Reading up to chapter 3, I'd have to say I do enjoy the concept. It's pretty rare to see intimate size relationships from such a massive size difference. At least on Giantessworld, anyway. The size comparing is also really nice.

I'd say the most distracting thing about the writing itself is the random capitalization of words, and, limited to chapter 3 and mentioned in the footnotes already, switching the point of views, especially 2nd person being really odd.

For example, in "I Lower my Foot down, every so Slightly on them," there's really no reason for any of the capitalization there save for "I". Or how military and bug are treated as proper nouns every time they're used, when they aren't a specific person, place or thing, just being common nouns—generalizations—for people.

Good luck.

Author's Response:

Grammar is a weak point of mine, I’m probably going to do a re run at some point where I redo some of it. Stuff like capitalisation occurs for some reason when I switch from the original place where I write to this site for some unknown reason. But I definitely should correct that more often. Thanks for the review.

Angsty hate-not hate sex. Nice.