Penname: Mr in A suit [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 26 2019
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Bio:

Just a fan of gentle giantess stories. I like romance, the chracters interactions and the development of their emotions in doing so, not just the usual sadism (of the giantess) and masochism (of the tinies).


I most enjoy stories where th mc gets shrunk and has to deal with his/her relationship with family and friends. 


Thats it. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.


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Mediation by Ecstacy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Born with a genetic defect that's caused him to shrink throughout his life, we follow the story of  3 1/2 inch  tall Tanner and his adoptive family consisting of his high achieving step-sister Ingrid and widowed step-mother Ivory as they try have functional lives.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90488 Read Count: 258686
[Report This] Published: March 01 2017 Updated: November 05 2020
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2019 Title: Chapter 30: Size Matters

I like to read in between doing other stuff, but I had to put everything on hold when I saw an update from this story. There are some good, very good stories in the site, but, I must say that your story is not just great. It has beauty. I get really scared sometimes because of the long hiatus between the updates, thinking you might just have given up on writing, but, when I see the depth you’ve managed to give your characters, I understand you have put a lot of thought in them. Either that or you are very talented. Not one member of the main cast is one dimensional.

I know it seems I am just a flatterer, but I mean every word. Thank you for writing and not abandoning this site.

About the chapter, I still ship Tanner with Ingrid as unlikely as it maybe at this point, although I will admit Gail is a very interesting character. She did with Tanner exactly what she said would do with her parents if they were small in ch. 20 (if I am not mistaken). She ended the conversation when and how she wanted because things didn’t go her way a.k.a Tanner being honest telling he had feelings for Ingrid. This foreshadows (and Tanner knows it) a lot of hardships will always come for him on an emotional level, for he will never be on equal grounds with anyone in anything aside from the intellectual and emotional dimension.

Tanner knows his reality, he is frail and powerless most of the time, but, most of all, he knows he can’t change the facts. So in this chapter he tries to instead change his own relation with himself, with his size and the sexuality that comes with it. This shows how mature he became (and how mature this story is).

Ivory on the other hand is very complex. She is right about the dangers surrounding her son and wanting to protect him from a world too big for him. But us, as the audience, instinctively feel this is wrong in some level and form . An interesting way of developing her (Ivory) arc would be for herself and her house to become a danger, a harm, for her son. Obviously I am expecting some showdown between Ingrid and Ivory, which will once again lead to many emotional revelations and growth.

I recently learned how to give five stars and your story more than deserves five stars. Thank you again and I can’t wait for the next chapters :D

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks a ton, as I mentioned in a previous review sometimes it's hard for me to read praise like that when I look at previous chapters and begin thinking of what I'd do differently. Usually not major changes, but nitpicky things like a change in dialogue, character interaction, or catching typos and formatting inconsistencies. On a more optimistic note I am very satisfied with the overall progression of the story and how it's evolved from where it first started when I only had a very broad outline of the beginning, some of the middle, how I wanted the story to end, and some general characteristics of the main trio.  With that framework in mind sometimes the difficult lies in narrowing down what I want to focus on especially when I can see something playing out in a few different scenarios.

Tanner trying to find his place in the world and come to grips with everything that comes with his size both good and bad, as you noted has been one of my favorite elements to explore. As for Ivory despite being hyper-protective of him and having a lot of justification for being so may not be best influence for Tanner.



Author's Response:

Thanks a ton, as I mentioned in a previous review sometimes it's hard for me to read praise like that when I look at previous chapters and begin thinking of what I'd do differently. Usually not major changes, but nitpicky things like a change in dialogue, character interaction, or catching typos and formatting inconsistencies. On a more optimistic note I am very satisfied with the overall progression of the story and how it's evolved from where it first started when I only had a very broad outline of the beginning, some of the middle, how I wanted the story to end, and some general characteristics of the main trio.  With that framework in mind sometimes the difficult lies in narrowing down what I want to focus on especially when I can see something playing out in a few different scenarios.

Tanner trying to find his place in the world and come to grips with everything that comes with his size both good and bad, as you noted has been one of my favorite elements to explore. As for Ivory despite being hyper-protective of him and having a lot of justification for being so may not be best influence for Tanner.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: August 10 2019 Title: Chapter 29: Hell to Pay

Love your story! It's always refreshing to see a writer that does not only focus on the fetish parts of a giantess story. I have benn reading your story for a long time, bt just recently musttered the courage to make an account and comment. I would like to thank you for this marvelous story. You have build your characters down to their psyche with craft and care.

