Well, if that was your first time writing lewd content, I couldn't tell. I thought it worked very well. In any sort of romantic story I read, when it comes time for sexual scenes, my favorite type is when it's more about what each character is feeling for the other than about the actual physical pleasure. I mean, it's great to have the payoff of the physical arousal and eventual orgasm, but I always like to see those as offshoots of their feelings for each other. And in this chapter, I thought you were really able to pull that off. Mira was brought to climax not by her fingers, but by Anthony's words stimulating her emotions. And the fact that he got into it and had all those feelings swirling around inside himself helped as well.

Anyway, I loved it. I hope to eventually see more content like this, as the story, and their relationship, progress. Of course, I never want story sacrificed in order to make way for smut, but I'd totally enjoy more lewdness at points in the story where it will fit. I'm drawn to this site because of my unusual desires, but I keep coming back, checking every few hours for updates on my favorites stories, because authors like you put work into crafting narratives that work, with compelling characters and scenarios. Keep up the good work, man!

I wasn’t expecting this. But good chapter. It’s an interesting situation. Anthony has always known Mira has murdered dozens, of not hundreds, of people, but he didn’t have to face that reality head on. He could assume that maybe she’s changing because of him. But now she just murdered 4 people right in front of him. I wonder how he’ll react once he gets another chance to speak with her.

Although she has changed a bit. At least she was apologetic (to him) about what she was about to do. But she was right, there really wasn’t any way for them to get out of that situation otherwise, with him about to shrink.

Author's Response:

I appreciate your compliment on the chapter!

As expected, this was a very tough situation for Mira and Anthony's relationship.  Him witnessing her kill them all, especially in the cold and uncaring way she did it, had to be really hard for him. What I didn't expect was her sudden change in demeanor aand retreat to her room. Hopefully Anthony can quickly correct her prognosis that their relationship is without saving and repair get past the cold exterior that has suddenly formed around her.

Though, I love the diety guy. I think you do a good job writing him, as a mysterious figure with unkown intentions who seems to have at least some care for Mira and Anthony, but at the same time has a bit of fun conversing with Anthony when he can. He provides a necesary outlet for some of Anthony's feelings when he can't express them to Mira.

I do wonder what Anthony will find in Mira's room. What is she hiding? Will him being in there backfire on his goal to salvage their relationship? This is so tense, I can't wait for next chapter!

Hey, I just read the first two chapters and wanted to say that i liked it so far. The story has solid characters and a good premise. The two mains are super cute together, and I think what we’ve seen of their relationship works.

Author's Response:

Thank you! It may not be the smoothest of relationships, but I hope that it is one of the stronger ones out there. 

This seems to have taken a bit of a dangerous turn. Ky was finally starting to accept that she wasn’t going to be an elite, but suddenly she just flipped right back into being superior to Les. I fell this will eventually cause conflict. Once Les is trained and get used to her power, she’ll realize that she doesn’t need to or want to be subservient to her sister, and Ky will be let down hard all over again.

Author's Response:

It's certainly a danger! We'll have to see how it plays out, with each of their very different personalities.

I'm really glad this story is back! I was enjoying it when it first came out and was sad when it went on hiatus.

I've forgotten the rules of how Vassalship work. If Les secretly start the process of making Ky a vassal, would Paisley still be able to steal her away if she reaches Elite status a few weeks before Les? or would Ky already be too attached to Les to be taken away? I hope she gets to stay.

Also, interesting how Jakob has started becoming a Vassal from a simple unitentional kiss even before Les is fully-Elite. I wonder if that indicates Les has high potential to become a Mega or even a Titan.

Adrian’s big again, yay! She actually chose to regrow Melanie as well. After everything she did, including making her kill Erin.

I wonder how this is gonna go. Has Adrian decided not to regrow everyone, and instead to run away with Melanie? The police are looking for Melanie, so I’m not sure how well that would go. They did just try to kill her, so it would be understandable to that she would harbor resentment towards them, but keeping them as toys to be shared between her and Melanie seems like a bit much. And I wonder how things are going with Nicky and Juniper as well. Man, there is so much to wrap up in this story, I can’t believe Endless is coming to an end!

Author's Response:

It's been a wild adventure, hasn't it? Thank you for reading all this time, and especially for the reviews~

Great chapter. Got some shrinking in as well as some really sexy breast teasing. There's this fun air of anticipation in these shrinking chapters as both of them anticipate how much fun they'll be able to have. Glad Sarah wants to use all parts of her body to toy with him, and not just her feet or mouth. It's gonna be quite the ride once he's small enough to fit in all her places. 3 inches is always my favorite size because they're small enough to fit everywhere but big enough to actually meaningfully interact with the giantess.

Glad to see him wake up so small. It's time to get to some real fun. I do knida wonder if fear from his nightmares will ever play in, like if he gets more worried about getting lost and starts to cling even closer to Sarah.

I just recently came back to this story after dropping it a few chapters in. I have to admit, I wasn't a big fan of the concept at the start, but I think you've done a really good job at writing this story. I'm a big fan of the main trio. I would hate to see anything break them apart. I would be good with something getting a bit dark, like Jackie having the power go to her head in the VRcade, or maybe one of the giantesses having a momentary lapse in judgement where their sexual fantasies overcome their rational brain and they take something too far with Jackie, but nothing that would fundamentally ruin the relationship between the three of them. I think you've built a good thing there and I would be sad to see it destroyed.

That's also my main cconcern with Alyssa. I don't mind her being in the story, as long as she doesn't become the main focus. There's a cliche in some giantess stories where the main gentle giantess doesn't realize how much of a threat a malicious giantess is to their tiny and keeps trying to get the tiny to be ok with the malicious giantess being around despite the tiny's protests and fear, even when the fear is completely justified. That's the kinda stuff that I dislike. But right now it appears that Marliegh is completely on Jackie's side on this front, and I hope it stays that way.