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Summary:

Air force test pilot Lucas Estrada meets a young woman after he is forced to eject out of his orbital jet. She is beautiful, intelligent, kind but out of his league in all ways... and yet...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lur saga - LoTG
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29073 Read Count: 129557
[Report This] Published: August 04 2018 Updated: December 18 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Cleaner

This story is still cute, and it will be a challenge for Lucas and Melina to understand eachothers language. But Lucas is a fast learner, or at least I hope.

I am curious about the place he landed. He probably won't be able to go back to Brazil, but at least he is safe with Melina. 

Switching perspective back and forth between Lucas and Melina is also nice because it gives us an isight into the thoughts of both. A well thought out move.

Also, thank you for writing, I really enjoyed these chapters.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Closer

Thank you for giving in to the inevitable instead of leaving us hanging. Seems like Lucas and Melina understand eachother perfectly!

Thank you for writing!

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Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Insatiable

Your writing is uh hot, just line Melina. Lucas and Melina also seem to like eachother very much.

I'm a little curious about the world Lucas landed in, but I hope we will hear more about that in the next chapter(s)?

Also, thank you for writing!

Zero Tolerance by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A disgraced general is given one last chance to redeem himself at the feet of his empress in the realm of mortal combat.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2441 Read Count: 3634
[Report This] Published: August 06 2018 Updated: August 06 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Zero Tolerance

What a coward, running from battles. He knows he has Fulda on his side so he basically can't lose! Rightfully crushed.

I like that you let Fulda torture our protagonist a bit before crushing him to death, instead of the usual quick death.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

I remembered you said that you wanted some slower deaths, and since you're probably my most frequent reviewer at this point figured I'd give you one or two : )

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always!

Summary:

A tormented teen finds himself in paradise... at the complete mercy of a loosely-friendly demoness.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Vore, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13083 Read Count: 25808
[Report This] Published: August 12 2018 Updated: August 16 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Surreal Reality

This is such a lovely and original story, I love it!

You did such a great job of getting us to feel for ben with some backstory.

It also combines both gentle (to Ben) and more cruel (her new host).

This story has so much potential, three chapters seem a bit to few.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

You're far too kind.

I know, I know. I'm horrible.

I'm at least trying to give the last chapter some pizzazz to make up for it, plus it'll be just a bit longer than the first chapter.

I'm having fun typing it but expect a short wait period. Check back once a day and it should but up soon. I'm introducing a character and adding a bit more giantess action.

In addition Athena shows her more mischievous side, but like she promised, Ben never actually gets bullied or hurt from her actions. <3

Anyways thank you for the feedback, it means a lot.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Life Regrets and Afterlife Glories

So sad that this is the final chapter already, at least its longer.

And I don't know why you are horrible, the only thing I can complain about is  maybe the missing pizza. 

The parts with Allison were also nice. Great to see how Athena uses her to nurture Ben to her will/personality, its both cute and dominating. I'm also wondering if Ben is able to "see" into the normal world, or can only do it using the sandbox. And speaking of that, it seems Athena created quite the ultimate sandbox. Are you sure ther isn't a fourth chapter coming?

At last, thanks for writing and see you next time I hope!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.

I'll be honest, I don't quite know what you meant by the "missing pizza"

Yeah, I love Allie as a character but I was afraid adding her would subtract attention away from Athena, who I didn't want to neglect.

I didn't let Ben see through to the real world, but rest assured, if Athena wanted him to see Earth again through her own eyes, she would let him.

I don't plan on making a fourth chapter, but like I've said before, it's set up to be kind of an infinite playing field. I could turn the story into a dungeons and dragons type theme with Athena as a huge DM and Ben running around with allies if I felt like it. I just get worn out from typing because I don't focus on anything IRL until I complete whatever story I start.

Thank you for reading my strange short story!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed
Date: August 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Misery's Company

Wow, that was a quick response!

About the pizza, you said that you would add some pizzazz the the last chapter in your response on my previous review.

And your done for now, so there is still hope for a sequel to this story. Thx!



Author's Response:

Sir, that's not what I meant by pizzazz lol.

Look up the definition on Google haha. I didn't mean "Pizza, the food" I meant "pizzazz, an attractive combination of vitality and glamour"

Meaning I just wanted to spice up the last chapter. That's all. :)

While a sequel technically could be done, I don't currently have any plans to do one.

I'm more likely to start a new story in the future. Just how I roll 

Spring Broken by Notkent Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A largely unaware focused tale of three girls that go on Spring Break and get more of an adventure than they bargained for.


Categories: Watersports, Adventure, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13657 Read Count: 60221
[Report This] Published: August 14 2018 Updated: September 11 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Monday

I wonder who is doing the shrinking in this hotel. It seems somebody is delibaratly placing the vicitims on inconvenient places. Suspicious!

Very well written story. I always really like the descriptions of the scenes you give, it really displays the helplessness of the victims.

Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 5: The Beach (cont)

Such a good story!

Seems like they don't stand a chance at these big girls.

I also like the way you describe the predicament of the tiny men. You make them seem really tiny!

Thank you for writing! 

Summary: In a medieval world shared by humans and giants, a weary traveler discovers an unlikely ally. Can a simple act of kindness forever change both their fates?


This story is unapologetically feet-focused. If that's not your thing, cool. Don't say I didn't give ample warning. I'm not interested in trying to trick anyone into reading.


Categories: Odor, Giantess, Adventure, Unaware, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13214 Read Count: 34565
[Report This] Published: August 14 2018 Updated: September 20 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Such a cute story!

And how nice of our protagonist to offer a foot rub.

Can't wait for the foot stuff to drop.

