In the future, modern feminism surely has left it's footprint in the face of men.
Great concept! Would like to see a little bit more detail on how the acts passed. Was there some kind of impetus behind why society accepted these draconian laws? Also, it's mentioned that all of the people in power are women. Was there a reason for this? One last suggestion is to write as if you're describing a scene happening without a target audience. The way it's currently written it's a little more like you're having a conversation with your audience (breaking the fourth wall, as it were). E.g. "You know what the worst part of this is?" could be "In a shocking turn of events, every piece of legislation put forward by these radical women's parties became law."
Your subject matter is incredibly topical in today's society, so I'm defininitely keeping an eye on this one. Thanks for sharing it!
What seems to be another day on Home for Jessica Martel and her family turns into a life and death situation when the son of an old enemy returns to seek revenge against Jessica. It seems straight forward, fight him and save the planet but life is rarely so simple. She may need help but who could assist her in such an endeavour?
I'm liking how you just jumped right into the story without a load of exposition, but then I'm also very curious about how the system works (how to titanesses interact with humans, what are their schools like, etc). I'm really digging the superhero aspect of it as I'm a big fan of that kind of urban fantasy writing (outside of GTS writing), so I'm excited for the tie-in.
I'm also very curious about the Dolorians, and how they can compete physically with the giantesses. The second segment is interesting, but I feel like I might be a little less lost after the next installment.
Shaping up very very nicely!
Thanks for the review! At this point in the series the only giantesses are Jessica and her daughter Dawn. Jessica got her powers as part of her job and Dawn inherited them. Normally the powers don't get passed on to the next generation but Dawn is part human and that messed with it to allow a transfer.
The Dolorians are using a mecha( like in Pacific Rim) to fight Jessica. If you feel lost you could read the other stories in the series, it would help.I don't want to say too much in here , I don't want to spoil things too much.
Some sorority girls end up in a really unfortunate situation.
Interesting story! It felt just a little stilted at the beginning but started to flow very well toward the end. I'm intrigued to see where it's going, especially with the size tags on there that we haven't seen at all yet.
I wonder if Jared can even tell they're tiny humans that he's using as tissues, or whether they really appeared as Kleenex to him. I would think that you would be able to feel the thrashing of someone the size of a Kleenex, but maybe not.
I'll be watching for updates! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. The story is actually finished, those size tags are there because the tagging system on GTS World is ridiculous and I had no way to remove them, hahah
It is such a treat to read your stories, Lancealot. This one is shaping up very nicely and I'm eager for more. Thanks for sharing!
As his sister slowly grows, Kyle finds himself losing control of their relationship...and of himself.
Loving this! Great writing, and nicely paced. My favorite part is the gentle aspect, and how sweet they are with one another. Really hope this doesn't change even if the MC does seem like he's going to be taking direction from her soon. Very titillating stuff. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the praise. I don't think it's MUCH of a spoiler if I say no, their loving relationship isn't going to change (at least not the way you're worried about.)
A boy shrinks, and his sisters document the experience on YouTube.
Great stuff! Haven't read the whole thing yet, but I can already tell this one is going to be one to remember. I'm not even into shrinking material, either. Just love the way the character personalities contrast one another, and the very real depiction of depression and terror that would be associated with the size change.
This is something I rarely ever see done in GTS writing, and it shocks me - you don't need domination/abuse in order to feel terror from this kind of material. Instead, it's the subtle, just-under-your-skin chills you get when you can realistically put yourself in this character's shoes and feel the fear they must experience, even with love and support from the other characters around them.
I'm rambling, but this is seriously good stuff. I want to set aside a good 45 mins or so and read through the whole things soon. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, White Wolf! You can skip to chapter 13 or so if you want to avoid the shrinking material. :)
I agree with your thoughts regarding the subtleties of shrinking. There are so many, keeping things 'realistic' still makes for an interesting story.
Wanting what he can't have might mean losing everything for Mike. How much would you give to date the hottest girl in school?
Incredible work! You truly have a gift. Usually I'm not nuts about humiliation stuff, but this was more than worth it.
BTW, I couldn't agree more about Olivia Taylor Dudley ;p
Good stuff, superb writing. Really excited to see Heather's humanity come through in ch 23. Very eager to see how this one is going to fit the NWO tag too :D
Keep 'em coming, please!
