Membership status: Member
Bio:
Categories: Mouth Play, Transformation, Object, Giantess, Body Exploration, Insertion, Vore, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 32229
Date: May 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really liked the story. It has a nice plot and set up for Natalie. I didn't know which direction Natalie was heading; was she angry with Frank? Did she just want to play with him knowing that he has no say? In the end I think it came to the second question, yet the ending is something I don't really see here. Usually no one goes that route and show that she loves frank but still has some control over him.
In the end I think you ended it perfectly. Nothing needs to be added on purely because it can. Personaly I don't really see where it could go besides showing off different girl that take Frank like almost every other story.
Good job! I hope to read more work by you soon.
A short story. You find yourself mysteriously tiny in the messy bedroom of a young shut-in girl, as she tries her best to turn you into the perfect worshipper.
Categories: Humiliation, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3434 Read Count: 12460
Date: October 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is a really nicely made story, I'd like to read more. It has some questions that I would also like to learn such as how Emily got ahold of you, what was her blog about and the whole guide and gigs a person's worth basically just the questions everyone wonders. I hope you will continue but if not I'll keep reading cause you're a very good writier!