Also thanks for writing!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll try to make it interesting.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Seems Marcus is quite powerful. Easily more powerful than Elise, I'm starting to wonder who is helping who in this story.

But at least we have some more feet this chapter!

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response: Come for the foot stuff, stay for the story! :D Keep reading, it will only get more interesting. I mean, unless I manage to mess it up.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Smart play from Elise to acquire a new servant. Also a great way to impress her subjects.

Thanks for writing a new chapter!



Author's Response: It will be interesting to see who comes out on top in the end. I have not decided the ending yet, could swing either way.

Comeuppance by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Fallen from grace, a tyrannical former giantess endures a visit from her unsympathetic friends.

 

A short story to bridge between I Dream of Gina and the third part.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3459 Read Count: 7027
[Report This] Published: August 19 2018 Updated: August 19 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Comeuppance

Uh oh, Gina's friends already start to threaten Akane, how long will it be before Gina's friends takeover and start shrinking everyone in town?

But still nice to see that Gina gets some of her own treatment. A pity that there is no Krissie to give her a piece of her mind, I think she would be very angry because Gina is basically the reason because her tiny boyfriend is dead. Maybe Gina became this mean because she never had a tiny boyfriend, but always wanted one like Fulda, and was taking her frustration out on the tiny terrarium.

Is Alana now taller than Gina ever was? Also, Gina still lived with her parents right, wouldnt they notice that Gina has basically been replaced by a gigantic, cute Asian girl?

Also, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Right now they're content with their petty kingdom in Gina's room, but who knows where they'll be in a few months?

 

Gina did have a tiny boyfriend, for almost six years!  He just didn't want to be her boyfriend, and she treated him like garbage and was about to get rid of him.  Maybe she really is rotten to the core and Akane's efforts to rehabilitate her are in vain.

 

Akane is taller than Gina was, she's just much less excited about it.  The parents spend a lot of time out of the house, which is why their daughters had so much free reign to do whatever they wanted.  If their mom did ever see Akane she'd probably shrug it off and be glad Gina has a new friend.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Camilla by little mikey Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times.  Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47101 Read Count: 61757
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmm, it seems it is time for Mark to simply submit to Camilla, but that wouldn't be fun right?

Your stories always describe this slowly falling in to submission and loosing all power thing very well!

Also, thank you for writing!

Summary:

The adventure was over, but the lust for loot brings one adventurer low when he encounters a fell creature behind a secret door.  Now his torment is her pleasure, and she has no intention of letting him go.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56513 Read Count: 98226
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: August 01 2020
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Demonic Possession

Kirinhalut already abandons her tiny man?  Fulda at least stays with them usually, until death parts them. But hopefully, he will experience some good adventures.

I also like how big and detailed you described Kirinhalut in this chapter, thank you for that.

Also, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Fulda's mean, but Kirinhalut is the embodiment of pure evil.  Not exactly the perfect picture of loyalty.  But fortunately for the protagonist, things don't always go her way.

 

Thanks!  I noticed that recently I was starting to lean more toward "well, she's big," and wanted to rectify that with a much longer description of how absolutely gigantic she is for the POV character, and I'm glad it worked.

 

It's a pleasure to write, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2020 Title: Chapter 4: New Limitations

Kirinhalut went from having no travel companions to having a lot in a short time. That must be so cosy! No wonder she doesn't want our tiny protagonist to tell them stuff that could get them killed.

Speaking about the company, the pixie is really mean. Telling everyone that our protagonist is useless. Maybe she is jealous she isn't the tiniest anymore and therefore she has to share attention or something. At least there are two nice people in the party.

Our protagonist is lucky that he didn't get stuffed into a boot, that would have been a lot more uncomfortable. Kirinhalut being pure evil seems more and more like a farce at this point, she still doesn't choose the worst she can.

Thank you for picking up this story again, I like it. Hopefully until next time and as always, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

What better cover for a succubus walking around than a party of adventurers?  She just has to make sure the little guy keeps his mouth shut for a bit.

Kiri has her preferred methods, and crushing someone in your hand is, I think, pretty bad!

Thank you for reviewing!  I figured I should start working on my backlog of unfinished stories before getting too burned out again.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Getting Rest

Seems like Kiri has everyone already wrapped around her finger. I already thought everyone was already too eager to bully the poor guy.

At least he has some help now.

Thank you for writing and untill next time!



Author's Response:

Influencing mortals is what succubi are best at, and she's doing a good job of it.  We'll just have to see if anyone can do something about it.

And thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Helping Out

Wow, he still didn't tell on Kirinhalut. I would have cracked under the pressure and told on her already by now I think.

I hope Sondra can begin something against Kirin, but that is probably a futile thought.

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

Don't underestimate the powers of demons, in terms of suggesting and otherwise.

And thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Sinister Plots

Sorry for not reviewing earlier!

I was busy moving.

Some of these girls are really hostile, while some are inspiring.

I think Bushwack is just a case of sibling rivalry. She is just kinda jealous she doesn't get all the tiny attention!

I'm curious as to where this story goes! Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

You might be on to something there!  Now that Bushwack isn't the smallest, she's jealous of how tiny he is, but also mad he can't do anything.  Maybe she'll come around to him, though.

You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Settling In

Somehow it doesn't feel very safe that he is sleeping alone. Somebody could just steal him and  nobody would notice. I hope he stays safe.

I also hope they find a way to ditch Kiri. She barely gets to torture him, why does she even stay with the group? Can't she bully someone else and leave these poor people alone?

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

He's in a room with three much larger people, I'm sure he'll be fine.

Kiri's only been not torturing him for like 10 hours in-world, and she has a good reason for sticking around.

You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!