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Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.

The story is complete. We have two endings for those who prefer one over the other.

 

 

This is orginally Sm7in story but I found it on writing.com as an interactive story. I tweaked a route and created a new option.

All the credit is to Sm7in for this story.

 

Bonus chapter out.

 

I take reviews, suggestions, and comments and try to add them into the story. so if you want something to happen, review.

 

 

Disclaimer: This is the original authors work and property, all character and stories are his or her property. This is a work of fanfiction or tribute to the original author. All other characters or scenarios are properties of other authors. No money was made from the creation or continuation for this story.

You should check out this author, Sm7in, and his stories elsewhere

You can also add your own routes and options at writing.com

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129478 Read Count: 561968
[Report This] Published: November 10 2020 Updated: October 14 2021
Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 08 2021 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

I would vote for Steve being stuck on the penis of the Man for now.

It can be a new experience that Steve will have to deal with when the date is over, he will be stuck on this unknow man penis for some time while being 100% unaware by him. And maybe this dude will have a date with another women that then Steve will be shoot out from the dude dick and into this other unknow women womb.

Not sure if this drug that was used on him is different since he shrunken even smaler than before and If it's different maybe he will be that small for a long time than before.

Can't wait to see more~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Steve is stuck inside the man's dick right now. it is possible for him to be stuck there for a while. right now we are deciding if the man shoots Steve into Aunt Maria or holds off for someone else. 

 

The drug is keeping him small and it will keep him small for a long time. the drug is not having the effect of making him smaller than before. Everytime he goes in a women's womb, Steve is able to shrink farther than he has before.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: April 20 2021 Title: Chapter 69: Bonus chapter: New year, New behaviors

Love this one! the whole development of Steve training of being a pleasure toy for Kara was fantastic, and the part where she reveals to her drunk husband about the tiny he brought to her after having sex to another women was also amazing and even after he wakes up the next morning thinking it was just a weird dream I could fell that he imagined how much torture he would have objected the poor tiny thing but then decided it was just a hallucination and stop thinking about it, sealing Steve's fate for some more time in Kara's womb, I loved both couple interaction with a tiny man involved on it as well~

And my vote is still for Steve to spend his time with his Aunt, he still needs to put his training into practice if he wants to survive being a sex toy for the womens that decided to use him, also he needs to be prepared, because one day one of those mature womens can decided to keep him in her womb and never let him go, so is best for Steve to be prepared if he ends up having to live for the rest of his life in some womens womb as a sex toy.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reivew. I was trying to find a way for Kirk to find about Steve because of reviews but have it so where steve could move on without Kirk feeling remorseful or obliged to take care of Steve. a forgetful drunk is what i came up with. it would allow Kara to call out Kirk's affair while still having a loving relationship. For Steve being in the womb, we will see more of Steve finally coming across that woman that will use him a lot.

 

for the vote, we are 0 votes for sister and friends, 1 for Aunt and friends, and 2 for Mom

 

 

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: April 05 2021 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Graduation day

Wow! Kara had three kids counting Steve on it, it was smart of the nurse to take Steve out, imagine if Kirk saw that there was three newborns, he would be confused and if they try to take Steve away I'm not sure if Kirk would let then do that after all he would think that Steve was his son.

I still votes for the Aunt choice, I really wants to see Steve training in practice while pleasing his Aunt and all her friends, how knows maybe there'll be another couple sex interaction and Steve will have to be part of it~

But either way as long Steve is used as a sex toy for the ladies pleasure, I don't mind anything else at all~



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your response. There is a small group of doctors that observe Steve from a distance, Kady's wishes. Allison would have told them about Kara carrying Steve so they could plan accordingly to pick up Steve. 

 

I am still waiting for more votes to come in so that we can create a poll of what people want. so far I have one vote for Aunt and one for Mom 

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 29 2021 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Time to begin the New Term

Nice one!

I'll still vote for the second idea, imagine Aunt Maria and some of her friends using little Steve for their pleasure~

Oh and yes I would love to see a extra inbetween chapter of more background story about Steve's whole month training with Kara, imagining him being bathed by both couple sex juice while having to use that same sex juice as a food and water source for him to survive, it would be amazing to see it.

and the results seems to worked pretty well~ Steve is an obedien't sex toy now and will stay tiny for as long as his mistress commands him to.

