Reviewer: adamnight Signed
Date: December 06 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This adds to the first chapter. had lots of fun here, what a way to go having a mouth of of sammys balls, lol. smaller shrinking sizes are so much better. you wrote it out totally best part was how the boy began to freak out of the radiadint heat and the balls not moving a slightest bit. really liked how Sammy moved his ass over his chair trying to get that annoying itch away. that was so hot and I had the picture in front of me, the guy screaming with a mouthful of ball skin, the cotton fiber of the material around him of the pants and jeans, smearing him into the skin.
A step even further would be someone having a mouthfull of wrinkled anus screaming. maybe make someone become transformed into a tiny butt lint lost on the wrinkled flesh inside Sammys ass, and him getting again an annoying itch sitting in class, thinking he didn't wipe properly before, contracting and rubbing his ass on his chair. a cruel twist plot could also be someone becoming literally a fart turning into a tiny gas cloud inside a boys ass, to just be passed away through the jeans, Sammy may even get embarrassed or try to pass it silently while sitting in class.Transform plots are the best for sure. This story already is arousing. love it