About the future, I can't shake the idea that Ingrid has feelings for Tanner. I just find them so cute together, I can't imagine him being with any other character. As for Ivory... well she is even more scary than Marcelle kkkkk.

Can we hope to see more soon? Already added you and the story to favorites. Again, thanks for all the effort in building this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for that. Ingrid loves, cares for, and has the deepest protectiveness of Tanner, but she's pretty candid in the fact she loves him platonically. And Ivory... well she has her own slough of issues. Progress has been fairly slow with the story, and sometimes it takes me a minute to write/rewrite/plot how I want things to turn out, which is more of a struggle for some chapters than others. But, I think the next chapter will be an easier write than this one. Thanks for the review!

Summary:

Alex has had a rather strange out of place feeling lately until he has a run-in with his socially awkward childhood friend. Hidden pain reveals itself between them as they discover they might not just like each other as friends.†



Hope you enjoy!

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Muscle, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23870 Read Count: 51148
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: August 02 2019
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: August 03 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Perplexed Feelings

How did I not found this story before? I like the romance kind of story. Gentle with some action and I loved how you took your time build up Alex character and relationships. And loved even more when he run to embrace Barrie. Also curious about Lacey and how this love triangle will play out.

One question: the story is marked as a shrinking story (to micro size). Will Alex shrink? Would really like to see that happening :DD

Please, don't abanddon this story! It's really good! Thank you for updating and please keep it going. Also, sorry for any mispealing. Although fluent, english is not my primary language.

Summary:

When Chris’s parents go out of town for a whole week during his summer vacation, they leave him in the charge of an unwelcome babysitter, and things go from bad to worse when this much abhorred sitter hatches a plan to have some fun with him...much to Chris’s dismay.

This story is based on an original idea from aow4321 on Writing.com, to whom I give full credit for the creation of most of the characters involved therein.

700K reads and still going! Thank you ALL for your feedback and suggestions that have made this story possible! If you like what you read, leave a review; if certain chapters are your favorites, tell me why. Don’t forget to add me to your favorites so you’ll know when I post more stories, and if you have any commission requests, feel free to shoot me an email! Thank you all for your continued support! 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 288464 Read Count: 703979
[Report This] Published: February 20 2018 Updated: July 09 2020
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: August 30 2019 Title: Chapter 52: Alternate Chapter 49 ó What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?

It's always good to see an update from you. One, because your story is amazing. Two, because I love to do reviews on stories and characters I like.

I am not gonna lie. I was hoping for a main story chapter, BUT, this extra staring miss Carlson is very good and got me thinking: man, Chris has a harem of giantess kkkkkkkkkkkk. Rachel, miss Carlson, Shannon and Sue Ann kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.

Tell me, do you have a favorite character? If yes, is it miss Carlson? For me I think you already know, as I love shipping Rachel and Chris XDD

As for the future, I love your long chapters, but, if it would mean you could update more frequently, I wouldn't mind shorter chapters. Curiosity is killing me... crossing my fingers to see some aware interaction betwen a giga Rachel and Chris kkkk (maybe the growth formula has some side effect on the users mind, like magnifing repressed wishes and emotions together with the size... yep there goes my imagination again).

As always, thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please, keep up the good work :)

 



Author's Response: Iím always happy to see everyoneís reviews; makes all the hard work worth it. Iím not sure I have a favorite character, but itís probably between Rachel and Sue Ann. I know my chapters tend to be long, but I have so many details to fit in, especially during the interactions between tinies and the giantesses, that itís hard to write short chapters while still keeping the good parts (this is erotica after all). I think I can certainly fit a little interaction between a playful Rachel and small Chris in the next chapter, so keep an eye out.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2019 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 55

And the final showdown of the best giantess harem of the site draws near! XDDD

Shannon is, as I said, a very complex villain and I really like her character. Yes, she does bad things and doesn’t hesitate to hurt others if it means having her way. BUT, isn’t that also true for other characters like Mrs. Carlson? (I am thinking about that extra chapter she finds Chris… and it just occurred to me, she would end up competing with her daughter for Chris wouldn’t she?? KKKKKKKKK This story gets my gears running with every chapter), but when it comes to Chris, she is like the other girls and don’t want to put him in harms ways.