Kara for sure was a great character to develop Steve into a sex toy he will be for all the womens that'll use him for now on~

That's why I choose the second idea, so Steve can serve all womens and put in practice his whole training by being small and be used for all of Aunt Maria's friends pleasure for the whole summer.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I plan to write a bonus chapter that goes a little bit more detail or scene of Steve's training. We will see a little bit more of him trying to survive in there until the pills arrive to start the cyce again. Kara did have an affect on Steve and we will see how that plays out with other females.

We are just having to wait and see how the voting goes for the next Arc.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 26 2021 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Womb to Improve

I'm loving this!

Good to know that Steve can learn to obey~

Also I would vote for the second one idea with Aunt Maria.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I hope you like the results of the training. I will count this as a vote for Aunt Maria.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 20 2021 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: Time for co-op Learning

That was quick! and I love it!

Glad to know Steve will be in Kara's cunt with Kris help and there'll be some cockvore before he goes there.

It's good to also know Steve will eventually go back to his family, but I need to say a part of me wanted that both Kara and Kris "that would be aware of tiny Steve" could keep him as their little sex slave and he would have to live with them for some long time until he finally would be able to escape them, but that could take a while.

But anyway that's only my desire, can't wait to see the next chapter, I'm actually curious to know how Steve will go back to his family, will Kara bring him back or will he be able to escape and go back?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I will have Kara become aware again of tiny Steve but not Kris. There are only a few guys that will know about Steve being able to shrink and that one so far is Garrett. Kris, I believe from his character, would be a little mortified of finding a tiny human during there sex. I could have another guy come around find him and toy with him but I would have to think about it and it could be getting close to breaking the original author's rules. as for the little sex slave, Steve will be like that with Kara until contact is made with his family. You have to wait and see how it goes for Steve to get back to his family.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 19 2021 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Test two is for Pussies

Love this chapter! I love how Kara is being dominat on little Steve and he have no way to escape her.

I would say for her to wait and let her husband do the finishing job, will give a taste total control over Steve giving him no hope of escaping so soon.

But who knows. Maybe he can try to take a ride back into her husband cock and hope he will date his Aunt again and finally go back to his family.

But either way this part is being amazing! Can't wait to see next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. We are having the husband finish the job and push Steve inside her. I will try to have a little cockvore in the chapter he goes in but Steve is going inside Kara soon. The next arc might contain Aunt Maria, I will let readers decide once we get to the voting period. Steve definitly will get back to his family at the end of the arc.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 13 2021 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: Footwork for the First Test

Oooh I see~ Kara did that to keep Steve small again~

She'll take good time using him for her own pleasure, I like it~

Can't wait to see next part!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. Yes, kara is trying to keep Steve small so she can use him for her pleasure. Hope you like what comes up soon.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: March 07 2021 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Inform the Teacher

I'm loving where this is going~

Mrs.Adams for sure will take some good time training little Steve to be the perfect little toy for her.

Not even sure if she will ever bring Steve back to his home, like she said it's her dream to have a little person for her to play with, as long as she keep Steve horny he'll be tiny, unless she discover what drug his sister used on him to keep him small for a longer time, she could easily keep him, which in my opinion is quite great~

Not sure when this story will end but I wouldn't mind Steve being Mrs.Adams little toy/slave at the end~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Mrs. Adam's is going to use Steve for a little bit before he goes into the womb. Steve has to beack to his family eventually but that doesn't mean that Kara doesn't have some time with him. Her session with him will probably beat something into his mind to make it hard to resist woman wiles. 

For when this story will end, I have one or two more arcs before it will be curtains for the story and we will see what Steve's life is going to be.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 22 2021 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: To play with your dream

Great chapter! 

I love how Mrs, Adams "Kara" is all dominant and don't waste any second by using Steve for her own pleasure.

For the next chapter I think Steve could tell her his condition, but not tell her how he end up in her house, not gonna lie I don't want her to find out that Kirk was fucking another women, They both deserve to be happy after the last chapters with them, maybe he could make up a story that he end up losing himself from his unaware Aunt while walking home and then he tried to contact Kirk for help by climbing him but ended up taking a ride to their home.

And knowing that no one knows that Steve is with her, Mrs. Adams can use that opportunity to keep him and use him for some good and long time~

Can't wait for the next chapter, I still hope that later on the next love section between Kara and Kirk, Kara put Steve in her pussy while Kirk fuck her unawarely about little Steve and shove him deep inside her womb~

And also I really hope other people comment/review this chapter too and give their thoughts too.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Steve is going to tell her his condition. For tell ker about Kirk, I went with Steve telling her about it but not make her upset. Kirk did deliver to her, he dream. I do plan for them to still be in love even though she know about the affair. Kara is just going to use him to fulfill her desires with Steve.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 20 2021 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: Get ready for after school hours

Awwww.... Too bad Kirk spent too much energy and ended up falling asleep, didn't had time to notice the little man on is wife boob.


