Oh man when I saw this on the main page, my heart fucking stopped. I had to read a few of the previous chapters to remember what the hell is going on. I came to terms that this story was never going to come back, but here it is years later and we finally get an update and it may have taken 5 fucking years but abbey finally got her height back holy shit. Still, it's really sad that Sterben Klein isn't working with you on this but I guess this is better than the alternative. None the less this was a great chapter, you really nailed how the characters talk and interacted with one another, overall, I couldn’t really tell the difference between this and previous chapters. I feel ungrateful for asking for this even though you didn’t even have to finish this story but I really hope you don’t rush this story to the finish line. But I trust you and your writing skills to do this story justice. Thank you for picking it back up. 

P.S. I really hope Sterben Klein is doing well where ever they are

It took me about two days read all the major/minor stuff from you and notsirk and it has been a wild fucking ride my man. This shit is too good to be free my god, good job on this story and keep up the good work. 

ps I read The subjugation of rambrandt logan and was wondering if that story is in the same universe as this one cause the minors there have alot more rights that in this story so i figured it might just me sometime in the future.

Waid seems alot more crafty than shannon seesm to believe and I cant help but believe that this debate is gonna go pretty bad for shannon and that thing about a hive mind of minors is pretty interesting, it has me wondering what a minor can truly do with the bond if they could explore its full potential.

Definetly going be keeping an eye out for your next work if its as wonderfull as this and your other works. That goes doubly so if its a continuation of this story.

wow first animal crossing the doom and now this

this is the best day of my life

My god man this is phenomenal. Very few stories on this site and in general make me feel this level of anticipation for each new chapter. Re-reading previous chapters makes me feel that Rachel and Audrey derserve to feel this guilt and so much more for what they have done, that being said I dont think they can go back to the way that things were before the incident, but Caleb is smart and he has a big heart I dont think this will completely destroy him so I hope that they can all get some closure, and Caleb be recognise as the hero he is. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.

oh wow, had a tab open to your account and didnt realize you added a new story, its nice to these characters again even if its just one chapter.

I think I discovered a new fetish of mine with that hex maniac

quick question tho, do you plan on using and of the girls from pokemon sword and shield?

This chapter was really nice. Rylee's affection for her trainer was really cute. I also like the idea that men have to rely on women for protection. I didn't see a "to be continued" at the end of this one, are you gonna continued this one cause I like the smutty and dirty stuff you put in these chapters but I love the more gentle stories you write here. I don't know I think it would be a shame that we wouldn't get to see more of Rylee.

Fuck I'm really rooting for mark to get a happy ending and not one with his mind broken and him seemingly happy, but one where he's actually happy and free but alas I'm don't think it's in the cards for mark but anyway this is prob one the hottest story's IMO and very sad story's. Fuck I'm anxious about how this will end.

keep up the good work 

P.S I vote for amoe