'Harms ways', I might be way off, but I think that is the key for the end. So far lucky has been on little Chris side and he avoided any serious injure, but, as we draw near the climax of the story, something unexpected is bound to happen, an accident, and even Shannon can’t predict the consequences. With everyone together in this kind of mayhem, the chances of danger for Chris rise 120% (It’s pure math and numbers don’t lie. Believe me kk).  

And sweet Sue Ann… I imagine she and Rachel are pretty upset right now, and if something were to happen to Chris, they would be really, really pissed off. Rachel I think is too young for what I am imagining, she would be devastated by the situation, but lost. Sue Ann is more mature and that’s the point I want to make: she is sweet and gentle, but I would love to see her lose composure and be angry, hating Shannon for everything she did. Maybe even Sue Ann might be surprised with how much she carried for our beloved protagonist… ;) 

Things might go two ways:

Sue Ann gets to Chris house and the fight begins. Shannon tries to splash Sue Ann with the shrinking formula, but Sue Ann already expected that. She is younger and stronger so she holds Shannon hand and splash her with the formula, not knowing Chris and Ray are also trapped within the woman body and gets shrunk even more.

The two manage to scape their prison, trying to avoid getting the attention of the now 1 inch tall (but still gigantic in there perspective) Shannon. As for Sue Ann, she is now far to huge for Chris to even distinguish her face traits; She steeps on him, but even so he is luck for he realizes he is right in the gap of her big toe. Ray is not so luck and when Mrs. Carlson come to see what is all that fuss, hears a plop noise. “Ugh, did I just step on a bug?” she asks rising her feet, revealing a pint-size red stain on her sole.

That’s exactly when Rachel enters the scene after making sure Chris wasn’t in Sue Ann apartment and snaps. She (and Sue Ann) think that Chris got crushed and is beyond herself. Mrs. Carlson tries to understand what is happening and asks Rachel how Shannon is so little, but she just scream for her mother to “SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU MURDER!!”, as she strides towards Shannon to start torturing the main responsible for killing her best friend. Meanwhile, Chris tries to get Sue Ann attention and cause even a tickle at her feet, but he is far too small, maybe forever now. Moreover, Sue Ann is in shock, crying like a child, blaming herself for everything.

You can switch roles and Chris will have to escalate Rachel sandals and get more intimate than he ever did with his best friend and now girlfriend foot. Oh God, I can’t wait to see what it really will be like!

If they grow, I would love to see a fight between a GodSue Ann versus ‘Shannonzilla’ while a most confused Mrs. Carlson tries to not destroy everything in the search of her daughter or she might think its all part of a wet dream and finally fulfill some of her fantasies with Chris (who Sue Ann still believes she crushed to death) all in front of Rachel.

Rachel, desperate to save Chris from her own mother, enters the house and finds Ray, who makes a full perfect growth formula for her. Ray gets back to normal, but Rachel drinks the rest of the formula. Ray screams for her not to, but she isn’t going to listen and is too late anyway. She grows but gets much more big than the other 3, who seem mere action figures from her perspective.

Rachel puts an end to the fight but is very aroused by the experience. She is, after all, an adolescent who now doesn’t have to answer to anyone. She squeeze her mother, demanding to have Chris who is promptly given to her. She has a power trip thinking about the videos and what she saw her mother doing and wants to play with Chris forever. Out of character? Maybe. Maybe its a side effect of ingesting so much growth formula. She just stops when Chris stops moving and seems to not be breathing. Ray saves the boy with his Deus Ex Machina formula and brings everyone back to normal.

What about the destruction of the city and the deaths? Well, a 300ft giantess is too surreal to believe, so people just assume all was caused by an unknown mass hysteria or the govern covers everything up, taking Ray, Shannon into custody. After some time, life gets back on tracks. Rachel and Sue Ann still blame themselves for everything, but a now forever shrunk Chris comforts both and assures the guilty falls entirely with Shannon.

I know I am the one who suggested the growth possibility. It’s just that, after giving more thought, I guess things would just get messy, and this has always been a story about shrinking. Just to be clear: I will definitely love either of the two ways! Hope some of my ideas come in handy when writing the final showdown.

Don’t care about Norem enough to think about anything for her. Sorry.

Now, for some questions: You think you will be able finish the story before new year? After finishing this one, you already have plans for other stories? Maybe in the same universe? You write other stories together with this one?Sorry for the many questions. I am just curious.

If you ever want to discuss about some story you are writing for the site and needs help, just send me a message (I never sent one, don’t even know if the site has the feature for private messages, but if it has, you can send me anytime kkk). My writing is nowhere near the quality of yours, but sometimes only talking helps to get new ideas.

