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Summary:

A young lady, loving girlfriend, a kind protector and a genocidal monster. All these words could be used to define Kate. Part of a government experiment in genetic manipulation Kate surprised everyone when she responded far better to the treatment then anyone could have expected.

The story of this young lady finding love, leaving her home and how the world responds to her.


Categories: Giantess, Slow Size Change, Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 476536 Read Count: 157034
[Report This] Published: March 05 2006 Updated: December 22 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This truly is a work of love for our favourite subject. Happiest's imagination is very broad, presenting both the gentle and violent ends of the spectrum. The only detractor is his missuse of some words, and problems with spelling and grammar. But overall, it's a great story.

Summary: this is a story about in the future where women can legaly shrink men and kill them in many fashions
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3342 Read Count: 5973
[Report This] Published: March 25 2006 Updated: March 25 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: March 25 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story idea. Lots of potential.
Could have been a little more detailed and lengthier.
Needs better sentence structure and spelling to be more readable.

One question: Regarding the first sentence, what has the colour of a person's skin got to do with an ability to shrink someone?

Summary: The end of the world in nigh. And in the midst of it all, some hot chicks decide to have some fun.
Categories: Butt, New World Order, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 585 Read Count: 15669
[Report This] Published: April 11 2006 Updated: April 16 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: September 06 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sounds like an interesting situation. But no good action yet - only potential.
The Chapters are too short to be considered as real chapters.

Summary: Carl shrinks due to a chemical spill in his garage. Plenty of action and adventure as the two inch man has to survive in a house with his wicked step mother and his 19 yr. old stepsister. If that's not dangerous enough his step sis is having a sleep over with her two best frinds.
Categories: Adventure, Crush, Humiliation, Lesbians, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19743 Read Count: 40502
[Report This] Published: April 25 2006 Updated: April 25 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 27 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story line with great imagination.
However, spelling and grammar is not well done.

Here's a few suggestions:
Try to keep your tenses consistent - preferably write the whole story in the past tense.
Also try to keep the perspective, from which the story is being told, consistent. In my opinion, telling it in the third person is easiest.
Write complete sentences. And avoid combining double sentences.
End questions with a "?" mark.
The words "step-mother", "step-son", "step-brother", "step-sister" should be hyphenated throughout.
Be careful about contractions; "you're" for "you are", not "your"; "they're" for "they are", not "their".

I think that you've got great potential. Please continue to write more. You're likely to get better with practice.


Author's Response: Hey SafteyPin, Thanks for the comments. As you can see I am not the greatest at spelling or grammer. I am working on getting better at proof reading. Thank you for your comments and I\'ll work on the rest. Peace!!!

Summary:

When a lovable park ranger his female teacher friend are shrunk to one inch by an ancient potion, they are rescued and taken home by beautiful 18 year old Stephanie. The tiny ranger and teacher learn about life and love on the tiny side at Stephanie's precious feet.  Joe takes Stephanie and Sarah the teacher on a wild adventure in his quest to return to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24757 Read Count: 28184
[Report This] Published: May 07 2006 Updated: March 07 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Voodoo Cheeseburger

Good story. Please continue.

One suggestion; divide it up into more paragraphs in order to make it easier to read.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, SafetyPin.

Summary: How far would you go to win an election?

This is something a bit different, do let me know what you think as the story develops.
Categories: Butt, Humiliation, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1437 Read Count: 36079
[Report This] Published: June 26 2006 Updated: May 05 2007
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstar
Date: March 10 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Power Play

OK, this story is interesting.
Progress is slow with short irregular chapters.
BTW, where's the "vore, butt, humilation, toilet" stuff that is mentioned as the categories for this story?

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: September 04 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - On the Ground

Three chapters and no "Butt, Toilet, Vore, Humiliation" so far. This sure is a slow-developing story. We need more action, peter!

Smoothed by Atkins Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: A Wife traps her husband onto an object, but when their daughter comes home from college she unknowingly interacts with her father.
Categories: Gentle, Incest, Unaware, Vore, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3108 Read Count: 47715
[Report This] Published: June 28 2006 Updated: June 28 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of the best human-to-object-transformation stories ever written.

The Doll by banfield Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: To be input later
Categories: Butt, Crush, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10953 Read Count: 12404
[Report This] Published: June 28 2006 Updated: June 28 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: June 28 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This copy of Banfield's great story is incomplete - appears to have been truncated. It has another 1800 words in it.

