Reviewer: Nostory Signed
Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Day 3: Night Talk
I don't think they should sleep together just yet, it is too soon. Unless you didn't mean sex then maybe its okay although you can always have the little human get into an accident if Madison uses too much force during sex and there can some sort of fallout they have to deal with.
The world they live in is interesting, giantesses and humans have been each other's masters at different points? Seems like they went to war quite often then, hopefully things have settled down. I doubt that everything is so lovey-dovey, there has to be at least one giantess or human out there who hates the other side.
There are plenty of questions I want to ask but I will take it slowly.
Author's Response: Hrm, after reading through the latest chapter again I do feel like rewriting that last part. I wrote it at 3am myself, so I might not have been thinking straight. I'll edit when an oportunity arises.
I'll expand more on the history of the world with the pre-chapter italics, but your suggestions have been helpful in paving a road in the direction I'm going, so please keep up the ideas!
Once again, thanks for reading!