Reviewer: Algo Signed
Date: October 25 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I want to say i am loving it, cleary Casey and Kelly are enjoying it the most, specially Casey, Lisa not so much.
And i hope the formula only works in the three things, and they keep getting bigger and bigger! Well maybe not Lisa, i wonder what will she think if she was the only one ending returned to normal.
Still keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
Lisa is not enjoying. Any joy she could get out of her situation is shadowed by the guilt she feels at the consequences for others, including her boyfriend. She had been brought to the limit and she had found out her heart is gentle.
Kelly really likes being big and the possibilities it offers, but she cannot stop thinking on the long term consequences of what's going on. In her mind, they cannot stay this size forever and this is a big restraint, since she knows that any thing she does while being big will be remembered once she gets reduced. She has chosen not to express her feelings so much, to prevent getting caught in the rising tension between Casey and Lisa.
And Casey does not care at all about any consequences. She enjoys her new size and is drunk in power and the only thing that is preventing her from letting the full bitch inside her out is a certain inertia of her former life, where not getting caught was as important and breaking the rules. This inertia is fading away, though...
I'm posting chapters as I get them properly formatted for the web. In the meantime, I'm already halfway through Part II. I'm not sure if things will happen as you expected, but I believe that you will enjoy the direction the series is going.