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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
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Date: January 11 2022 Title: None

What a cliffhanger! Bring on Victoria

Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.

The story is complete. We have two endings for those who prefer one over the other.

 

 

This is orginally Sm7in story but I found it on writing.com as an interactive story. I tweaked a route and created a new option.

All the credit is to Sm7in for this story.

 

Bonus chapter out.

 

I take reviews, suggestions, and comments and try to add them into the story. so if you want something to happen, review.

 

 

Disclaimer: This is the original authors work and property, all character and stories are his or her property. This is a work of fanfiction or tribute to the original author. All other characters or scenarios are properties of other authors. No money was made from the creation or continuation for this story.

You should check out this author, Sm7in, and his stories elsewhere

You can also add your own routes and options at writing.com

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129478 Read Count: 557988
[Report This] Published: November 10 2020 Updated: October 14 2021
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Date: April 29 2021 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73: Watch where you train

Definitely the latter. There's already chapters of her swallowing him on the interactive, but none with her actually using him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. We will be going with his Aunt using him. hope you enjoy seeing her follow the steps of her family.

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Date: July 02 2021 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81: Decision of a lifetime

Allison

Little Learning by AprilMJ Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

With the help of her teaching assistant, a small-town high school teacher intends on properly educating a class of grade 9 boys on the topic of sexual education using rather unconventional methods. Together, she and her students will embark on a semester of exploration, discovery, and exhilarating fun. After all, wouldn't everyone benefit from a hands-on sex ed class?


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Legwear, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 183559 Read Count: 224289
[Report This] Published: December 05 2020 Updated: April 28 2023
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Date: May 03 2021 Title: Little Learning

Wow, this is exciting. Can't wait for the rest!

Summary:

Rosemary was nice enough to invite me into her private sanctuary.  But will I ever leave it?


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 924 Read Count: 2084
[Report This] Published: December 09 2020 Updated: December 09 2020
Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Guest Inside My House

Wow, what a treat to read a new story of yours. I'm a big fan dating back about 17 years or so when I first discovered the internet world of this fetish. Thanks for your contribution and I hope you continue to do what you're obviously skilled at and have a passion for.

Summary: Past Featured Story

In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58984 Read Count: 111941
[Report This] Published: December 14 2020 Updated: January 09 2021
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Date: January 09 2021 Title: Chapter 13: The Path

Wow, what an amazing close. For me it was almost perfect. Though I wish it wasn't left with acceptance for his asexuality. Just seemed pretty clear it was a front for him. A self-label to keep that aspect of himself closed off from others. From being hurt. That also goes against Allie's constant setting of goals. Not advocating an explicit approach, but simply that she enjoys breaking through barriers with him and discover who he truly is deep down. I just don't buy him being asexual deep down, not with everything we've seen so-far. Perhaps that's an aspect your saving for a sequel or spin-off down the line? Other than that, well-done!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the ending. I understand your point about Brian's sexuality, and I'm sorry if you were disappointed about how that was left. I suppose I just didn't think it was a focus point of the story, more just an aspect of his character. If I ever do a follow up, I'll be sure to keep what you've said in mind!

Also, let me just say that I so incredibly appreciate your continued reviews. Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. I always looked forward to your thoughts, and reviews such as yours made it much easier to keep writing. Thank you so much again, and I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story the whole way through!

-Pluto

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Date: January 07 2021 Title: Chapter 12: The Damage

Perfectly written and thoroughly capturing. This chapter really pulled on the heart strings. Well-done.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it. I'm glad that the emotion came through for you. I hope you enjoy the (potentially) final chapter!

-Pluto

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Date: January 05 2021 Title: Chapter 11: The Session

I can see you put a ton of work into this chapter, and it clearly paid off. Well-down. As a reader/fan of Brian, I'm hoping he's actually innocent. I mean, even if he wasn't, I don't believe in cruel and unusual punishment (no matter how satisfying it may seem in certain scenarios). I also realize the grayness of life, and how a seemingly good person can do terrible things. But still, I just don't see how Brian could do something like that. There's been no evidence throughout and I feel like we'd catch a small glimpse of something off. So yeah, I'm hoping as a reader and for the story that he is in fact innocent but perhaps harbors the guilt of not being able to save him. I want the happy ending with him and Allie. Also I don't buy the whole asexuality thing with him. It's a mental front. Something related either to past trauma, or experience to protect himself. It's learned and something I hope you explore with Allie, where she successfully breaks through.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, this chapter was particularly tough for me to figure out how to do right. That's why there was a (relatively) long delay. I'm really glad that you and others have enjoyed it!

Brian's response to the session will be explained in the next chapter! I hope you find it interesting. There certainly is more evidence than not that he didn't commit the crime, but his reaction was questionable.

I hope you enjoy where the story goes from here!