Thank you, not only for the story, but also for being such a nice guy when answering all the reviews. Five stars for you! A lot of people obviously love your characters, me included, so you are a big inspiration :D Let’s go for the final ride!!



Author's Response: Well, you certainly have some interesting ideas. I had given some thought about other characters shrinking, and Chris shrinking into the micro-verse....and someone getting squished.

To answer your other questions: I am really hoping I can finish this story, and the last alternate chapter, before the year is out, and yes, I do have plans for many other stories that Iíd like to start working on: some long, some short.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2019 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 57

“fatal consequences”?? God! What a talent you have for cliffhangers!!  I will cry a lot if Chris ends up killed by Rachel… and so will herself I think. More than that, at that size and the lack of air, he will certainly die if someone doesn’t find him and give the antidote! Congrats on your accurate description of Chris situation as a micro. I saw in a video that if shrinking was possible, the person wouldn’t  be heard and would have a hard time breathing, eventually losing conscious and dying.

Can’t wait to see how Rachel will look like for him and her reactions when she realizes everything… grantted Chris has been stepped before, but, now everything human-sized must be pure torture for him – the smell, the sound of the voice… – and he is already weak…

About the chapter, the interaction between Chris and Sue Ann is simply marvelous, the way you describe the pleasure she felt of having Chris inside her… and the way she recognizes that Chris sacrificed his own safety for her sake… oh yeah. She might have said that she wasn’t interested in him when they were in her house… but I wonder about now. Have I ever said the triangle is my favorite geometric form? XDDD

Chris is obviously outside after Mrs. Carlson cleaned her left foot… Just, please, don’t make Noren get there before Rachel…

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My fan theory for the next chapter:

My guess is that Rachel will get there first, steps on micro Chris, trapping him, but won’t find Sue Ann, who is unconscious. She picks Shannon purse. Then Nooren gets there and asks what is going on. Rachel tries to lie her way out of the conversation. Noren sits on the chair and tell Rachel about all the strange things that are happening around Chris, her weird “dream” of him being little… Rachel opens up, desperate for any help finding Chris and Sue Ann. That’s when Noren fell something odd at her toes, as if someone was smacking her big toe… It’s Sue Ann, and she breaks the news Chris is microscopic. Both giantess worried, sit on the couch and spread their toes for Sue Ann inspect… She find the tiny speck right in the middle of Rachel’s ball… she has to pell him out of all the dirty and sweat… he doesn’t show any sign of life… they try the antidote, but that only grow him back a few inches, barely enough for him to be heard again… still, no reaction.

As for Rachel’s reaction to all that… meanwhile, Shannon tastes hell stuck beneath Mrs. Carlson.

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Please, almighty author, bless us with the next (possible final) chapter!!

PS. Sorry for any mistakes in the text. Blame the excitement XDDD

 



Author's Response: First off, I wasnít initially planning on ending on a cliffhanger, the chapter just got a bit too long.

Secondly, Iíve stated in other reviews that I like to keep my stories as accurate and believable as possible....relatively speaking, of course. There have been requests to have Chris going to micro size, but that posed some speculation on what would really happen. Iíve also seen videos on YouTube saying why shrinking would be impossible, or what would happen if something really could shrink, so I added those aspects in.
To expand on that, a lot of story elements in these last two chapters actually came last minute: I always was planning on having Shannon shrink, but Iíve been debating on whether Sue Ann would shrink too. I also debated on Chris becoming microscopic. I ultimately decided on having everyone shrink, and Chris making a heroic leap to stop Shannon from shrinking Sue Ann helped blend resolve all the issues on how exactly to do it. And yes, it does pose an interesting thought as to how Sue Ann feels about him now.

As far as your fan theory, youíll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2019 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 59

Wrapped up my two reviews into one. Sorry for the mess :(  I need to organize my thoughts better before writing.

I am conflicted. On one side, I am really happy to see Chris, Rachel And Sue Ann adventure conclusion with a happy ending.  On the other side, I am sad because it ended.  Your writing was amazing, beginning to end.   Even when I thought you had made mistake, like when you had Chris found by Sue Ann first instead of Rachel, you turned the tables on me and made me like character I wasn't all that invested at first. You seemed worried about the micro part since it was your first time, but your descriptions once again were the best.

So, now that we have reached the end, I must thank you once again for all the efforts I know you must have put into creating these characters and their story. I have nothing to add. If you wait eagerly for the epilogue and Hope for a spinoff or a continuation. Who knows? Maybe in a spinoff we will get to see a showdown between a Rachel and Sue-zilla vs Kaijuu Shannon.