Following is the rest of this story:

... and with her free hand callously ripped one of his arms from his shoulder and threw it onto the dressing-table, then seized the other arm. Eduardo, for that was surely who he was, screamed hideously, but caught up with the pleasure of dismembering the annoying little man, Denise tore the other arm with a frightful wrench and tossed it to join the former limb. With no regard for her lover, Leda, Denise, not having had a cup of tea yet, felt suddenly thirsty. She put her mouth to one shoulder and then the other to drink the blood. Yes, real blood! The poor, wretched Eduardo had, quite literally become human. Gone now was that assertion, that defiance he had so bravely adopted at that young, beautiful, up and coming model of giant proportions to his twelve inch stature.

Like a little girl playing on her own with vicious adolescence, capturing insects, Denise turned to his legs. 'Noooooo!' he screeched; but the fiendish "game" went on. A big grin appeared over her seductive features as she grasped one leg. With just that extra effort, the limb broke away from his hip-joint. It fell close to his ripped-off arms. The last limb then followed leaving the horrified midget totally limbless. Denise then sadistally lapped at the blood flowing from whence his legs had been, then her eyes focussed on his dangling genitals. 'I haven't had break- fast yet,' she giggled. Again he screamed as she raised his torso to her mouth. Blood dripped from all four places from where his limbs had been torn.

First, she extended her bloodied tongue and lapped at the masculine appendages, the penis and testicles waved to and fro, yet still the wretched creature howled and screamed. There seemed he could not die as a man would under such dreadful circumstances.

She glanced at him with a lustful and pitiless grin and opened her mouth just a little to embrace his genitals with her sexy lips. 'Mmmm...a teeny sausage and two teeny eggs,' she murmured, and then quickly caught the organs between her sharp teeth, another aspect of her beauty she took great care of. She bit and as her teeth gradually met the little man let out a high- pitched squeal. Denise closed her lips and gazed at him as she sucked the tiny morsels, sending them from one side of her mouth to the other, soaking them with her saliva. Then her teeth began their mastication, chewing them up to a pulp. 'Mmmm...' she murmured, then gave a swallow. Eduardo saw her throat bob as his manly possessions slid down her gullet.

'Denise, Denise!' came a call from downstairs, 'It's nearly twelve, you know, aren't you feeling well...or are you still asleep? I can make you a little breakfast!' There came the sound of footfalls ascending the narrow staircase. A sense of guilt and panic erupted in the girl's heart. She was holding the unmanned and limbless Eduardo in her hand, his genitals being digested in her stomach, his limbs lying on the dressing-table. Quick as a flash, her mind concocting excuses, she parted her legs and, as if inserting a tampon, pushed him out of sight into her glutinous vagina. Then hastily picked up the limbs and wrapped them in the soiled underwear.

'Have you got a pad or something?' she called just as Leda entered the bedroom, 'I've just star- ted,' referring to her monthly periods. The pretty girl purposely shewed the signs.

'Yes, my darling. I always keep them as an emergency, in case I start during the night.' Leda, deceived by her sex-partner's cunning subterfuge, took out a packet of s.t's from the drawer in which she stored her knickers. As she handed the s.t's to Denise she peered into the drawer: 'That's odd. Where's that doll?' Denise, adopting a casual indifference, placed a pad under her crotch and put on a fresh pair of knickers: 'Don't know. You did put him back there, didn't you?'

'Yes, I'm sure I did,' muttered Leda as she pulled one pair and another of her knickers aside. 'He's not here.' She opened other drawers with the same result. 'Now where could he be?'

As Denise pulled her knickers up tight over the bulging pad, she felt the squirming Eduardo in her vagina. God, she thought to herself, the bugger's still alive! She then thought about the small pile of undies lying there on the floor, and the evidence of her savagery. 'I'll get rid of these,' she said as calmly as she could, and gathered them up. As Leda continued searching she asked Denise if he was in amongst them. Denise pretended to squeeze the underclothes. 'No, not here. I'll take these down and pop them in the washing-machine...Okay?' Then, as she stepped from the room she again kept up the pretence: 'I think he must have got out of here when I went for a pee earlier. I thought I heard something...thought it was a mouse or something.' Leda cursed: 'Damn...damn...damn!' Denise wore a smirk on her face as she descended the staircase. So much for "True love." She quickly re- moved the limbs from the washing and stuffed them deep into the rubbish-bin in the kitchen then crammed the undies into the washing-machine. Yet again using her conniving initiative, she turned the machine on - just in case. Every now and then she gave a start as the dismembered figure deep inside her wriggled about.

