Reviewer: Undersquid Signed
Date: June 18 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Guest Inside My House
What a great story! I kept thinking back on what inspired it, and recollected bits and pieces of it in your writing.
Rosemary is a character after my very own heart. Everything she does is right as rain, as the narrator must come to understand one day. For his own good.
I like the cadence you keep with your storytelling. There is a deadpan, natural glow retired from nervous energy, yet you manage a wonderful buildup with all manner of undercurrents. One of which could be terror, in some readers.
In me it’s delight in what I see, and agreement with a fate that does not include regrowth, and one that redefines freedom. Excellent writing, my friend!