Even better: a soinnoff where Sue Ann also fell in love with Chris after he saves her from Shannon. Shannon shrinks and remains in Sue Ann care. When Sue Ann is alone, Shannon thinks that Ray might have keept some formula on his house. She convinces Sue Ann to bring her back to normal and she actually get back to normal. What she doesn't expect is for Sue Ann to spill most of the formula on herself too.

Sue Ann grows and grows a mile high, not only in size but in her craving for Chris too. She will not stand for Rachel keeping her little hero all to herself! Chris is her hero! Her knight in shining armor. And we have a showdown Rachel vs. maddly in love Sue Ann.

You could also make a series of spinnoffs with each girl growing... 

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. That 2020 may bring inspiration for the both of us and everyone else who wants to write their own stories.

PS. Seems I am unable to write a review for this story without also writing a fanfic at the same time kkkkkkkkkk



Author's Response: Just a guess, but I think youíre going to enjoy the epilogue and alternate chapter. I had thought about Rachel finding Chris, which is what I explored in her alternate chapter (which I thought turned out well), but I really wanted Sue Ann to show up in the second half of the story, and I figured it made a little more sense.
As for the alternate chapter, Iím certainly considering having more than one giantess fighting each other, but Iím still up in the air. Iíve still got some time to consider all my options, so I think carefully.

Thank you for all your reviews and suggestions. Iím glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: June 26 2019 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 47

Just wanted to thank you for all your work in building an actual story, with such wonderful cast of characters. I must say you are very talented, knowing how to use the fetish parts without losing sight of the development of your characters and the plot. Once again, thank you. Hoping to see Rachel and cia. strugling to protect and even interact with a very tiny Chris in a giantess world XDD. 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the words of encouragement.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: June 26 2019 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 47

Also hoping for a happy end for Chris. A happy end does not mean the he has to become normal again. Just an idea: his tiny form could be a gateway for him to develop his relationship with Rachel. Maybe a first love kind of thing? I thint it would be a good counterpart for Shannon fixation on the mc.

 

Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent, english is not my primary language.



Author's Response: All I can say is that all of the conflicts will eventually be resolved in the end, but I wonít give any more details than that.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25 2019 Title: Chapter 63: Epilogue

You were absolutely right. I loved the epilogue. Rachel and Chris made sense in the universe of the series finale, but, this epilogue with Chris and Sue Ann was just soooo sweet! I know you won't do a continuation now, but I sure hope to see it some day.

Thanks for everything. You are in my favorites.



Author's Response: Well, Iím glad you liked it. I thought an ending where Chris and Sue Ann hook up in the future could be really sweet as well, especially making his childhood dream come true. If I ever decide to revisit the story, I might add another alternate chapter catch, or I might pick things up in the future with an older Chris, Rachel, and Sue Ann.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: November 01 2019 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 54

I find Shannon to be a most intriguing character. She is clearly evil, manipulative, a maniac even. But she also has moments where she genuinely seems to care for Chris and truly want and fantasize with him loving her. This chapter is one of these chapters that highlight her obsession, and it got me curious about what would be her reaction if Chris actually kicked the bucket or got really hurt or in trouble.

So Sue Ann is knocked out for the time being. Therefore,  the only other options to save Chris are Rachel and her mother… interesting. Let’s see how things play out. I really thought Chris would go micro again in this chapter kkkkkkkkkk

I fell you are updating faster and I thank you for your hard work. I am Dying to see how you will wrap up this story.

Please, keep up the awesome work! See you next time :)

 



Author's Response: I picture Shannon as the girl that youíd love to be with: attractive, well-built, a little chunkyóand would probably fall for, if she werenít such a bitch! She knows what she wants and is willing to use her body to get it. Basically, someone youíd love to hate.

Suanne is incapacitated, but youíre right: theyíre still Rachel, Janet Carson, and also Noreen, so thereís still hope.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: November 01 2019 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 54

Just a quick addition to my last comment: Shannon is walking around full of chemicals and something is bound to happen. Maybe she will accidentally shrink down herself while having Chris on her body (or protagonist will end up in micro-verse allright XDD) or someone will end up growing… just some ideas. Oh I can’t wait to see!

