Penname: bluetack [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 09 2013
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Summary:

A story that Smushed Boy on Deviantart asked me to write, here is a link to his art: http://smushedboy.deviantart.com/

You take on the character of Kyle who works at a spa that shrinks people down for the female clientele.  One of your regulars rents you for the night and adventure ensues.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21780 Read Count: 131352
[Report This] Published: July 16 2013 Updated: November 28 2013
Reviewer: bluetack Signed
Date: August 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Working at the Spa

hey!! this is great reading.
I was wondering if you would consider keeping emily unaware the ENTIRE time so that the protagonist is constantly unknowingly used by her? Thatd be great.
Will the focus switch over to her? Looking forward to seeing many more chapters of emily
Keep it up, excellent writing style.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yea, kind of late for that now, haha.  I'll consider making a friend of hers and have her be unaware if/when I write the sequel...