This chapter did a great job of showing what Alvin must endure on a day to day basis. I'll admit, if I was Cassie I'd be more concerned that a little man was tied up and gagged rather than nail him as a pervert. But I also understand she was too angry to think straight so it's not really a problem for me. Plus Alvin shouldn't of peeked. I know the temptation was great but I doubt it could be worth your life.

As for Cassie, I'm hoping I'll like her. I don't know if Wendy has any redeeming qualities but Cassie seems pretty cool, just in a temporary bad mood.

And finally I read your comment with chlorez. I also always put myself in the main character's shoes. Despite what I wrote about in my last story I am extremely against suicide. Still, if I was Alvin, my first idea of getting good with Cassie would have been to break down crying and then tell her she'd be doing my a favor if she crushed me. Overly dramatic? Definitely. But would it have made her pause and think twice? Possibly.

Anyway I'm loving this story so much and it's only been three chapters. Great work.

I can tell from the first chapter alone this is going to be a roller coster of a story. One of those stories that makes you feel all sorts of emotions. Already I feel bad for Alvin for his situation but at the same time respect for being able to endure through it all.

Patricia is interesting in the fact that she's not a Cinderalla step mother. When I first read that Alvin had to do chores for his step mother and sister I thought "Ok thats interesting. I haven't read a good Cinderalla giantess story before. Let's see where this goes." But rather than act all cruel she's more detached and doesn't pay much mind to him. This makes her stand out more since she's not something I expected.

And finally Wendy. I hope she's not the main antagonist. I love it when sibblings come together more than when they are at odds against each other. I am not going to tell you how to write this. You are the author and the story is yours to command. But for now I'm hoping she's one day open her eyes up and see what it is she's been doing to Alvin. This is just me but I see it where it's this big emotional moment where Alvin is broken down and crying and she's just standing there like "What have I done?"

I don't know, I just think if you have to live with an 8ft tall Amazon who knows how to wrestle then you're better off befriending her than being at odds with her.

All in all I really want to read more of this story. I don't really have any constructive critisism to offer (since I saw nothing wrong at all) but I'll try to think of something helpful as the story progresses. All I can think of now is: this is your story. No matter what I say, write it the way you want it to be.

Do a lot of people a huge favor and keep writing this story. Unfortunately it's too late for me to read anymore beyond the second chapter. But I'm really loving this, so much. 

I'm really into fantasy genre, I'm in the middle of reading The Wheel Of Time series right now. You pull it off so well it's incredible. You have just the right blend of story telling an eroticism, something I can't pull off. The scenes with the foot action and the mouth play are awesome, and I hope there is a lot more of Thalana's feet.

But at the same time you have a world that is really well established and in depth characters. All in all keep this story going. I can't wait to finish it.

I really enjoyed this one. Especially the description of Sam in Mandy's cleavage. You should make a sequel where Mandy has enslaved a bunch of people and makes them worship her all over, feet, ass, breasts, etc.

All I have to say is that more people should be reading these.

This is definitely a creative idea you have going. I haven't read anything yet, but I expect to be definitely impressed, mainly on the grounds of you being able to pull of a project like this. I'd love to include myself, but I'm afraid you've got a plethora of characters already, and too many tends to crowd up the story and take time away from other tinies. Plus I can't imagine what the hoops you'd have to jump through in order to comply with everyone's requests. All the same I wish you the best of luck with your project.

I'm almost angry that it ended where it did, only because I wanted so badly to see what happens next. I wish I discovered this story after you had written the last chapter because I feel like I could binge read the whole thing right now. 

As always I love the characters, I love how real they feel and read, I love the emotion you convey, and I love the questions you ask when detailing Tanner's big character vs his small stature. Is it truly better to live an independent life when you know you're inviting in all kinds of abuse and potential pain? It's a good question to ask. 

As always I can't wait for the next installment. After all of this torment is finally done I think Tanner deserves a kinky scene with Gail just so that he can experience some love to go with all the domination.

I didn't get an update that you've added a chapter so I've only just read it now. Wow. that was some intense emotion, made even better by the back story at the end. You use those little nuggets of the past very well. You don't over use them, so when we do read them, those little peaks into what makes this family tick hit that much harder. Don't let anyone tell you you're not a good author. 

As per usual the portrayals of everyone are great. Huge respect for Tanner for standing up to Ivory. If I knew Tanner in real life I'd love to be his friend. He's the kind of shrunken guy I'd want to be. The one strong enough to keep trying to live in a world that outgrew him. Even if he didn't succeed, the fact that he hasn't taken his own life is a testament to his strength.

I can't wait to see Ivory and Ingrid clash over what just happened. No way that isn't going to happen, what with the evidence left lying in a wreck on the floor. I like the dynamic. Both love Tanner and want him to be safe. Ivory wants to treat him as a glass ornament. Ingrid wants to treat him like a person. Gail is still around outside, I think. She might be there to comfort him at this time. I'm not sure.

I hope you don't mind long comments my guy. Understand it's one of the greatest compliments I can pay you. When I read a story like this. A story that prioritizes loveable characters and a great protagonist, over senseless festish material, I can't help but go on about it. It makes me think. Makes me imagine what I'd do in these scenarios. Makes me think what would happen in What If scenarios. It brings out the best in my imagination. And that is a gift. Keep writing dude. 

Though truthfully I won't say no to some good fetish material. If ever you want to add more of that, be my guest.

I meant to write a review of this a long time ago, so I apologize for forgetting, but it still needed to be commended so here I am. This story has so much about it that I love it's amazing. The characters are so real and relateable. the dialogue between them all is better written and more natural sounding that some TV shows and movies that I've seen. The scene with Ingrid finally taking down Marcelle was like the release of a long pent up breath, a long time coming and satisfying to the extreme. Now that you're setting the stage for Gail and Tanner to maybe become a thing, I'm kind of into where it's going. They're really nice together and their conversations are fun to read about, how they philosophise size difference and stuff. That alone is an enormous compliment to your writing. When you can just write a conversation and I'm entertained by it, and the thought process behind it.

I know you just had a conversation with Gail thinking about other people being small but I'd love to read something about Gail talking about what it would be like if she were a giant in a world of tiny people. Maybe have the mood turn all sexual again and it may lead to something between her and Tanner?

That's just a suggestion. I don't ever want to tell you how to write your own story, because I can't ever do someone else's work better than they can. Go with whatever you want to do, and it'll come out as the best version of your work. I just wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed it. Please keep doing what you're doing, and I look forward to the next chapter, and whatever comes next for Tanner, Ingrid, Blake, and Gail.

That was a pretty satisfying chapter. My only complaint is that I think the big blow out between the two of them was too short. You know how to write convincing emotional dialouge between characters, so I was hoping that would go on a little longer. Just to make sure both Tanner and Ingrid were able to communicate everything they had been mulling over the past few days. I can't even say that's a complaint though.

Once again the relationship between the brother and sister is my favorite aspect of this story. It's very real, so congratulate yourself on pulling that off. Now all that I need to see is for Marcelle to be delt with. Preferably by Ingrid, who is capable of physically throwing her out of the house (or Blake, since she's even bigger). However, I'm sure whatever you have planned for that situation will be more than adequate for the story, so I leave all of that in your hands. I look forward to seeing this continued.