Leda was terribly upset. It was as if she'd lost a dear pet. 'Never mind,' smiled Denise with false compassion, 'You've still got me.' Leda was slightly mollified. 'Yes, darling, but you won't be with me for very long. You'll soon be off on some shoot somewhere. America or .... Look, darling, I really must pop out. You can come with me if you want. I must try and find a local gipsy camp.' Denise's heart sprang as an opportunity lit up in her scheming mind, but her _expression shewed her reluctance. 'Leda, I'm rather hungry and I need a shower or a good soak. You go and I'll be all right.'

'Are you sure, my love?' Denise was sure right enough. She waved "tearfully" as Leda hurried off on her quest to find that wizened old gipsy-woman.

Once she was gone, Denise hoisted her skirt and drew her knickers down and off her feet. She spread her lithe legs and removed the s.t. There was blood on it but not, surprisingly, very much. She then squatted and began inserting her fingers into her vulva until she felt Duardo. Very slowly she drew him out of her vagina. Astoundingly, he was still alive and would have been kicking if he had the legs to do so. She gazed at him in amazement, his head, face and torso besmeared with her vaginal fluids. His eyes were blinking in the bright light and his mouth dribbling with her mucus.

'I don't like competition,' she said to him. 'I think Leda was getting too fond of you. It's me she loves, and me who gets her all sexy and that. So you've really got to go. Now I know you can't die. She told me. So, how do I really get rid of you? I could simply chop you up into tiny bits and flush you down the lavvy-pan, or perhaps put you into the mincing machine? I 'spose I could just burn you up, but we don't have a fire...too warm for that. No, I've got a super idea...' He looked at her in terror, hearing all those ghastly ways of being got rid of. He could only wriggle his torso and shake his head as he shrieked in despair. Whichever way she decides, it will be terrible.

'Ah, I know,' she said beaming all over her lovely face, her eyes sparkling with her diabolical idea, 'I'm really hungry. Haven't had anything 'cept your little things...' A unearthly howl came from him: 'Please!' he screeched, 'not that! You can't be so cruel!'

'Oh, yes I can,' she replied contritely, 'I can be as cruel as I like. Anyway, you can't die, no matter how I kill you or anything. So I've decided what I'm going to do...' She paused for a moment relish- ing his terror, then she slowly licked her lips. She saw his eyes widen, and then he howled when she parted her lips to reveal her sparkling white teeth. She straightened up and carried him to the table. She sat and held him over a plate. 'Now, where shall I start?' she murmured, her eyes going from his head down to his torso. An evil smile came over her. 'Here, I think,' she said, and lifted his stumped torso to her gaping mouth. He screamed as her teeth closed over his midriff, just over his navel. His pleading eyes stared up at hers as she clenched her teeth. Blood poured from his upper trunk almost filling her mouth. She gave a gulp sending the rich-red blood down her throat. 'Mmmm...' she mumbled with her mouth full, 'It's like delicious claret!' She then took another bite, this time over his neck. His head was left in her fingers - and still he lived. She made him look as she chewed his torso, the sound of crunching bones quite audible. Droplets of blood trickled fom the corners of her lips. Her tongue periodic- ally curling out to gather it up.

'Mmmm...delicious! I really needed that...'specially on an empty tummy,' she mumbled. It took time for the gory contents of her mouth to be fully masticated before she swallowed.

'Now your head,' she said, 'Then you'll all be gone, all in my belly. Can't think how you're still alive.' She spoke quite casually, looking at him as she would a large sweet - a kind of gob- stopper. Into her mouth went Eduardo's head. She happily, without any conscience, began sucking it as she went up to the bathroom to take a leisurely bath.

As she lay in the hot steamy water liberally mixed with bathsalts and perfumed oils, she hoped and prayed almost that Leda would never find that gipsy; but if she did, and purchase another doll, she vowed it would go the same way as Eduardo. She smoothed the slick contours of her body with the palms of her hands as she placed the head between her teeth. She was sure she could hear the shrieking sounds coming from Eduardo's mouth. With a sadistic smile, languishing in the hot bath, she bit. A crack sounded followed by the crunching of her molars.

We leave that dissolute vixen as she masticates the head of that wretched Eduardo who will, as he is cursed, exist for eternity in her belly... his everlasting sepulchre of a living body.....


Author's Response: Thank you, Safetypin, for adding the remainder of this story. What a pity we writers don\'t get much response! That\'s probably why there is such a scarcity of stories. I do have more such yarns but one loses the heart to post them because of the seemingly lack of interest. How sad! Banfield

Toy Town by ShrunkenNinja Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A man obsessed with his toy train city is shrunken to its scale as a birthday present from his girlfriend.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Gentle, Humiliation, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8149 Read Count: 20724
[Report This] Published: July 05 2006 Updated: July 06 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Sister

Well done.
A very good story with some interesting theme.
Telling it from different perspectives, with lots of description of the experiences, engages the reader and makes things seem more real.

