Penname: NotSirk [Contact] Real name: Kris
Member Since: July 13 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Definitely not that MrSirk guy......I think he's dead.


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Summary:

Join Scott Stevens, his dysfunctional family, and a shrinking device in these alternate reality what-if short stories.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9701 Read Count: 88844
[Report This] Published: October 14 2017 Updated: January 10 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Down the Hatch (Part 1)

I don't know I'm actually kind of feeling this what if. I honestly thought in the main series that Judy legitimately loved Scott. Even if that love was warped and used to drive her politics I figured she at least believed she was helping him and wouldn't give up on him. It's very interesting to see an even darker turn even if I don't think she'd actually eat him in canon. But what do I know?



Author's Response:

That's an accurate analysis of the difference between this what-if and the main canon

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Date: December 04 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Maggie's Turn (Part 2)

Hrmmm....Maybe Maggie's a little insane too. There's something slightly off with the woman in this family. That's the only way to explain not earning a shred of sympathy. NAY! Actually reaffirming her abuse of Scott by experincing his torment first hand. Judy should've given her a notebook. I'm sure they're are certain insights worth remembering to better optimise Scott's suffering.....All in the name of love of course! 



Author's Response:

Maggie's reactions may or may not be a bit heightened in this chapter compared to how the canon version of her might react. Generally, if this was the Maggie of the late sixth story and seventh story, she would probably have a shade of sympathy

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Date: December 16 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

.........Scott.....Scott's had a hard life.



Author's Response:

An understatement

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: November 26 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Maggie's Turn (Part 1)

These what if's are actually pretty revealing....at least that is if the characterization is canon even if the events aren't. Like the two women of the house bonding over Scott's suffering. That's something I believe is probably true. Of course who knows right? This is a what if. It makes me wonder if Judy would actually shrink Maggie under the same circumstance. I don't believe for a second she'd ever actually eat Scott but this one feels a Mythbusters plausible. Anyway good story. I actually feel bad for Maggie which is weird. Well I feel bad for all those kids, Judy's insane.



Author's Response:

The characterization canon is a bit loosey goosey in this story, but it's probably fair to say this is a decent portrait of Maggie circa the fifth and sixth stories of the canon series.

Summary:

When a girl steals away a boy from another, the two become enemies.

But when a girl steals a boy away and constantly belittles the other, they become mortal enemies.

Follow Kayla, a girl who has been constantly bullied by the smarter, hotter, and more popular girl, as she struggles through everyday until she gets the formula just right.

And an innocent drink spilled onto the bully just might change both of their lives.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 805 Read Count: 3784
[Report This] Published: October 17 2017 Updated: October 17 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2017 Title: Chapter 1: I. Self-Doubt

Hmmm. I'm definitely keeping an eye out for this one. I have some ideas where this might go based on the story summary and this is a nice first chapter. Would've preferred if it was longer. I assume both Kayla and Emma are the significant characters and I would've liked to see Emma's introduction too. If this is the concept I think it is I'm gonna enjoy this story! Can't wait for more!

I'll give you five stars for no reason. Sure! This rating system means nothing. Chapter 2! I have high hopes!

Ownership by SpookyTaco Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Uri purchases a homunculus, a small humanlike creature named Falcon. Legally, she owns him, but he has other plans.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5319 Read Count: 12266
[Report This] Published: October 30 2017 Updated: October 31 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ungrateful. That's my quick analysis of Uri based on one chapter of her masturbating. Yes it is!! Hardworking, pocket sized cat thing gives you your first orgasm and you're gonna get all paranoid because he's hungry!

"Falcon, Hungry." Is his first sentence. "Get over your insecurities, I'm like four inches tall!" is his second. 

Nice chapter. I wouldn't mind reading more of it...or really any of your unfinished stories. I cast my vote. Looking forward to whatever comes up!



Author's Response:

Ungrateful is right! She should be praising him with thanks. Ah well, looks like Falcon will have to make the best of the situation he's in.

Thanks for the commentary Sirk! Looking forward to your next chapter btw!

