Reviewer: meereten01 Signed 
Date: July 27 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Dream State
I just wanted to ask of you could make a story with some slower pacing and some growth in it, and here it its, even before I asked!
Sometimes I think descriptions of the doom/ending part usually could be a bit longer I think because all the tinies seem to die so quickly in your stories, but I thought that was just your style. There is usually so little description that I as a reader barely notice the "doom" and its over.
Your stories also read away nicely in general.
Like this story, with a quick but powerful plot setup at the beginning and good action.
Lets hope Sarah and our main character have many adventures together.
Also, Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: With this story I'm trying to get a bit out of my comfort zone, and that involves taking it slow. I've been meaning to do a more playful story for a bit, and kind of did that with Dollhouse but that was a much quicker story. Shrinking is going to outpace growth, but that's just because it feels more natural to me - the POV perspective changes more drastically (if you shrink 5' you're ankle-height to everyone, if you grow 5' everyone's waist-height to you), and people are less apt to notice a 1" tall man than a 100 ft tall woman. Since the focus is going to be on the main character and Sarah, I'd like to keep Sarah crushing houses out, except maybe in dreams.
As always, you're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
