Wow. That was cruel.  Elves really have no empathy for humans do they?  Propganda and pride must be strong among them.

Came for the smut, stayed for the story, enjoyed the smut anyway.

It really is cute how the prince and Selena interact with each other.  Poor Selena was shrunk before she new much about men, maybe Virion or Rytha can help her with that.  And speaking of poor, I wonder how Nalista feels about her secret admirer.  Maybe she comes to be more attatched to her prize than she thought she would be?  Would be interesting if the two former royal siblings met again in the future.

As a sidenote, I've been reading more M/f as of late so this story is right up my alley.

This was a fun and cute story.  Having played FGO myself and knowing the characters' personalities, there is certainly plenty of opportunity for cute, and lewd, fun in Chaldea.

Well that was adorable and heartwarming.  It's nice to see these two getting along but I also like the questions that were brought up.  Just why was Allison recruited for her job.  Maybe her mentor did sign her up for it because she knew some insider info, like how it can be easily used to make inconveniant people disappear.  People like Brian.  And by recommending Allison, it resulted in at least one executioner who might listen and spare an innocent.  Or maybe not.

As for Allison, I'd be interested to see a return to her workplace.  Maybe she starts branching out her methods and finds, to her surprise, that she actually enjoys it.  Also maybe some more info on the other Chevaliers and their attitudes and methods.  Clearly they seem to be the sort of women who enjoy their work and it would be interesting to contrast the cruel and the gentle parts of the story.

This seems fun.  Attack of the lusty kaiju women and they can only be defeated by being fucked back to normal by a giant futanari.

I finally got around to reading this story and I am hooked!  First, while I do enjoy the fetishy aspects, I'm actually more fond of genuine stories that happen to use my fetish and this one does exactly that.

Second, giantesses that use magic is a great concept.  The size difference already grants giants great power so adding magic on top of that is even better.  Plus, it seems these giants come from a more advanced civilization, even they are apparently separated from it and live more like hunter gatherers.

Third, the concept of "giantess raised by humans gets revenge on other giants for killing her family" has been done before but I'm eager to see where it goes in this story.  Artemis has good reason to be angry with Azura in particular and giants in general for what they do but Azura, assuming she's telling the truth, has good reason to despise humans for what they did to her kind and her queen.  She clearly wants to recruit Artemis rather than harm her, perhaps she's some distant relative of the late giant queen?

It would be an interesting twist, in my opinion, if Artemis and Azura actually do end up working together later for the benefit of both races.  Not to say Artemis would forgive Azura or Azura would stop thinking of humans as vermin but trust does not necessarily mean forgiveness.  Either way, I'm excited to see where you go with this story. :)

This story has very quickly become one of my favorites.  The concpet of a tall, strong woman who is fiercly protective of tiny people and fiercly violent to those that harm them appeals to my sense of jusitce.  The fact that she shrinks those same tormenters and enjoys playing with them means we get cruel stuff in addittion to gentle stuff.

Even better is the magic and abilties given to them by their secret garden and technology.  I've always been fond of the "magical girlfriend" or "superpowered girlfriend" trope so having a kind, strong, superpowered, giant girlfriend/protector who secretly does brutal vigilante justice hits all the right buttons for me.

Another thing I like about this story is the casual worldbuilding and bits of lore we get.  It really gets me sucked in to the story and eager to see what we learn next.  And with these revelations about Amrita corp and this family, here's hoping Maddie and Jisoo become friends and maybe add her company to theirs.

Wooow.  When I first started reading this story, it was a "giant woman saves tiny man and protects him" sort of thing, which is great because I love gentle stories with a bit of a kick in them.  This story has gone far and above what I expected when I started reading and I quite like the tropes being explored.  Jisoo's "good but not soft" giant protector, Maddie's "dismissive of specks but realizes and regrets her mistakes", Grace's casual friendliess towards friends but ruthlessness towards those outside it.

And Eren. Poor boy has a lot to process now.  On another note, I'm guessing Jisoo's family's plan is to shrink everyone else in the world and rule over them as benevolent overlords.  That comes off as an idea that sounds nice but has a lot of unmentioned sacrifices along the way.  Those who resist, those who try to flee, those who can't cope with their new size, those who were shrunk while carrying something or operating vehicles, etc.  Though it depends on how the family intends to shrink everyone.  Then there's the matter of what happens if people find out they shrank the world.  Hard to be benevloent overlords when your subjects are rebelling and hate you.

Anyway, this story continues to be great.  I look forward to what you have planned next!

I'm so glad Maeve survived that encounter. I wonder if the cleaning lady was actually an Amrita agent sent to check on Maddie.  And Maddie, good for her she realizes her ignorance and trying to make amends.  Evidently, Jisoo has been convinced too, likely by Eren's decision, and is giving her a chance.

Also, referencing sandman579's review, he touches on a lot of good points.  The Armita group talk about their "heavenly duty" but enjoy great wealth and have a "do whatever they want and get what they want" attitude.  Jisoo's relationship with her adoptive family and her mother running off with family secrets is definitely suspicious in a "she had moral objections and fled to maybe form a resistance" sort of way.

Plus, and I mentioned this before, The whole shrinking humanity to save the world is one of those idealistic plans that has a lot of sacrifices and casualties in between.  There was another story, After Shrink High, that touched on this exact scenario.  Lots of people died due to where they or what they were doing when they shrank, infrastructure collapsed, civilization ground to a halt and regressed outside of a few designated cities in each region.  Not everyone joins the new regime, plenty of outlaws and rebels and the regime sends its normal sized agents to secretly exterminate those who don't follow them under the guise of "eliminating bandits and terrorists".  And once someone learns the truth, they have to focus on eliminating everyone who knows or risk the world rebelling and ruining their plans.  Can't kill too many people or they'll have no one to rule over.

I'm really enjoying this story.  It's much deeper and rife with lore than I expected and I love it!

Satsuki brings up some very good points.  I have to admit I wasn't expecting her to point out these hypocrisies.  It's either an act on her part or she genuinely knows it's all hypocrisy and that's why she's so frigid.  And good for Eren that he's actually being made to think about these things.  If the Amrita Corp. does care about specks and has the influence to casually appoint political leaders and dictate policy, why allow specks to go mistreated?

And Maddie, oh dear.  She woke up from her bigotry when she saw the speck commune but it seems she never realized that everyone else did not see what she did.  Her casual brushing off of everyone else as bigots while she used to be just like them is a pride thing she needs to work out.  If she changed her views on specks just by going to a commune, how many other "bigots" can see the truth like her?  Good on Giulia for pointing that out.