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh! There's a second chapter of this?....Well Uri's still ungrateful, but I guess Falcon's a bit of an ass so it kinda evens out. Interesting hints of Uri's backstory. No dad huh?...Bummer. That can really mess a girl up. I find the pairs budding dynamic fun and refreshing although now that I know what shocks do to Falcon (unless he's lying) I don't think Uri has the stones to do it. I can't be sure this early but I'd be very interested to see it happen. Especially the longer time passes...as their trust starts to build.........when it would hurt the most....but  who knows if that'll happen right?!

I'll enjoy reading about these two driving each other crazy.

Summary: revenge of a giantess!
Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The forbidden dish returns, Kates Series
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2568 Read Count: 18304
[Report This] Published: November 22 2017 Updated: May 10 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: November 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: the dark revenge

I'd say this makes a good outline for what could be an amazing and emotional revenge story. The backstory itself inherently sympathizes you with the girl. I'd say what you need first is proper characterization. Show us the woman's emotions and beliefs. Who she was before meeting this abusive jackass and how his assault on her devastated her life. 

Same goes for the man. It's already easy to hate him but he should showcase the absolute worst humanity has to offer. It should more than justify the woman taking such drastic steps to get her revenge and maybe even justify the death of any innocents involved. If this is a destruction story? It feels like it is. 

That's my suggestion. Figure out the two main characters first and then let their actions carry the story. If that's what you want to do. The best thing about writing is you can do whatever you want. Even if it's just getting out ideas. Good luck.  I hope this helped. 



Author's Response: Thank you NotSerk this will be done i changed the ending to a more suspence one. Will add a backround to the characters.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: November 22 2017 Title: Chapter 1: the dark revenge

Wow! You only changed a few things and the story's already much better! We now know the guy has a convertible a house and a new wife! From these seeds you can flesh out so much. It makes me wonder who this guy is. He's clearly rich what with a convertible and a house. (Maybe it's the house they used to share together?) A new wife?! How did he get that when he's an abusive rapist? So he's a sleazy liar or maybe he's so rich he can get whatever he want with money?

Also the tank scene. Good start but more description. That's just a good rule in general. I'm still not sure what the two main characters even look like. Or this wife is she hotter? Younger? You get the idea. Anyway back on topic. How does getting hit with a tank shell feel to her? Is she so massive in powerful it hurts less than a pin prick or did the power of the military catch her off guard? These are the things that make us care and form a connection with the characters. I personally feel that the military means nothing to her. These heavy tanks are just toys to her new might. 

So overall good job. Marked improvement. Gold star or whatever. Keep going if you want to. It can only get better the more time you put in. 



Author's Response: the tank scene was part of the upcomming chapter 2 the war begains. Comming out on friday! Gets into depth with the new wife. And even miltary jets.

Summary: A British giantess story
Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Kates Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1377 Read Count: 12567
[Report This] Published: November 30 2017 Updated: May 11 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: November 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Intrest

This story is actually leaps and bounds better than your last one. It has more structure to it and i understand the characters better. Very clever woman to recognize a man's true motivations. 

Are you writing this on a cellphone? I just ask because the format is strange to me. Good on you if that's the case. I've tried cellphone writing before and it's a pain in the ass. 



Author's Response: that is from a flip phone and i was sex deprived so i needed a sex story. It had alot of meaning to my boyfriend i made it for.

Summary:

18 years old Alejandro remember a traumatic moment of his life as a minor, while he ponders what is life will be from now on.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5933 Read Count: 24475
[Report This] Published: December 04 2017 Updated: December 05 2017
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Date: December 05 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 : The Incident

Geez!......You said this would be a brutal story! I was warned but......wow. This is a darker side to MAJOR/minor. 

I don't blame Alejandro at all for never wanting a bond.....how does he even trust his family?! Alaric would be the only one! I'd never want to be near another MAJOR! It makes me wonder what would happen to abused minors? They probably have permanent mental and physical healthcare options since they're more "frail" and seen as precious. 

