Reviewer: TheFilthyHarlot Signed
Date: April 25 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Stacy + shrink ray =
I've followed you're story since you started writing it, and I have to say that I love everything about it so far. I'd like to see some hard vore and descriptive insertion if you have it planned. The spider bit in chapter 3 was brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that you enjoy this story so much and I am thinking about starting it back up. Unfortunately, my mind has been very unwanting to write where I'll get an idea for a story but as soon as I start it (Or write a single chapter) my brain just forgets it and wants to move on. I'm also currently spending a lot of my time learning Japanese and that has become an almost full time task. I might try to start this story again and incorporate your ideas when I get around to it. TBH I'm not big on hard vore but that's only when I'm reading. Writing it should be fine and I was going to make that one insertion scene I wrote A bit more explicit but I didn't want people turned away. After all I was writing about a young girl performing sexual acts. I'm also glad you enjoyed the spider scene since I always thought that scene was severely lacking.
Anyway, thank you again for your words and I shall try to continue this story. The story line is nowhere near finished and I have a few more ideas.