As I said to my remarks to Banfield's similar story, I would not like to be eaten. But if I were condemned to death, a beautiful woman doing the killing would be the way to go.

Author's Response: yes a beautiful woman would be how to go!

Interesting so far. And different.

Author's Response: Thanks! This is a slight revision of my very first non-pastiche for "Pete's GTS Magic Free Forum. And, the Ned Fogarty stories were prequels that could also be read independently of the original Miles Stone sequels. The M.A.C.H.O. series, as a whole, was originally intended as a means by which I could rescue shrunken men from the giantesses I didn't think they deserved, in other stories never completed by other authors. But, the series evolved in a completely different direction. And, of course, Landlord Pete eventually had to sell off his property. So, unless and until he can finally snail-mail me that promised DVD of the original stories, I will have to settle for posting slightly revised versions, here, as they recur to me.

A good, well-written story for yourfirst time.

Myself, I prefer insertion and things like that, but your story is well done. You might say a smashing success. Nicole really had a crush on Jason. (I have a reputation for bad jokes,)

This reminded me of a reall-life situation when I was a junior in high school. I liked a certain girl, but she was not very fond of me. So I dated another girl, who I didn't really like, to make the first girl jealous and, hopefully, come to me. She didn't. In fact she said she was happy that I had found someone. Fortunately the second girl and I didn't get along and I ended up marrying a third girl, who is a very good wife. The first girl turned out too be fat and ugly later.

I always enjoy descriptions of a person, especially a male, being used by a female as a human dildo, and then thrust up her anus.

And the clarity of banfield's prose makes the scene come alive. Its almost like being there, if you know what I mean. :)

Thank you, banfield.

I must say that I would defy the Government under such circumstances, myself. I would hope that they would send out a Japanese "enforcer" to take care of me.

You might call this "Of Mice and Men." This is reminicient of a movie I watched where a woman could change herself into a snake. But she could be charmed with music.

Author's Response: The legend about Dr. Steel's "carbuncle" is an actual piece of folklore from the town of Moodus, Connecticut. The rest is derived purely from my warped imagination. Bwa-hahahaha!

Shades of Pussy Galore, what a name. I thought these guys were running a cat house at first.  :)

They must be "The Miniature Seven".

Oh, yes, she can have her way with me.

A very good story, Carycomic. Do you read Clive Cussler and Dirk Pitt books, by the way? Just curious.

Author's Response: The only Cussler novel I ever read was RAISE THE TITANIC. After the movie version that starred the late, great Richard Jordan.

Well written, banfield. Al though I don't et excited about eaten alive, unless I could be brought back from the dead, I do like reading about it.

Thank you both for this story.