Penname: InkPatch [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 29 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

[Report This]
Reviews by InkPatch
Summary:

A young lady, loving girlfriend, a kind protector and a genocidal monster. All these words could be used to define Kate. Part of a government experiment in genetic manipulation Kate surprised everyone when she responded far better to the treatment then anyone could have expected.

The story of this young lady finding love, leaving her home and how the world responds to her.


Categories: Giantess, Slow Size Change, Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 476536 Read Count: 177898
[Report This] Published: March 05 2006 Updated: December 22 2006
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstar
Date: March 23 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Rather a slow-paced chapter for its length.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And so the whole boyfriend thing begins. Somehow Kate's interactions with Amy seemed so much more interesting than this.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think you may have gone a bit heavy on the social realism front. Otherwise this is effectively an epic.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 23 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Somewhat long-winded but the initial impressions of the premise are positive overall, however there are a few cases where spelling and grammar cause confusion, also one character's name is used where another is meant. Lastly, don't use brackets in place of apostraphes and quotes.

Alice by Comrade Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Alice buys a mysterious old locket and shares its 'special' power with her sister and her school friends.

Premium Entertainment Comrades.


Categories: Incest, Body Exploration, Gentle, Lesbians, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33337 Read Count: 227216
[Report This] Published: December 17 2008 Updated: December 17 2008
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Alice & The Morning After

You've got a good framework for some truly extraordinary ideas here. I mean, a spectacular day in London of all places. (read: British weather)

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Epilogue

A most delightfully quirky conclusion for an x-rated work, albeit there's been spelling and grammar mistakes all through the story, which has led to quite a bit of pausing to deduce what was meant to be said.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews mate. I'm sorry about all the spelling, this was the first thing I wrote, about 7 years ago, maybe more. I think my story Small Doses is much better. But I do have issues in most of my life with spell checking etc. Trust me. 

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Alice’s Climax

For all the eroticism and... oh, I wanted to say something constructive here but the site logged me out when I tried to post the review... anyway, sometimes the fact that they're all at different scales can be a bit heavy on our efforts to picture it.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 28 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 7: Mena & The Costume

I'm not usually a fan of bondage and the like but you've made good use of the setting for it to be of little consequence to those of us who are much more focused on the size-shifting elements.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 6: Charlotte & The Big Screen

Rather a clever use of a risqué setting.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 4: Chelsea & The Mountains

And so the real body of the story begins.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 27 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alice & Bath Time

Looks like this story's really starting to get somewhere. There's a fair amount of promise in this chapter.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstar
Date: February 27 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket

For an opening it could work very well, if it's possible to go back and correct the spelling mistakes.

Summary:

A secretary goes into her office one day to find that everyone is missing...but, of course, they're not REALLY missing....


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Vore, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11677 Read Count: 29686
[Report This] Published: December 08 2011 Updated: December 08 2011
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Were you thinking of uploading the sequels as well?

Summary:

Claire is just starting a degree course at University. She's nervous at first but finds a friend in her new roommate. Her unexpected dwindling leaves her as the only person to know of her tiny roommate. Feeling guilty that it was her fault Claire decides to look after her.


Categories: Entrapment, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Mouth Play, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10563 Read Count: 42471
[Report This] Published: November 18 2013 Updated: November 21 2013
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The space between her toes

This seems to be a well thought-out work so far. How's the next chapter gonna turn out?

Summary:

After finding her best friend shrunk to the size of an ant, Elise puts herself in charge of her. Being a very gentle soul, she soons begins to love Jade, the shrunken best friend, like she has never loved someone before.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4977 Read Count: 53253
[Report This] Published: December 30 2014 Updated: January 29 2015
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstar
Date: April 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Discovery

Some of the dialogue seems a bit rushed and the imagery could use some more detail.

Summary:

Maggie, a 1-inch tall woman, gets lost out in a snowstorm. In desperation, she hides by the door of a woman named Ava to wait out the storm, only to be snatched up by her before she could escape. Will she treat her nicely?...

Yes, it's a nice, fluffy story.

 

I made this for the Size Matters Discord Contest for December 2020. I didn't win, but I was pretty proud of my work, so I figured I'd post it here for everyone to read.

Final Scene Image


Categories: Breasts, Couples, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Warmth
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1952 Read Count: 5258
[Report This] Published: December 27 2020 Updated: December 27 2020
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Warm Reception

A sweet little story. Pity it ended so soon; it would've been interesting to hear more about their antics.

Author's Response:

If this gets a good response, I might continue their adventures (especially since they're OCs I've wanted to make for a while) 

Summary:

A series of one-shots based off of Disney's Alice in Wonderland (1951).  Each one-shot is based off of one of the shrink/growth scenes in the film.  This is merely a hypothetical of how each scene might play out under different circumstances.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Object, Mature (40-49), Crush, Destruction, Gentle, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35684 Read Count: 49789
[Report This] Published: April 12 2021 Updated: June 21 2021
Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

Some marvellous reinterpretation of how the narrative could've transpired while maintaining key characteristics of the source material. However I'd like to point out that, while it was a cake in the book, the film you're using involved biscuits/cookies.

Author's Response:

Minor material deviation on my part, I'll confess.  Leaving aside the cake-cookie dichotomy in this story, I'm happy that this story caught your eye and amused you.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 15 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mushroom/Bird in Tree Episode

All three of the former scenarios are most interesting. Were you considering a few more works that look at how the conclusions of each would've affected the path of the story?

Author's Response:

Something I may consider in the future.  Right now I'm writing other works that are a mix of both giantess and harem elements.  If I'm feeling curious and brave enough, I might try my hand at something similar to this little project of mine.  I went with a hypothetical "what if" story line based on "Alice in Wonderland" because I already had a lot of backstory to work with.  Maybe one day I'll do something similar with another story, like "Attack of the 50ft Woman" or "Honey I Blew Up the Kid".  Don't want to go too far down the rabbit hole (pun intended), but it's an avenue I might pursue at some point.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 18 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

This is a brilliant conclusion with an amendment to the conclusion of the typical Alice in Wonderland adaptation. It would be interesting to see how Alice's life would pass from here, how the relationships she has with those outside of her family differ or how similarities could be maintained.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the praise.  I got somewhat intrigued on how to finish the final one-shot, so I opted to have Alice not only stay as a giantess, but to have the reality in her world alter significantly so that she became a giantess (and royalty) in her original world once she woke up from the dream of Wonderland.  Figured I would try to have a surprise twist ending to finish this little project of mine.  Glad it caught your eye.