-Pluto

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Date: January 03 2021 Title: Chapter 10: The Discovery

Totally see how the car ride scene from Spider-Man: Homecoming served as inspiration. I lied, I like where this is going. As long as Allie and Brian survive with a happy ending I'm good lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I have to admit, after your review for the last chapter I was a little concerned that people wouldn't like the direction I had planned for this encounter. I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying it! I hope you like where it goes from here.

-Pluto

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Date: December 30 2020 Title: Chapter 9: The Return

Loved the latest chapter, though I'm not sure where you're planning to go with the Cathy plot twist. Kinda saw this one coming, but not in a bad way. I just hope you figure out a way for it not to get too crazy without betraying any characters. Really, only thing that would make sense here is for Allie to knock Cathy out and go on the run with Brian. This would allow their story to continue, and perhaps lend them the tine and freedom to exonerate him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, it would have been odd to have a character like Cathy in this sort of story and not have her meet Brian at some point. I hope you like how this encounter proceeds!

-Pluto

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Date: December 28 2020 Title: Chapter 8: The Argument

Best chapter yet. Never has 4800 words read so quickly. Their argument felt real, like I was there. Good job, you nailed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found the chapter so engaging. The argument was tough to write, so I'm happy it turned out well. I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

-Pluto

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Date: December 22 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The Weekend, Part Two

Another amazing addition. Tbh I'm less interested in the mystery and more in their relationship. It certainly serves as a good backdrop, but their relationship is what keeps me reading. I think Allie would also eventually take a step forward regarding his intimacy issues too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I agree, the relationship between Allison and Brian is the story I'm trying to tell here. The explanation given in this chapter about the murder is more or less the extent I plan on going. As you say, it's more of a catalyst for the events of the story, and a backdrop for some of Brian's trauma. I hope you enjoy the way their relationship develops from here!

-Pluto

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Date: December 24 2020 Title: Chapter 7: The Weekend, Part Three

Another fantastic chapter. Funny, I was reading your response to my last review when all of a sudden this one dropped. I'm liking her current goal of getting him flustered. I see her doing some sexual teasing with him, perhaps at some point even a perverted hide and seek. I just don't buy his asexuality. Seems like a front he puts up to keep from getting hurt.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Funny how timing works out sometimes. It's certainly possible that somebody with Brian's experiences might put up walls to defend themself like that. If the kiss is what leads you to think that, though, I think it's fair to say that a giant kiss would leave most people flustered! I hope you contine to enjoy the story.

-Pluto

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Date: December 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Plea

Well I'm hooked!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! Thank you for reading.

-Pluto

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Date: December 16 2020 Title: Chapter 3: The Meeting

Wow what an awesome chapter! I really hope she does the right thing. Can't wait to read the next chapter, especially after that cliffhanger lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Like I mentioned in the end notes, my poor brain definitely needs a short break, but I'll have the next chapter up pretty soon.

-Pluto

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Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 5: The Weekend, Part One

You've certainly nailed the slice of life vibe, and I'm loving it so far. I did not see the asexual angle coming, but that almost makes him a more interesting character. I hope it's as fun writing this as it is to read it. Looking forward to seeing these characters continue to grow - and yes fellow LOTR fan!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, I thought it might be nice to have a reprieve from ethical dilemmas and emotional trauma for some relaxed fluff. Not to say those things are never going to come back, though.

As for the asexual thing, I did it as a way to add another reason as to why Brian doesn't really care that he's small. Something I see a lot in stories is insecurity from the small person since they can't do anything traditionally sexual with their partner anymore. I thought it could be fun to avoid that insecurity with Brian, since he never really wanted to do those things in the first place. I hope people don't think it's out of place in a story like this.

I am having fun writing this! This is unlike anything I have ever done before, and the positive response has been wonderful. The reviews are my favorite part, so I hope I can continue to look forward to yours!

-Pluto

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Date: December 18 2020 Title: Chapter 4: The Convict

Holy fuck this is good. Please keep doing your thing. I just can't wait to see them evolve and living with each other. Both really interesting characters I care about. Thanks and looking forward to the next addition.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate your continued reviews. I always look forward to seeing what you think. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

-Pluto

Friday Morning by MrD Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Keep the ball rolling on this thing;
Let's find out what happens to people who make it to the placement center.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58802 Read Count: 60373
[Report This] Published: December 15 2020 Updated: May 28 2021
Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2021 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Saturday Morning 2: Masturbation Harder

Hot and horrifying. Not gonna lie, I'm rooting for Anthony to make it, even if this is his poor existence. Either way, well done!

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Date: April 09 2021 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Incident at the Center. Prequel Chapter

Another great chapter. Adds some interesting context for sure. I still think the hottest ending would be Anthony's survival. Being turned into her permanent pet, conditioned to practically thank her for it.

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Date: May 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Friday Morning at the Placement Center

10 star bump, please continue!