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Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 1335410
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: August 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

There needs to be warnings on stories like this that let the would-be reader know that the author has a one-tack mind and is horrifically obsessed with feet; so much so that they cannot have the MC interact with any other character without involving their feet in some way.

 

Feet, feet feet, toes, feet, shoes, feet, socks, feet FEET FEET. We get it, you like feet. Your MC is just a projection of yourself, who also is obsessed with feet. Please make it this obvious in the description so people don't waste hours of their time hoping to get to the good-stuff that doesn't exist.

 

That being said, it's decently written, although some idioms, colloqialisms and descrptors are repeated frequently and 70% of the story can be abridged to 5-6 chapters for the same effect.

 

Highly reccommend this if you're mindlessly obsessed with feet.



Author's Response: "Your MC is just a projection of yourself, who also is obsessed with feet." Yep. "Please make it this obvious in the description so people don't waste hours of their time hoping to get to the good-stuff that doesn't exist." Nope.

Summary:

Mira is just a 17 Year old Senior in High School, who finally is getting her Wish for her Birthday: A Large Scaled Slumber Party, and the best part is..Mira's parents are out for 3 weeks!! The Problem? Mira has two little Brothers, Adam and Noah, who just so happened to invite 3 of their friends over, Jake, Josh, and Lucas.

What does Mira do? she decides to make them a shrinking meal, so they won't bother Mira and her 6 Friends, however, theres an Even WORSE Problem, or, make that two: They didn't even PLAN to bother them, and 2? Miras brother and friends are Shrunken and helpless against Mira and her unaware friends..

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2367 Read Count: 119294
[Report This] Published: February 04 2016 Updated: February 07 2016
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: August 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Horrible writing and boring plot. Why are random words capitalized all over the place?

Summary:

 

A day at the beach for one young child turns into an event that will change his life forever.
 

 

 


Categories: Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4427 Read Count: 28764
[Report This] Published: May 29 2017 Updated: May 29 2017
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: November 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Day at the Beach

The very first word in the entire story is a typo...

Summary:

Alex heads over his friend, Daisy's house to hang out. However, they soon get very hungry and as Alex goes to get the popcorn, something very unexpected happens to him!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2383 Read Count: 28419
[Report This] Published: August 01 2017 Updated: August 02 2017
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: August 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you need to buy a ruler and check how big six inches is. It's about the length of a hotdog. Nobody accidentally swallows a hotdog.

That aside, its decently written, but you use exclaimation points way too often; to the point where it reads like everone's either a bad actor or its a broadway play.

I like unaware and I like vore, and this is that for the most part, so it's alright.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing that out to me! That was a slight typo on my end. I meant to say 1/6th of an inch. Don't worry, I fixed it now. I also reduced the amount of exclamations in the story. Nevertheless, thanks for reviewing it! I appreciate it.

Summary:

Its Madison's birthday!
What will she get?

This story takes place in the universe of Brobdingnagians, humans and lilliputians.

 

Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 110961 Read Count: 415401
[Report This] Published: November 16 2017 Updated: November 29 2023
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: May 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Madison's birthday present

First chapter started off promising; like a good multisize pet/owner story with possible unaware elements but then immediately became an incredibly boring and uninteresting mess of "plot" that is both unattactive and totally unnecessesary. It had potential.



Author's Response:

Hey Aaperture, thanks for the honest feedback.
I must say, chapter 2 is the chapter where I am the least proud of indeed.
If I could do it over, I would have definitely chosen for a different approach.
But, on the other hand, Its all part of the progress.
I'm only a novice writer who is very eager to improve his skills.
And feedback like this gives me information of how the reader experiences my story.
I take every review serious, not only the positive ones ;)
Its very helpful!

Summary:

Andrew was supposed to be getting tutored by his nerdy female rival for class. Instead, her and her roommate will unwittingly teach Andrew a very different lesson.

Chapter 1 contains both a spoiler and spoiler-free guide for all tags used in this story.

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Consider supporting my work on patreon. Chapter 9 is on early access for $1, the full story is available for $5, as well as more stories, digital art, and extra content. patreon.com/unawareenthusiast


Categories: Butt, Feet, Footwear, Legwear, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Goddess
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14683 Read Count: 57259
[Report This] Published: August 31 2019 Updated: October 10 2019
Reviewer: Aaperture Signed
Date: October 16 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Guide

Giantessword is not a business proposition; you share your stories for others to read and enjoy. Using this platform as an advertising scheme and locking half of your stories behind a paywall makes you look like a scumbag. Not saying that you're not allowed to sell your content, just saying that this is not the place for that.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you feel that creators should be discouraged from giving people who support them monetarily an opportunity get some extra content. Giving early access and a single additional story for top supporters, when the vast majority of the written work is made available to the public is hardly an advertising scheme. I don't know if you have another username or have contributed to the community at all, but under this current username I don't see that you've submitted any stories, so I struggle to see that you have any ground to stand on when it comes to when writers are allow to offer opportunity to support them in exchange for additional content. Also, resulting to insults like 'scumbag' on someone's freely offered story isn't very helpful, so please refrain from that in the future. I'm happy to discuss these kinds of things in a polite manner. If you're not interested in that, you don't have to comment. I'll report any further posts with unnecessary language or insults.