And I think Kara should right away use Steve for herself, not sure if she had work next morning but even if the drug effect is wearing off of Steve as long Kara keeps him horny he'll not grow back and she would use him and probably later she could add Steve for one last sex section with her unaware husband and shove Steve all the way in her womb~


Maybe she could even tell her husband about the little man she found and that both of them will use him while having sex, and with that maybe Kirk would also be into macrophilia and would enjoy together with his wife little Steve until it is time for him to go all in Kara's womb~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I do plan on Kara using her husband to shove Steve inside her but I don't think he would be aware of it. Steve is Kara's little prize and she wants him all to herself as much as possible. 

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 16 2021 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Mountains to learn from

Wow! two chapters at once! I love it! Also I love how much Steve went through, To finally exiting Kirk's cock to almost being swallowed by Kara, also I loved how desperly Steve wanted to hold himself on Kirk's dick for salvation of ending up being swallowed and digested by his wife, better being safe than anything else right~

Also I'm glad you liked my suggestiongs, it could be interesting whoever finds Steve first, his lusty teacher or her husband.

If Kirk found him, it would be the first time a normal size male character would interact a little with Steve.

I was also gonna suggest last time that maybe both of them could discover Steve and would take this opportunity to use Steve for their own pleasure.

Kirk would feel extremely superior around the small stature of Steve and how his whole cock is basically a giant building for him while Kara would enjoy for the very first time have a tiny human squirming inside of her. 

They both could have their way with Steve until he finally go straight into Kara's womb~

It would be for sure their best sex ever.

But either way, I'm sure the next part will be amazing too~ 

I can hardly wait.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and suggestions. I went with Kara finding him. I believe it would be better for the story having the Kara find him and have her way with him than Kirk. I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 15 2021 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost

Nice chapter!

It's great to know both of them want a kid and Steve could grant this wish for them~

And about for the next chapter I believe Kirk could go straight for the pussy, but instead of Steve ending up direct to Kara's womb after being cum out, he actually end up just in the vagina and then Kara find him, wonder how a tiny man ended up in there and before Steve can say something to her or get some help from her she just decided to ignore him and use Steve for her own pleasure and just then this can lead to two different routes for Steve.

One is that he finally grow back to normal size after Kara had her fun and return to his home.

And the other would be a sort of "alternative ending" where Kara shove Steve back in her vagina wanting him all the way in her womb, and with the help of Kirk that's still unaware about Steve, they both have sex again and Steve is pushed by Kirk and finally end up into Kara's womb, and with that Steve is "reborn" and are now their son.

But that "alternative ending" is just a wish of mine.

Another choice that I would choose that could be interest in my perspective would be Kirk cumming Steve out while using Kara's boobs to masturbate and then instead of Kara finding Steve first, it would be Kirk that would found him, he would excuse himself to go to the bathroom to interrogate the tiny man and after hearing that he's Maria's nephew he would be scared that Steve could end up telling his wife about Maria and with that Kirk would try to silence Steve by putting him inside his wife vagina without her knowing and fuck her hard hoping that it would silence the little Steve, but in the end Steve is just roughly shoved into Kara's womb by Kirk dick.

But that's also another wish of mine. I'm sure next chapter will be great~



Author's Response:

Thank your for all those great suggestions. I like them a lot nad hope that I could use one of them as a start if readers want that. I am right now giving readers the option to see if one of the couples find him before he goes in the womb. you will probably see Kara use Steve for her own pleasure if she finds him and Kirk will try to silence the little guy. I went with oral sex for the first part and led to boobs for another reader which allows Steve to be noticed by one of the two.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 12 2021 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: A love renewed

Amazing!

And of course the date will go well, Kirk will be able to fix his relationship to Kara, Steve will be shoot out of Kirk's balls and into Kara womb and Kara will have a little man for a while "before he grow back to normal" to use to please her when she want to use him alone or when she and her unaware husband decide to have sex using him for extra pleasure~

It's a win win~ "Maybe not for Steve, but oh well, life is unfair~"



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Kirk will fix his relationship with his wife and they will get it on. I like the idea of Kara finding Steve and playing with him for a little bit before shoving him inside her womb. I have to see if others will like that as well since you brought the idea up.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 11 2021 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: There is o rest for those who lost

Love this chapter, also loved the little itch that Kirk felt before going to sleep at the end, not even aware that he's hosting Aunt Maria little nephew in there, wich also shows that Steve attempts of getting attention or trying to get out of there on is own are in vain and are just a little itch for Kirk to scrach and forget for a while.