 



Author's Response: Oh, something is definitely bound to happen, and Iím excited for you to see!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2019 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 58

So... guess Chris is forever micro? I know I should be sad for him and I will be if he dies… but, at the same time I can’t help envying this boy unique experience a little kkk

For the ones that wish for a micro Chris x Giga Rachel moment like me, I wouldn’t worry too much. Remember how Mrs. Carlson exited by the backdoor on last chapter? And she cleaned some dust from her left foot (the same she stepped on Chris)? And how Rachel used the same backdoor to enter the house now? Yeah, I think the next chapter will be just… GIGANTIC 😉

I was surprised Sue Ann was so eager to grow back. I thought she would want to search for Chris since she was the only one capable of spotting him now. Oh well, not that I am complaining that we now have two goodsess in the room…

I am happy you dropped this short chapter and glad Noren hasn’t appeared. Not that you can’t use her. Maybe Mrs. Carlson can call out to Noren, telling her that no one is at the Martins house right now. Both ladies stop to talk while giving Shannon the foot hell she sought herself.

Will be visiting this site as much as I can until Christmas. Will also try to think something for the extra chapter about Shannon. Thank you for your hard work. I will be orphaned when this story reach the end T_T, but I also can’t wait for it. I am full of contradictions. Who isn't? kkkkk



Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter with be the aftermath of everything. I know exactly whatís going to happen, but getting everything to mesh and intermingle correctly is what Iím working on. I know some readers would have liked Sue Ann to stay small for a while, but being shrunk wasnít exactly something she wanted to endure a lot of. Yes, it would have been easier for her to see Chris at that size, but where was she supposed to start looking, and how long do you think it would take to look everywhere at that size. Besides, she knows Chris isnít doing well at his micro size, and knows he needs to be restored soon, so the tracker was her best and quickest option of locating him.

Now, bear in mind that this is my first foray into the micro interactions, so forgive me if itís not up to snuff. I will do my best!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: October 16 2019 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 53

I sense a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. And you did a great job showcasing how prompt Rachel is to swing moods in these last two chapters. First she is worried and sad for what happened to Chris, than she is playful and happy but also clueless about how dangerous she can be to him and also gets angry if someone calls her out. Question: what would have happened if an authority figure (Sue Ann) wasn't around? I think she would eventually get carried away and hurt Chris unnintentionaly. Can't wait to see more of this love story XDD

 

Speaking of Sue Ann, I must say I wasn't all that invested in her character, but you made it impossible not to like her. She is the only character so far to take care of Chris without asking or getting anything in exchange. She just want to help someone she trully cares about. It's just sweet. And the fact she does not display any sexual desire towards Chris is very good for his own development in the story, because he has to step up, take the lead and open up to her.

 

You have handled the story extremely well so far. And what a cliffhanger!! Now I am gonna update daily waiting for the next chapter! Hope you are happy!! XDD

 

But, seriously, It seems we have entered the final arc of Chris, Shannon, Rachel and Sue Ann tale. Thank you. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

 



Author's Response: I really wanted to explore Rachelís character and how she reacts to Chrisís situation in these past two chapters, along with how her and Chrisís feelings for one another have evolved. Even though I wanted her feelings towards Chris to grow, I still wanted her character to act realistically, kind of how I view her overall character as a close best friend would: somewhat teasingly and playfully. But through it all, she cares about Chris and wouldnít willfully hurt him, at least not on purpose anyway. I actually like the playful giantess interactions, and wanted Rachel to play the playful-yet-loving giantess, as opposed to Shannonís playful dominance.

I knew I wanted Sue Ann to come into the story in the second act, and wanted her character to be the responsible caring adult. I was trying to endear her to the readers so that you all get a sense of why Chris likes her so much, and why heís so broken-hearted when she clarifies her feelings, while leaving just a glimmer of hope: ďMaybe in the future...Ē

Itís true that things are starting to wrap up, but thereís still lots of good parts and conflict resolution left, so check back at the end of the month.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2019 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 56

Well, well, well... Shannon tasting of her own venom. She maybe smaller than Sue Ann, but who am I kidding? We just care that Chris is back to micro size! :DD And with Ray out of the picture, no one can ever bring him back to normal.

I could never imagine this story ending anywhere else other than Chris house. The story started there and it’s the place everything will end. As for the fighting sequence, I love how clever you are with your characters. Sue Ann believing to be leading Shannon into a trap, Shannon fooling her rival and you using this opportunity to get both barefoot and our hero on the floor ;)

And we have one dead tiny. I am not surprised. Since the beginning Ray seemed disposable to me, just an instrument to get the story to the next phase. He died by the foot of the woman he loved. Pretty  poetic for such a pathetic dude.

