Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed
Date: July 16 2021
Title: Chapter 1: A Brand New World
Took me long enough to leave a review but just like you, I wasn't in the right headspace to leave one all this time...! Regardless, I am thoroughly enjoying the story thus far and loooove the character development!
I can't wait to see how jennifer will react when she meets Cathy, although I won't lie, I'm heavily rooting for Cathy in this "battle" Jennifer is kind of getting on my nerves with her over-protectiveness but I guess I can see where she's coming from.
I also can't wait to see Cathy make an appearance again! I've mentioned how I have a weakness for her..!
Regardless, this is a shorter review than my usual ones (mostly because I can't recall all the chapters and what I've read in them) but still a meaningful one!
Awesome work as always, and I love the fact you accepted the role of this fiction as an erotic one, cause that's what it is in my mind as well lol.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hey, I'm really glad to see a review from you! No worries about not reviewing, though, I'm happy just knowing that you're enjoying the story. With that being said, I always really enjoy your thoughts!
I'm very happy that you're liking the story so far! Character development has certainly been the focus, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Yeah, I certainly couldn't forget about a character like Cathy! I hope you enjoy her return, since I know you're a fan of her. I am too, so I'll do my best!
Absolutely, Jennifer is going overboard with her protectiveness and defensiveness. That's definitely the point, and Brian will actually be talking to her about it in the next chapter. I do think it's hard to blame her, though. Her entire universe was flipped around within the last week, and she's only 18. She needs some time to adjust. However, she still needs to consider Brian's feelings. And in her conflict with Cathy, safe to say that nobody is going to want them to be in the same room!
Yeahhh, gotta just accept things for what they are sometimes. It also wouldn't make sense to spend so much time building up his sexuality only to ignore it after one sex scene. The question, I suppose, is how to make a sex scene not feel forced...
Anyway, thanks again for the review, and I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto