Reviewer: grpvore Signed
Date: July 17 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Detention
Hi!
First of all, I must say that your stories are fantastics! I am mostly a lurker, because English is not my first language and I find it a little difficult to express myself, but you are so great that I just made an account just to congratulate you.
Another thing is that I think that your stories have become too predictable. I know that you started making the bad girl get eaten to make them different and to stop giantesses get away with eating people, but now they always finish the same. I think that you could get with more variety (I must say that I got quite surprise at the end of The Huntress, I thought that she will end up in a belly at the end). Don't take as a "boo, you are repetitive", but as a "hey, you are great, but more plot twist and bad endings could make this more exciting".
Just my two cents.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for making an account and making a review you have no idea what that means to me! Thanks so much for the rating and a great suggestion! I will definetely take that into consideration for the future and thx again for reading and reviewing!