I don't know if it was a guess or what but you described pretty close what a bond is like and wow being forced on is a lot less pleasant than even what happened to Izzy. Who is this insane Jonathan who would abuse an eight year old? And he had a gun at fourteeen?! Well MAJORS are capable of driving at ten so I believe it.

How does Alejandro recover from this!? 

Oh and it's amazing you wrote all this without english being your primary language. As a English speaking American that always impresses me because I don't know any other language. Don't feel a need to use Izzy unless you want to. This is great as it's own thing. No pressure to use my characters.



Author's Response:

Well, he trusts his parents because he knows they love him, and they are more open minded than most MAJORS, since they taught him how to speak, write and read three languages before he was eight. And he knows they love him, so he's able to trust them or his sister. Less than Alaric, obviously but still. He doesn't rust MAJORS right now, probably never will, but it doesn't mean that he is not attracted by some girls (Rebecca or Jessica from the main series would be his go to physically). But they would need to learn to change their behaviour to have a chance with him, haha !

 

 

als, you'll see how he coped with his trauma in the next ans final chapter, coming our after my work, in eight hours ^^. 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 : The aftermath

Oh! His name was Joseph! Well I feel silly. I'm bad with common names. Not that he's a person worth remembering.

Overall a very touching and detailed perspective on the dangers a minor can face. It would be rare for it to go that badly but yeah it's not all fun and games. I liked all the subtle nods to minor culture. Being slightly chunky little piggies for MAJORS to cuddle, some MAJORS seeing them as glorified pets, not being able to read and write (although that's been slowly changing. Alejandro is a prime example) Just good stuff. Alejandro is a layered character I just want to know more about! How does he handle different situations? How is he around MAJORS now? What would he do at a school like Winton where he'd be around them all the time? So many questions!

I laughed when Izzy was featured in a news article but honestly that is something Winton would brag about to encourage new minors. Good detail there. Also love the website.

I truly hope any fan of MAJOR/minor (Which is like ten people, sorry) read this gem. And yeah. I think Alejandro might have a cameo if I can figure out a believable reason for him to be at Winton.



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks a lot ! Well, touching on Alejandro's behaviour toward MAJORS... I see him as being a sort of Inverse-Rebecca. He's quite like Izzy in that he is extremely proud of his abilities and autonomy, and wants to be respected as an equal, but life as taught him to not be blunt with this idea. Power moves have to be made by minor, but not like those Cretinosaurus Rex the MAJORS sometimes do. For Alejandro, a power-move would be to use is very nature as a minor to get out of a bad situation, by playing on the widely shared "cute factor" that all minors have when it comes to MAJORS, with the added bonus of him being that poor little kitten with three legs still trying to advance and who's so cute and all that.

In a sense, I see Izzy as the autunomous, obllivious and frank minor. Alejandro would be the autnomous, cynical and frank minor. If he doesn't like a MAJOR, he'll say it to it. And then he'll had a punch in the guts : "You're offended, you big oaf ? What are you gonna do, eh ? Crush my arm ?", that kid of jab, where Izzy will insult and berate them more bluntly.

Just like Izzy, he's in a difficult place. He knows that if he want to have a lover, or found a family, he will end with a MAJOR, that's almost a given, minor are too few. But he doesn't trust them, they have to actually earn it and it's a case by case basis. So, he's attracted by MAJOR women physically, but those he has the hots for are often the one who see the minors are inherently incapable of being much more than a glorified pet. But he's quite sttuborn. If a girl wants to bond with him, she should better be ready to accept him as he is, because he sure as Hell won't change who he is to please a MAJOR... or anyone.

Anyway, thanks for the reviews !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Nightmare of a distant past

......Wow!....Okay let's do this!

First: How did Jessica a side character to a side character only briefly in ONE chapter get a mention?! Snub! Izzy got snubbed!

Besides that I'm impressed with the world building. Things like Alejandro's birth or MAJORS fighting over tv size and childishly claiming him! That's good. And bond raped! Wow! I need to see how that went down. It is something that can happen! I won't cover it more than you've seen though. Kinda clashes with the more light hearted tone of my story.

