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Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 97639
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: September 29 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Published

Excellent story buddy.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: May 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Also looking forward to the continuation of this story.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: November 11 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Greatly looking forward to when you continue this.
Later ,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: January 06 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Care and control of the reduced is a great name for a book. Interesting how Erica is using it and making sure they plan for the future. Love how she now has set mom straight. What will happen when they are all small and no one can stand in her way? It will be great when the older sister shrinks. Will Erica keep her word? Is it possible that maybe an adult female like an Aunt or teacher will enter the picture?
Well done,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Huh, never thought about the idea of Erica having a mentor.  ERICA IS BIGGEST OF ALL!

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Spaghetti War

Chapter 4 was fantastic. Love that Erica is starting to take more control. You make everything realistic. I like how you show things from the Giantess point of view and the little peoples point of view. I am really enjoying the ideas of this story. It works very well. I like the idea that Erica has 2 friends that will eventually help her out. The family will not like it but it has to be done. Was Erica joking when she called her father little man and moved her face in front of him? I think this is only the beginning of Erica getting her way and doing things her way. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. Keep up the fantastic work.

Later,

         Diesel



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I spent a lot of time trying to keep chapter 4 from just being a bunch of people whining.

When Erica made her move to intimidate her father (calling him little man, looming over him) she wasn't joking, she was more making a conscious decision to make sure that he understood that she was the boss and would accept nothing but total submission.  The time has come where she has to put her family in their place, for their own good.  Half power trip, half  tactical decision.  I assure you, as thrilling as it was she also felt super guilty.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 03 2015 Title: Erica's House

Loved Danielle's rules. Cole trying to show his freedom was great. When Erica caught him it shows that erica knows best. Love Aunt Gina. She should go with that. The little ones should show respect. Joy is fantastic. Brittany is making a big mistake. When she shrinks, I would not want to be small in front of Joy. Or would i?

Author's Response:

Thanks Diesel, glad that Joy worked out.

(English) Rétrécissement by italykeke, christiawi9 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

A young successful man got the shrinking virus, a disease his father got before he did. How will he cope up with the fact he gets weaker ? And how will act his family and friends ?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46432 Read Count: 260304
[Report This] Published: February 08 2014 Updated: April 16 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: February 10 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Another morning 2/2

Nice idea for a story. Well done. Looking forward to more. I am sure the step mother will be a pivotal character.

Keep up the good work,

                               Diesel



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. I won't spoil what's coming next but yes she is indeed a key character in this story.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

Enjoying the story very much. Will he make it to the teacher?
Thanks,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: May 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

Nice first chapter.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: May 20 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Another morning 1/2

Love that Scott answers Jade with Yes Ma'am.

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: May 20 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Scott's story

Poor Scott, oh well. Linda rules.

A Small Experience by dingbing Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

When his father brings home an advanced piece of machinery from his job to store in the attic, Kyle and his friend John can't resist the temptation of firing it up and trying it out for themselves. 


Categories: Feet, Instant Size Change, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2152 Read Count: 15677
[Report This] Published: February 20 2014 Updated: August 03 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 23 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Please continue. Great so far.

Kyra by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking.  Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199743 Read Count: 720249
[Report This] Published: March 06 2014 Updated: September 07 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 8: ... Never Go Unpunished

Love the twists and the Kyra takes charge. I also like the change to be addressed with Yes Maa'm. It shows respect. What will happen as he continues to shrink?

Nice work,

              Diesel



Author's Response:

Much appreciated, thanks :).

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 24 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Under Control

Good setup. I can hardly wait until he gets smaller. Will they run into any other women or adults?

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  There'll eventually be a couple other signficant characters, but honestly it'll be a while until they're introduced.

Soylent by Crylog Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

In a vastly over populated world where food and space are in short supply and a global corperation is pushing shrinking technology as a solution to the problems. A homeless man volenteers to be shrunk in exchange for a place to live and regular meals. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Couples , Crush, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7353 Read Count: 29508
[Report This] Published: March 19 2014 Updated: September 01 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 24 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent start. Very good setup. The Giantesses have started to train him. I like the Yes ma'am part and the Miss part in addressing them. Well done.

Trapped by Xandar357 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

What happens when a low earning university student seeking a quick and uplifting buck signs their name on the dotted line for admittance as a test subject into an undefined and mysterious four month Cosmolex research program?

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Universe: Alpha. [Involved] (See profile for details.)

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Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Giant, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8403 Read Count: 43602
[Report This] Published: April 14 2014 Updated: October 22 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: February 24 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Stage 01 Part II

Very good set up so far. Looking forward to Ms Hayes. Will there be any other giantess? Is this a product that will be used by the public? Maybe without their knowledge.
Thanks,
Diesel

A Little Contract by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Rebecca has the shrink virus and one week to decide her fate.  Can she negotiate a better a life?


Categories: Slave, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2223 Read Count: 13359
[Report This] Published: April 14 2014 Updated: April 14 2014
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: En Garde!

Nice story. Love the conversation about settting up ground rules. I am sure that it would go down this way in real life. Love the terrarium idea. That way she can check on her without getting up. Nice story. Another brilliant idea.

Looking forward to more,

                                  Diesel



Author's Response:

A gerbil cage seemed  a little extreme for this dynamic.  I could see Felicia telling herself that a terrarium was just like a little building, whereas Rebecca would see it clearly as a pet enclosure (that she has no ability to get out of).

 

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment.  I believe you left a comment on Erica's House a while back that I accidentally deleted.

Saturn Seven by squashed123 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 558601
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 15 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Just finished chapter 1. Well done with the ladies different views.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: March 02 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well I read your prologue and I must say its pretty cool. I am looking forward to reading this.
Later,
Diesel

Olympus by Uncle Funkle Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

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Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 55785
[Report This] Published: June 12 2014 Updated: February 14 2017
Reviewer: diesel Signed
Date: February 10 2017 Title: Olympus

Will the Mom find him. The chief is scary. Scary great.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.