This appears to be another outstanding contribution to my entertainment! I'm really looking forward to the interactions between Elaine and Sam.  Will Sam be the same kind of character as Jack Dalton... an unforgettable character, who is not only respected by other men, but attractive to women? Especially those with power...

What I've seen so far leads me to believe that this will be one of your best yet! Keep up the good work.

Thanks for that...

Tigernach

Just finished reading this story. Quite original to me. I've never read one here that was based upon the theme of drug-induced reality.

Coming from British Columbia, I'm familiar with the names of several varieties of the green stuff, and was even once subjected to partial effects. But I'm allergic to the effects, and therefore know little else about the weed. That brings me to this question: What is 'Purple Kush"?

My preferences are in the area of the Gentle Giantess nature, furry stories involving non-human characters, Tolkien-world races, etc. Whether Science-Fiction or Fantasy, is unimportant to me: a good read, whether it involves sex or not, but without cruelty for its own sake, holds me fascinated right to the end. I'm not really into evil characters, or evil for its own sake, since I've seen my share of such to a greater degree than I ever care to experience again.

Anything that reeks of adventure, new experiences that can be educational, or life-building, are welcome. I find stories that involve interaction, on at least a neutral basis, are fascinating, especially since different writers have different views on how such things would play out. I no longer care for 'hack & slash', 'full speed ahead and damn the torpedoes', 'foot-kissing', 'ass-kissing', and other self-destructive acts in the same degree as I might have in my distant youth.

Since that leaves a whole world of options to be seen & experienced, I'm still pretty wide open to what's available. Does that help to define my interests?...

Beautiful concept and well-done. I'm having difficulty in paying attention to the quality of writing. Keep up the good work!

I thought that I had commented earlier, but since I hadn't, I'll do so now: fascinating concept... I really like it! I can't wait to see where it's going to lead.

You commented that you had been critiqued on DA for giving measurements... whoever did so deserves to be critiqued themselves for giving bad advice! There is nothing wrong with providing basic info to assist the reader in his/her visualization of your story. Anything that helps the reader to understand your story, without interrupting the flow of the story, is eminantly acceptable.

Keep up the good work, and stick with it. I do recommend getting more familiar with the metric system, if you intend to use it... and don't mix metric and english measurements in the same paragraph. It's too easy to confuse what you are saying. Otherwise, come on back and continue your story!

You have presented an interesting viewpoint here. And it may well be so.

But being a follower of Celtic thought and philosophy, I believe in the Mother Goddess and her philosophy. I think that many Macrophiliacs probably do also, though they may be unaware of these considerations. I suspect, also, that many of us believe that men have so damaged our world through their religions and wars, environmental wasteage, and more, that we feel that women cannot do worse. Rather, the 'nurturing' side of women would lead to a much more peaceful world and a healthier one.

I've just finished reading the first 3 chapters, and you have a very interesting story here. I like the POV you're using, and am looking forward to the next chapters. Good Luck and continue the good writing!

You've got a great start here; don't be afraid to continue. Great profession for the human character... where can it take him? I think his meeting with the Elven giantess in the first chapter is great, and bodes well for your story.

It has been a year now, and I'm wondering if you intend to continue with this story. You were off to a very interesting start, so where were you going to take it forward? Hope you haven't decided to write it off...

Having now read up-to-date, I continue to enjoy your story. I have the same comments as before, but don't let it bother you too much. I spent many years as a technical writer, and such things catch my attention quickly. But I can still enjoy a story that is well thought out. It might be a little difficult for me to sync with young people and their ways of thinking now, but I try.

Re' your auto correct: Don't let it correct your spelling, itself. Use it to give you options, but make your own choices.