Penname: Texasisntreal [Contact] Real name: Andrew L
Member Since: November 15 2015
Membership status: Member

I'm not really that creative of writer, but I want to try on this website and see if what I have is any good. I appriciate any critiscm, so long as its in some form of detail.

Also, don't expect anything from me for feet. I know its a huge thing (pun intended) for a lot of fans of these types of works, but I really don't like it. Insertion, Butt, Breasts, Gentle, Vore, Incest, Entrapment, Unaware, Watersports, maybe even Scat. Those things are more up my alleys rather than feet.
Think about it. It makes more sense for me to write about something I'm interested in rather than try to be creative with something that doesn't catch my interest. 

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I get stuck at a friends house, while they are unaware.

Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Insertion, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1437 Read Count: 18889
[Report This] Published: August 24 2015 Updated: August 24 2015
Reviewer: Texasisntreal Signed
Date: December 06 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was this written in 3rd person or 1st person perspective? It gets confusing "He, I. I, he"

Also, don't you think Emma would notice that her friend who was going to live with them didn't show up in the 5 days he was actually there? (that's just something that caught my attention)