Speaking of Alejando! Like no joke Izzy would love him! Fun fact: She lost her right arm in Small the debut story she also stars in. Sooo that's a coincidence! If ever there were a minor worth meeteing! She'd probably hate him at first though. He'd steal her thunder! 

Ummm I really don't know what to say except I want to know more about him. And you might be a better writer than me! I'm gonna give it another read!



Author's Response:

Thanks ! Don't worry about Izzy, she'll have a mention very soon, and an important one at that !

I didn't know she had lost an arm in a previous story. Alejandro and her could bond over it haha ! As for the writing part... turth been told, I try to become a Fantasy writer and thus have written a lot (350+ A4 pages) of story prior to this, it helps. But man, it is hard writing it in English and not French !

Summary:

Based on NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe; some characters may or may not appear in both stories :)

Old friends return to Old Creek and Alejandro his put in a burning dilemna. He'll have to decide how he stand sexually, mentally and what he see for his future, all while dealing with the most massive woman he's ever met....


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Maternal, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100306 Read Count: 166764
[Report This] Published: December 07 2017 Updated: January 22 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: December 31 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Admitting weaknesses

Geez! I come back from holiday and youhave like three chapters done!!! I am so far behind!

This was a tough outing for Alejandro and the night's not even over for him. Out of his comfort zone, surrounded by MAJORS, insulted multiple times! I don't blame him for snapping or taking a break. I'm actually pretty angry at Shannon for grilling him! I know it might have worked out but he also deserves his space, and has a right to his anger! None of them understand! 

That all being said I like how their relationship is developing. Aejandro will have much to consider before pursuing something more with Shannon. Little displays of casual domination will be commonplace around her especially. Don't be naive Jandro. You are swimming with a shark an a@ex predator. Can you handle that? What happens if you have another argument and she can so easily submit you? Think about it man.



Author's Response:

Well, my chapters are like a third of one of yours, at best, so it's pretty even ^^ And I had boredom and no supervising at work, so I had time and motivation to work a lot :p

Shannon means well, but in truth, she probably has even more difficulties than the average MAJOR to actually leave space and agency to a minor. She's young, never bonded, taller and stronger than almost any of her kind and a billionaire... and all that discounting her upbringing, where Alexis did drill her in the whole MAJOR=power=dominance. She'll have a lot to learn if she wants to make it work with 'Rando, because her sheer size won't allow her to win all arguments, it could even cost her everything she is currently pursuing, after all.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Embarrassment

You've fouled it up! You didn't even mention how minors were often hunted like foxes by motorbike riding MAJORS tailed by packs of artificially bred velociraptors like that one scene from Jurassic World. If you'd paid attention to the subtext of my last chapter you'd know that!

Seriously though great chapter. You added more detail than I did. I guess Alejandro's fortunate one of his parents is a geneticist. I really like the ebb and flow of tension in this dinner conversation. I could read a whole story of these characters just talking. 

P.S. Feel free to add as many details as you want right now. The details of the Dark Age won't be revealed for a bit. Not until Izzellah sees that film. So anythings up for grabs! I'll be working on that chapter soon.



Author's Response:

Thank for the review. I'll probably add more informations as I feel it, if it doesn't contradict your work :). My secret evil goal is to push your universe into the need of a wiki like Titan Empire, Mouhahahahaha ! Herm...

Anyway, I'm rather glade that I've introduced more tension at the table, even if things will get a little less intense in two to three chapters (discounting the one I posted earlier today, :) !)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: January 03 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Personal opinion

Well I can see why you said it might be too dark. It's very intense.

That being said it's totally in line with Shannon's brutal character. In my opinion Shannon Matthewson is the most extreme example of the MAJORS survival of the fittest mentality taken to it's logical conclusion. Ironically it's probably her mom who encouraged these beliefs most likely not expecting Shannon to achieve such size and strength. To Shannon, Alexis is just a minor too. Sad. But hey this is called "Dance with Fire" and it's clearly not just because of the passionate nature of Shannon and Alejandro's budding romance. Shannon is the fire and fire burns. Rando might be in serious danger with her. 

