to him) female Disney characters from movies like Frozen, Brave, Tangled, Aladdin, Alice in Wonderland, Snow White, Cinderella and more! However, his task won’t be easy, as in order to get back home, he’ll have to get each girl’s attention, even if it’s from the inside...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Nose, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 390 Read Count: 9928
[Report This] Published: October 31 2015 Updated: October 31 2015
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue- Getting Your Bearings

interesting !! please more !!



Author's Response:

More's coming, don't worry!

Not like planed by Shrinkingmage Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

David got his hands on a spellbook and want to try a new spell, to surprise his friend Sarah.

Thing don't go like he planed though.


Categories: Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4759 Read Count: 65807
[Report This] Published: March 18 2016 Updated: May 25 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 19 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prolog

interesting!
please more!



Author's Response:

There will be more. It just will take a bit of time. ^^

Property of Omega Pi by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 607]
Summary:

The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146327 Read Count: 911269
[Report This] Published: September 21 2016 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 19 2018 Title: Chapter 112: Deacon and Cady Getting Close

Please more
too much is unhealthy hehe(what if Deacon gets stuck deep in Cada womb hehe)

I'm sorry, my english is bad



Author's Response:

Too much of a good thing can be just as bad as not enough.

My Little Canary by NRawkGTS Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

The story of a man named Sirus who was in the wrong place at the wrong time and just a little too nice for his own good.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55662 Read Count: 169358
[Report This] Published: December 24 2016 Updated: March 10 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 21 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Challenge Accepted!

Please more.
very interesting story.

I'm sorry but my written English is poor



Author's Response:

Thank you for you interest.  More is on the way.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: February 18 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Her and His(tory)

Please more
great chapter



Author's Response:

More is on the way.  Thanks for the praise!

Percy's kidnapping by kingdomXhearts Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A story of a boy named percy who has a good life with nothing out of the ordinary ...until today when a girls desires begin to become his new reality.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13094 Read Count: 84158
[Report This] Published: December 27 2016 Updated: November 19 2017
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Kidnapped

starts interesting
Please more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 30 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Why me Pt.2

very interesting.
Please more.

I'm curious what will happen next.
Please carefully describe in some detail,
I could imagine.


my written English is poor



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it! i shall try my best to continue to provide chapters in as much detail as possible, whether giantess or shrunken people reading i am trying to provide a good general perspective of what that person will experience and see to the best of my ability

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Kidnapped

it was cool.
I can not wait for the next chapter
Please more.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying ^_^

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 08 2017 Title: Chapter 7: History class

great chapter
super-described everything as if I was there
Please more

Wild Ride by JTH2012 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 40]
Summary: One boy finds himself shrunken, and is taken on a journey with the aid of 4 of his female 'friends'
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13174 Read Count: 113484
[Report This] Published: October 21 2017 Updated: January 31 2018
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: November 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl

only two words
  Please more



Author's Response: Another two words Will do!

Accidental Voyage by the_potato Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A trained man becomes the first test pilot of a vessel to explore the human body. However on the way to the controlled area where the client is waiting to be explored a mix up occurs and instead is accedentally injected into a young woman. How will he manage to survive inside this woman unknown to her, with limited radio contact to outside world


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6733 Read Count: 47011
[Report This] Published: May 21 2018 Updated: November 02 2018
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please more

Shrunk By... Your Teenage Girlfriend by Lover Of All Giantesses Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

This is a Madlib i made on Writing.com.

If you want a customizable version. Click the link before

https://www.writing.com/main/madlibs/item_id/2158958-Shrunk-By-Your-Teenage-Girlfriend

 

Just a quick sexual erotic story.

 

Also be gentle considering That its adapted from a Madlib

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1523 Read Count: 11596
[Report This] Published: May 24 2018 Updated: May 24 2018
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting beginning
Please more
I'm sorry, my english is bad

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