I would suggest that Kirk shoot his load into his wife womb, But before that, Steve could be stuck in Kirk's balls longer, just to build up the story a little longer, for Kirk to solve the problem he and his wife had, maybe go out on a date with her first and then they would have sex.

And while that happen, Steve is swimming around inside Kirk balls trying to find a way to get out, but just like I said it's all in vain and he stay in there until he finally is shoot out and into Kirk's wife womb, and with that making them both technically the new "parents" of Steve.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Steve will be stuck in Kirk for a little bit so that Kirk and his wife can probably fix things. Kirk will be annoyed by the itch during his time leading up to the moment. Will have to wait and see how Steve gets out of this.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 10 2021 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Time to play ball!

What a excellent chapter, and my choice would totally be for the mysterious man to end his date with the Aunt early to carry Steve for now and shoot him out in a difference women that will also be unaware about him.

And who knows, maybe this man is already married and will shoot Steve out into his wife womb.

Either way it'll be an amazing chapter that's for sure~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I did have them end the date early causing poor Steve to be stuck in the man's cock. everyone is unaware of the tiny Steve right now. it is now time for Steve to go in his wife or someone else.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 09 2021 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: No Advantages at an Away Game

And about the Man identity, I actually don't know, maybe he could be a new character, a matured daddy man that no one ever heard about before.

Also about what I said of Steven being stuck on this man dick being a new experience for him, what I wanted to mean is that maybe in the future when he does go back to his family again this kind of thing can happen again to him, like ending up in one of the womens vagina or assholes while a normal size dude fucks them and Steven presence being unaware by the giant man, at this point he would need to accept the situation he would be on for now on, he would be an addition/extra for the womens pleasure while having sex with some normal sized mans, I just imagined a scenario where Julia's husband comes back home while Julia have little Steve inside her vagina and then both goes and have sex while her husband is unaware about little Steven in there being pushed in and out by his cock and then he cums and Steve is washed away on his cum and into her womb he goes again.

Can't wait to see next chapter~ this story is really good~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I believe I am going with a new character that hasn't been seen yet in this story. I still giving people time to decide if they want a new character or use an old male character in the story. The two other male characters that have been introduced in the sotry are Garrett and Julia's husband those are the two I am working with. if it is a new character, I will take the mature daddy into consideration. I do like the part of the woman being totally aware of a tiny Steve in her asshole or vagina with an unaware male having sex with one of the women. 

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: February 05 2021 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: A Stinky Drive to a Date

Nice chapter!

also I'm really glad to know that the Aunt and her date will be completely unaware about little Steve and that he'll probably be part of their "ball game".

Can't wait to see the next chapter~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. The two of them are going to be unware of the little watcher of their "ball game" and will join in.  I am glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2021 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest

I liked the date option , I wonder who is gonna be the Aunt date be, if it'll be a man or a woman, if it's a woman that's super fine by me~

but if it's a man it can be interesting too, like when both start doing some sex shenanigans at some point Steve ends up inside his Aunt womb and then when he grow back a little the Aunt and her Lover will think that she's pregnant without knowing that it's Steve in there.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Aunt Maria on a date is where this is going to go. The date is going to be a man. The original auther has rules of what I can do with the characters, I can have some of that content but it can't be a major point of an interaction. I can tell you that some stuff is going to happen to Steve while others are unaware of him being there.

Summary:

Prologue


We enter this story just after the events of the original Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie.  The kids have been restored to their normal size and the Thompson and Salinski families have feasted on their giant turkey.  But past the euphoria of the kids being saved from their plight of being shrunk down to the ¼ inch tall, trouble is brewing for Wayne.  Diane is still unsatisfied with their marriage, and Wayne weighs the risk of the size changing technology falling into the wrong hands.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Giant, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6702 Read Count: 46225
[Report This] Published: November 15 2021 Updated: December 22 2021
Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed
Date: November 17 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this story so far~

"Poor" Nick, to be on the pocket while being pressed by Russ cock  to now be pressed by Kayla nipple.

Loving this whole FM/m interactions hope to see more~