I also believe Shannon probably needs a minor in her life to keep her more even headed and healthy. Not that MAJORS truly NEED a minor but Shannon would definitely be less violent with Alejandro influencing her. If that's what she wants. She honestly seems to enjoy her violent tendencies.

Harsh but intriguing chapter. Great development for Shannon and even Alejandro overall and well.....just the entire Matthewson family. I will totally understand if you change it for whatever reason. Maybe make Shannon more sympathetic to her mother? I honestly don't know how the Matthewsons come back from this. Especially Andrew, he was completely emasculated by his daughter. He IS a MAJOR right? I though he would fight fo protect his wife a little. I just feel bad for him. His wife was blatantly cheating on him and now his daughter takes control of the family. Rough.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the insight ! You'll see more about Andrew in the first chapter which came out today, and I suspect it'll surprise you :) ! We're reaching the final parts of this story, so enjoy ! :)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Your stories ends in Old Creek park huh, possibly on the same day another minor of note visits on a brief vacation......I see what you did there. 

Geez. What a rollercoaster ride this story was. At first I wasn't sure where it was going and then I thought it would be a typical romance with g/t elements, but it turned into and interesting drama involving social standings, power dynamics, abuse, and so much more. I'm honored to have this take place in a universe I created. Also STOP SHOWING ME UP!!!! 

Giantesscity? In all the time I've been on this site I've never actually looked that site up. Uh. Go ahead? I mean I have no plans of posting anything there ever so you can do what you want with that. I have no presence there so I don't know if that helps or hurts things. Good luck. 

Thank you for your inspired contributions to MAJOR/minor. 



Author's Response:

Done ! You can find it here (if you suscribe to the forum) : https://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=12&p=1292558#p1292558

Now, I can happily await your next installments of this tale, as a simple reviewers... at least for now, who knows when I'll feel the itch to write about Aljandro, Shannon or some other MAJOR/minor coming into my mind to pester me !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2018 Title: Chapter 29: (Bonus) Alaric and Ariel

Wow! Good for Alaric! No joke. I've become really attached to your characters! I really want to know what Lindsey's up to now, or Shannon and her family? Have they reconciled?! What's old Rando up to?! Ahhh!!! Why would you do this to me?!?!

Also just so you know. Since Ariel's a female minor....she has a significantly larger than normal chance of birthing a full minor or halfsie. I mean...That IS how Izzellah exists in the MAJOR/minor world! I hope Alaric's prepared for that! Geez I could just read a story about that! Ariel's really cute too. Her circumstances are probably fairly common for a minor. Lots of potential for abuse there by nature. She's really strong for surviving that. 

Good add on! Why are people writing so much?!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Don't worry, we will see more of Shannon, Lindsey and Alejandro (I plan to write a story about them in High School in New Orleans sooner or later). As for the kids... well, I suspected as much, but I don't think that Alaric really took it into consideration, he has found his soul-mate after all, he has time to think about it.

As for why I write so much... it's a mix of boredom and craving to write, kind of like a fire inside that calm down when I write. Thankfully, it isn't always on, so i can do other things !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Bonding

Pffft Cherry Overrock! Best character. 



Author's Response:

Well, you created her, so you would know :p

Plus, it was due time for her to appear, haha

 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: January 04 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Consequences

Okay so probably through habit I didn't realize you had uploaded two chapters and skipped a chapter. So now that I've read it in order and have added context and perspective I xan give an insightful comment.

Cherry Overrock! Best character!

Seriously though. Alejandro has some guts! Holy shit I would not walk into that room. I can see what you said about that dark moment being the key to the ending. It's almost perfect. Shannon in a bid to romance Alejandro doesn't realize she's just as bad as the MAJOR who damaged him. Wow! 

Can't wait to see the end of this one!



Author's Response:

Well... It's over, but be careful, reading the actual final chapter before the Epilogue ^^