Love it.

It isn't as funny as you may think. The derogitory comments of Hitler and Bin Laden could have been used to your advantage, but you say your against jews too. The humor is offbeat and offensive, and it is not that sexy.

Haven't read the chapter yet, just guessing that Between Tulips actually means Between Two Lips.

Author's Response:

;)

Great new chapter. I'd love to see more trio stuff with Peter, Blue and Cal. Who knows, maybe a showdown between Cal, Blue, Erica and Lisa VS Mandy, Shannon, Amy and Other One to capture Peter. It would be kinda cool. It probably won't reach such heights, but just throwing it out there.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I can't quite confirm or deny a massive showdown like that but we may well see several of Peter's allies coming to his aid in the near-ish future.

I don't know... maybe it's her name, or maybe it's her all too cheery attitude, or maybe it's that she's taking space from Lisa, Sharon, Mandy, Erica and Calvin, whom I like all of, but for some reason I'm not quite sure of, I don't like Bluebell.

Author's Response:

I guess we can't be sure for now. For Peter's sake, though, it would be lucky if your hunch is incorrect.

HALLELUJAH!
You did it, Jacky boy! This chapter I could tell had more detail on every single thing. This chapter was just one interaction that focused on everything it can! Thank you, Jack.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

Uh yep I sure did.

Yeah, I know, but I just think that so many other characters are more interesting, like Erica, Mandy, Sharon's Goons, Alita, Leah, Tritter, the unknown girl who (SPOILERS) kidnapped Peter in the clarinet, the mom, the play woman, the guy Peter met at the play, and like I said earlier, Sharon and Lisa.

Author's Response:

It just comes down to personal preference, I guess. I'm trying to give Peter a wide variety of personalities to contend with here. All those characters you mention will ultimately have much more real estate in the story than Stella.

What a clever way to sneak foot porn into a chapter where he doesn't like or touch the feet. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Ha. Thanks.

Here's an idea for a short story, or possibly a chapter. The time spent between Jack, Brian and Kelly's escape and the eventual defeat of Julia/recapture or whatever you have planned, from the perspective of Gina, who must face taking care of Brian Jr and having Julia constantly breathing down her neck.

Author's Response:

This actually is something I considered doing as a chapter, but ultimately decided not to because the whole story has stayed in Jack's perspective up to this point. A short story from Gina's view showing the time while the others were escaped may be something I explore after this one is finished, however, because there is some potential for conflict there.

Top Ten Julia Characters
(Spoilers)

10. Jim
This character may have only been in a flashback from Chapter One, but he left a lasting impression on his house mates. After being fed up with Julia's mistreatment, he stood up, and was tortured and executed in front of Jack and the group. It's because of his death that the others are so afraid of Julia.

9. Kelly
This former nurse is always trying to help her team. Trying to keep peace in the doll house when necessary, and knowing when justice needs to be served, she gets the payment she deserves and escapes Julia's house of horrors.

8. Anna
The ill-fated member of the original five, Brian's beloved and Faith's mother just wants to see the group succeed, but she sadly dies giving life to Faith, leaving no dry eyes in Giantess World.

7. Faith
Anna and Brian's beautiful daughter is the ultimate symbol of hope for Jack, Brian and the rest, giving Brian a reason to fight for, as the last part of Anna left.

6. Dr. Arthur Goodwin
The inventor of the PMRD, and one of Julia's original victims started off as sick and scummy to Jack, Brian and Kelly, but they soon realize that he paid for what he did much more than them, and he redeems himself in the group's eyes.

5. Charlie
Talk about scummy, this is THE scumbag. Never fully on anyone's side, he's the ultimate traitor, who ends up killing Beth in hopes of getting close to Julia, only to get killed by the girl he strived for. Payback's a bitch.

4. Gina
Afraid of heights and Julia, Jack's girlfriend is his reason to fight, and how he keeps his sanity. She may start off scared, and reliant on Jack, but through help from Jack, herself and even Julia, she's able to overcome her fears and stand up to Julia.

3. Jack
The protagonist and narrator of Julia, he was the first hostage, and is the one sent as a double agent by the group to Julia. His love for Gina stays strong no matter how much he is abused by Julia.

2. Brian
Father, teacher, mastermind, martyr. These are just four words we could use to describe this poor guy. Losing Anna and Beth may have hardened him, but he still has feelings. A man who will stand up to Julia no matter what, his sacrifice makes him come full circle, as he finally took the ultimate stand against her.

1. Julia Mack
This psychological and physical monster is by far the meanest and most terrifying character on the site. Always balancing on the tightrope of cuteness and psychopathy, until the end, in which she falls off completely, after constantly being betrayed by the one she trusted the most, yet at the same time, it's fully deserved. The ultimate bitch had to come down, and this story is all about that.

Author's Response:

I appreciate the thoughtful stances on the characters; certainly I wouldn't have expected to see them ranked. Thanks for reading!