Penname: Tiny-Zane [Contact] Real name: Alex
Member Since: August 22 2013
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Summary: A young man plagued with self-doubts has a girlfriend he thinks is too good for him. She purchases a magic wand...
Categories: Mouth Play, Transformation, Object, Giantess, Body Exploration, Insertion, Vore, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 32229
[Report This] Published: March 07 2007 Updated: March 07 2007
Reviewer: Tiny-Zane Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked the story. It has a nice plot and set up for Natalie. I didn't know which direction Natalie was heading; was she angry with Frank? Did she just want to play with him knowing that he has no say? In the end I think it came to the second question, yet the ending is something I don't really see here. Usually no one goes that route and show that she loves frank but still has some control over him.

In the end I think you ended it perfectly. Nothing needs to be added on purely because it can. Personaly I don't really see where it could go besides showing off different girl that take Frank like almost every other story.

Good job! I hope to read more work by you soon.

Download/Guide by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A short story. You find yourself mysteriously tiny in the messy bedroom of a young shut-in girl, as she tries her best to turn you into the perfect worshipper. 


Categories: Humiliation, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3434 Read Count: 12460
[Report This] Published: January 07 2013 Updated: January 07 2013
Reviewer: Tiny-Zane Signed
Date: October 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really nicely made story, I'd like to read more. It has some questions that I would also like to learn such as how Emily got ahold of you, what was her blog about and the whole guide and gigs a person's worth basically just the questions everyone wonders. I hope you will continue but if not I'll keep reading cause you're a very good writier!