I think the showdown will continue between Norem (who will take her friend side under the condition of having access to the shrinking formula) vs. Mrs. Carlson (who will take Sue Ann side). Rachel, being the rebel she is, disobey Sue Ann instructions and hurry to the scene just to find everyone has ended up shrunk, even her mother. But, more importantly, Chris is nowhere to be found. With all the chaos, the boy was forgotten… Sue Ann remembers seeing Chris on Shannon face before she shrunk….. oh no….. Everyone rise their feet and check the sole… there is a little red stain on Shannon and Sue Ann soles… Yeah, I love imagining a devastated Sue Ann and an enraged Rachel without anyone to stop her.

Wait, scratch all that. I just realized Sue Ann will be naked on the next chapter! God! It’s half of the dream of chapter 53 coming true. Sue Ann is now a naked giantess from Chris perspective! Something tells me Rachel will not be happy and will crush the competition kkkkkkkkk

Need…to know… what… will happen next! Also, can’t thank you enough for the quick updates. Don’t know why, but I feel you are going to drop the last chapter on December 25 and be like “merry Christmas everyone” huehuehue

 



Author's Response: Iíve known that there would be an eventual showdown between Shannon and Sue Ann for some time now, and I also knew the confrontation would happen at Chrisís house just before Shannon leaves, I just hadnít worked out all the details up until now. I ultimately decided on having BOTH Shannon and Sue Ann shrinking when Shannon tries to shrink her, and Iíd wrestled with the idea of a ďmicro ChrisĒ as well.

I obviously needed to have some kind of giantess interaction (this is a fetishís story after all) and I figured Chris dodging two sets of bare feet while the giant women fought overhead would be perfect here, I just needed to get them barefoot first.

Itís true that Ray is a means to an end, and that his death is somewhat poetic, and quite ironic; in actuality, his character served several purposes: I wanted a somewhat believable origin for the shrinking potionóitís not something that just comes in the mail. I also wanted to show how Shannon uses the men around her. Then, I knew that I wanted him to end up squished, and that I wanted Shannon to be the one to do it; it demonstrates the realistic dangers of someone being shrunk. Rayís death also sets up how the story ultimately ends, but thatís all Iíll say for now.

While I AM planning on a chapter for Christmas, Iím hoping to finish the story before then.🤞Actually, Iíve been a a writing spree as of late, probably since Iím so close to the end, so expect the next chapters to be posted about every week or so.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: August 05 2019 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 49

All right... I like your writing and how you discribe the scenes and Chris perils a lot. But, I am not gonna lie, it's very frustrating that after months of waiting, he just waltz out of the Carlsons house without being noticed when everything worked in that direction - the dog and Rachel dreams. Chris was noticed before and with less than half the effort we saw in this arc. Moreover, even if he gets noticed now by Su Ann, it will not be the same, because I (and probably others) have waited in suspence for the characters to grow (no pun intended kkkkk) as to move the plot and that didn't happen. This chapter was anti-climatic.

That said, in past comments you pointed the importance of Rachel and her mother for the plot as well as Chris development. So, I will trust you know where the story is going.

Do you think the story will end this year? Please, don't get demotivated. Keep up the good work and thank you for all the effort you put in describing the scenes.



Author's Response: I know things are getting long in the tooth, and I do apologize for that. I guess I just had so many encounters that I wanted to put into this story, that I sacrificed the plot to do so. This project has been a learning experience in many ways, and moving forward, my stories wonít be written like this anymore: I prefer to have the main character be noticed at least a good portion of the time. I think the biggest problem now is having so little time to write over the past several months, but Iím back to writing a bit more often now.

As far as the story goes, this chapter was supposed to be a major turning point in the story, but it got to be so long that I felt I had to break it up. Iím getting SO close to the end that I hope the number of chapters left is limited, but we have just a little further to go. Thanks for reading, and check back at the end of the week for more.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: September 30 2019 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 52

Chris and Rachel fun time fells lighthearted and natural as it should be. Overall, a great interaction chapter. Both are starting to admit there feelings and Rachel seems honnestly elated to find out Chris likes her feet. I can only pray that someday I will write scenes as good as you do.

I would say the only sad thing is that Chris is growing again, but it's obvious things aren't going to be that simple for him, especially now that Rachel and Sue Ann are finally taking a more central role in the story.

