Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed
November 15 2019
Chapter 58: Chapter 55
And the final showdown of the best giantess harem of the site draws near! XDDD
Shannon is, as I said, a very complex villain and I really like her character. Yes, she does bad things and doesn’t hesitate to hurt others if it means having her way. BUT, isn’t that also true for other characters like Mrs. Carlson? (I am thinking about that extra chapter she finds Chris… and it just occurred to me, she would end up competing with her daughter for Chris wouldn’t she?? KKKKKKKKK This story gets my gears running with every chapter), but when it comes to Chris, she is like the other girls and don’t want to put him in harms ways.
'Harms ways', I might be way off, but I think that is the key for the end. So far lucky has been on little Chris side and he avoided any serious injure, but, as we draw near the climax of the story, something unexpected is bound to happen, an accident, and even Shannon can’t predict the consequences. With everyone together in this kind of mayhem, the chances of danger for Chris rise 120% (It’s pure math and numbers don’t lie. Believe me kk).
And sweet Sue Ann… I imagine she and Rachel are pretty upset right now, and if something were to happen to Chris, they would be really, really pissed off. Rachel I think is too young for what I am imagining, she would be devastated by the situation, but lost. Sue Ann is more mature and that’s the point I want to make: she is sweet and gentle, but I would love to see her lose composure and be angry, hating Shannon for everything she did. Maybe even Sue Ann might be surprised with how much she carried for our beloved protagonist… ;)
Things might go two ways:
Sue Ann gets to Chris house and the fight begins. Shannon tries to splash Sue Ann with the shrinking formula, but Sue Ann already expected that. She is younger and stronger so she holds Shannon hand and splash her with the formula, not knowing Chris and Ray are also trapped within the woman body and gets shrunk even more.
The two manage to scape their prison, trying to avoid getting the attention of the now 1 inch tall (but still gigantic in there perspective) Shannon. As for Sue Ann, she is now far to huge for Chris to even distinguish her face traits; She steeps on him, but even so he is luck for he realizes he is right in the gap of her big toe. Ray is not so luck and when Mrs. Carlson come to see what is all that fuss, hears a plop noise. “Ugh, did I just step on a bug?” she asks rising her feet, revealing a pint-size red stain on her sole.
That’s exactly when Rachel enters the scene after making sure Chris wasn’t in Sue Ann apartment and snaps. She (and Sue Ann) think that Chris got crushed and is beyond herself. Mrs. Carlson tries to understand what is happening and asks Rachel how Shannon is so little, but she just scream for her mother to “SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU MURDER!!”, as she strides towards Shannon to start torturing the main responsible for killing her best friend. Meanwhile, Chris tries to get Sue Ann attention and cause even a tickle at her feet, but he is far too small, maybe forever now. Moreover, Sue Ann is in shock, crying like a child, blaming herself for everything.
You can switch roles and Chris will have to escalate Rachel sandals and get more intimate than he ever did with his best friend and now girlfriend foot. Oh God, I can’t wait to see what it really will be like!
If they grow, I would love to see a fight between a GodSue Ann versus ‘Shannonzilla’ while a most confused Mrs. Carlson tries to not destroy everything in the search of her daughter or she might think its all part of a wet dream and finally fulfill some of her fantasies with Chris (who Sue Ann still believes she crushed to death) all in front of Rachel.
Rachel, desperate to save Chris from her own mother, enters the house and finds Ray, who makes a full perfect growth formula for her. Ray gets back to normal, but Rachel drinks the rest of the formula. Ray screams for her not to, but she isn’t going to listen and is too late anyway. She grows but gets much more big than the other 3, who seem mere action figures from her perspective.
Rachel puts an end to the fight but is very aroused by the experience. She is, after all, an adolescent who now doesn’t have to answer to anyone. She squeeze her mother, demanding to have Chris who is promptly given to her. She has a power trip thinking about the videos and what she saw her mother doing and wants to play with Chris forever. Out of character? Maybe. Maybe its a side effect of ingesting so much growth formula. She just stops when Chris stops moving and seems to not be breathing. Ray saves the boy with his Deus Ex Machina formula and brings everyone back to normal.
What about the destruction of the city and the deaths? Well, a 300ft giantess is too surreal to believe, so people just assume all was caused by an unknown mass hysteria or the govern covers everything up, taking Ray, Shannon into custody. After some time, life gets back on tracks. Rachel and Sue Ann still blame themselves for everything, but a now forever shrunk Chris comforts both and assures the guilty falls entirely with Shannon.
I know I am the one who suggested the growth possibility. It’s just that, after giving more thought, I guess things would just get messy, and this has always been a story about shrinking. Just to be clear: I will definitely love either of the two ways! Hope some of my ideas come in handy when writing the final showdown.
Don’t care about Norem enough to think about anything for her. Sorry.
Now, for some questions: You think you will be able finish the story before new year? After finishing this one, you already have plans for other stories? Maybe in the same universe? You write other stories together with this one?Sorry for the many questions. I am just curious.
If you ever want to discuss about some story you are writing for the site and needs help, just send me a message (I never sent one, don’t even know if the site has the feature for private messages, but if it has, you can send me anytime kkk). My writing is nowhere near the quality of yours, but sometimes only talking helps to get new ideas.
Thank you, not only for the story, but also for being such a nice guy when answering all the reviews. Five stars for you! A lot of people obviously love your characters, me included, so you are a big inspiration :D Let’s go for the final ride!!Author's Response: Well, you certainly have some interesting ideas. I had given some thought about other characters shrinking, and Chris shrinking into the micro-verse....and someone getting squished.
To answer your other questions: I am really hoping I can finish this story, and the last alternate chapter, before the year is out, and yes, I do have plans for many other stories that Iíd like to start working on: some long, some short.