Author's Response: Thanks, I just took all of the things I\'d seen in various stories that I had liked, put my own spin on them...and came up with this.

Be warned by banfield Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: This is a short story of robbery, revenge, murder and giantism
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1770 Read Count: 6645
[Report This] Published: December 16 2006 Updated: December 16 2006
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 16 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Be warned

Very good short story.
In fact, I would like to hear more about her other victims who died in a variety of ways.

However I do question the "G" rating. Should be at least an "R".

Author's Response:

Thank you, Safety Pin for your compliment, but please tell me about those rating letters - what does G & R stand for. You must excuse my ignorance.

Banfield,  and yes, I may well tell of that vengeful girl's other reprisals. 

Summary: When Donna Johnson makes a wish on a passing star, Her husband, Tim, and two sons, Dylan and Jason, may be in for more of an adventure then just the camping trip they planned.
Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Humiliation, Unaware, Body Exploration, Feet, Incest, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3504 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: January 09 2007 Updated: March 11 2007
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 13 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good story.
The unaware voyeuristic theme is a great situation for all kinds of intimate giantess adventures.
One suggestion; tell things from the perspective of the little people. I love to imagine that I'm experiencing things from their "angle". Ahhhh...the pubic forest.... : )

Tech Support by nostromo Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A man comes to consciousness and finds himself the dildo of a young woman. He tries to regain his memory.
Categories: Mouth Play, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16848 Read Count: 52309
[Report This] Published: January 16 2007 Updated: January 28 2007
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 19 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great story!
Just the the kind I enjoy.
Thanks, nostromo...
Looking forward to Part 5, and hope for many more.

Author's Response: thanks for reading, Safetypin! i'll add to it soon i'm sure! :-)

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: January 21 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes, please continue...

Author's Response: Will do, safetypin, will do :-) thanks again for commenting!

Summary: A young woman seeks the privacy of nature, unaware that she's destroying a civilization.
Categories: Odor, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16917 Read Count: 223612
[Report This] Published: January 17 2007 Updated: January 11 2009
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Excellent imaginative story.
Feminine hygiene on a giant scale is a wonderful set-up.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Great chapter, Galstaff!
Lots of imagination.
Well told from both perspectives.


Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter is on the way.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Look Out Below

Nice one.
Good story line with many possibilities.
Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response:

Here's the second part. Thanks for the encouragment. This sites format makes it quite addictive to write for.

Summary:

On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace.  A four-year investigation proved inconclusive.  Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.

This is their story.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 107446
[Report This] Published: January 19 2007 Updated: June 24 2009
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: February 10 2007 Title: Chapter 3: 8:00

OK, maybe I did rate the story too soon. It was off to a slow start, and maybe I was a little anxious to read about some interaction between giants and shrinkies. This 3rd part is better. Looking forward to more action in the next part.

Good story line. Lots of potential.

BTW, as suggested by Zalrus, I too would prefer that stories be told in the past tense. Even if it is being told by an eye witness, it is being recorded after the incidents have occurred.


Author's Response:

I think you'll like this next chapter I'm posting now... Actually, given that it's more towards the gentle side, you may or may not.  But it certainly has action.

I know the story had a slow start, but as you can see I've got a lot of characters to deal with, and I had to get some basic ones involved so I could start piling on more later.

And as far as the tense thing goes, in this story, it really isn't being recorded afterwards.  I do it to preserve the possibility of any narrator's imminent mortality... At least one of the narrators will die before the story ends.

Summary:

Your friend shows you an odd device that she brought from a tech lab.  What is it?  You'll have to find out as you go.

In the tradition of the "choose your own adventure" books.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9306 Read Count: 124389
[Report This] Published: February 06 2007 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: February 07 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Ch. 31: A Light Salad

I like the story lines.
However I find this style of choose-the-ending just too confusing to follow.

Author's Response: Thanks.  The story is far from done, did you run in to dead ends?  How might I make it less confusing?

Summary: A young man plagued with self-doubts has a girlfriend he thinks is too good for him. She purchases a magic wand...
Categories: Mouth Play, Transformation, Object, Giantess, Body Exploration, Insertion, Vore, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 26244
[Report This] Published: March 07 2007 Updated: March 07 2007
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: March 08 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story with and cute theme.
Lots of potential.
Could be taken further and expand upon Natalie's evil and selfish nature.