Thank you for the chapter! Can't wait to see how Chris and Rachel will end up when the story reaches the climax XDD

 



Author's Response: I knew that I wanted Chris and Rachelís relationship to blossom in this chapter, and for everyone to see her innocence, but I also wanted to add a little playful interaction between Rachel and Chris, just to emphasize that the ENTIRE dynamic between them hasnít completely changed: Rachelís happy-go-lucky, tomboyish nature still comes through, which means that sheíd still tease him about the whole ordeal.

Itís true that Chris is growing again, but it wonít be much. Thereís still a lot I want to happen before...Oops, canít spoil the ending. Letís just say Iím not done with him yet.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: September 13 2019 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 51

Thank you for the quick update. I love gentle giantess and this last chapter was perfect in all ways possible, not only highlighting Sue Ann relation with Chris, but also Chris reserves in revealing himself to Rachel. Let me elaborate.

Until now Chris had been desperate to get help doesn't matter from whom. But now that he got Sue Ann, he was reluctant to reveal himself to Rachel and even stated he prefered to be found by Sue Ann. I can think of a couple of reasons for that. Up until now we have yet to see direct interaction between the giantess and Chris, aside from Shannon, now we will be able to see Chris dynamic with other characters.

It's preety obvious that Rachel loves Chris deeply, and Chris also has feelings for her, that being the first reason he didn't wanted to be seeing by her (he is embarassed). BUT, although I don't think she would ever do anything to hurt him on porpuse, Chris knows how mischievous Rachel really is, he knows her true self and knows she will want to have fun with him once he is found out.

 I would emphasize the mischievous part. He is the most important person for her besides her family, and now she can have him in the palm of her hand (or the sole of her foot kkkkkkk), maybe that will get to her head and Chris knows it. Maybe she will even get jealous of Chris preference for Sue Ann.

Then there is Sue Ann, who I was surprised to say "the feeling’s mutual" and even blush. As I said, Chris built quite the giantess harem for him kkkkkkk. There are many ways the story can go now. The way I see it, we will have some character development as Sue Ann and Rachel are now alone with a inch tall Chris. 

Another idea (fell free to use it): Sue Ann has to leave Chris and Rachel alone for whatever reason. Rachel takes this chance to have some fun with Chris, that doesn't like much as he still traumatized from the recent events, but what can he do against her? He eventually cries and shouts he prefers Sue Ann to take care of him triggering Rachel jealousy.

At this moment, knowing Sue Ann was out and thinking no one is home, Shannon breaks into the place with many formulas in hand (as she knows the effects must be wearing off). She is startled by Rachel and ends up spilling all the mixed formulas at Rachel and Chris, creating a growth formula by accident. Chris is back to normal, but his jealous friend is now more than a 100 meters tall and growing... and she is out to play with Chris and squish Shannon and Sue Ann. 

 As I said, just another idea. I know it's nearly impossible for things to happen as I described, but I hope it helps in the creative process. Can't wait for the next chapter! As always, thank you for all the effort and care put into writing this story. You are amazing!

 



Author's Response: First off, thank you for being such an avid reader. I always enjoy reading and responding to all my reviews.
Chris, indeed, is apprehensive and embarrassed about Rachel seeing him in his current state. He cares and has feelings for her, but he knows her teasing and playful nature all too well. Weíll just have to wait and see how she reacts. I CAN say that there will certainly be some character development with Sue Ann AND Rachel in the next chapter, but thatís all Iíll say for now.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: September 13 2019 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 51

I read some comments and realized I forgot an important piece of information: Shannon wants Chris to be tiny forever. I was foccusing on the growth possibility, but this is also very interesting now that Rachel is aware of Chris situation.

As I said, Rachel will never do something to hurt Chris BUT she might enjoy having him tiny. That way he can always be with her. As we can see a love triangle or square taking form, Shannon might take advantage of Rachel desire and innocence to get to Chris.

Just an addition I wanted to do to my last review after reading the most recent comments and responses. If Chris get stuck tiny forever, I hope he stays an inch or half an inch tall. This way the giantess stay very big but he isn't microscopic.

 

Again, thanks for the story and also for always replying to the comments.



Author's Response: Well, I think youíll enjoy where the story heads from here, and you may be surprised by how it ends.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
Date: October 01 2019 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 52

I just saw this is categorized as a completed story. It's a mistake isn't it?? Or are you working on a part 2??



Author's Response: I just saw it. Yes, that was a mistake. Iíve fixed it. Thank you.