Penname: Story smith [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 26 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm the kind of guy that enjoys a good story. A story that is all fetish and no plot has no interest to me. I hope to create some great stories with a good balance of plot and appeal the everyone will enjoy.
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The Final Frontier by KevinFred342 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Bradley Peterson was miserably celebrating his 30th birthday, drinking his sorrows of his dying youth away. After passing out in the middle of a park, he wakes up to find himself in the capture of a woman from a planet of massive and highly technical advanced human beings. The woman, Arell, has been watching Earth for centuries, studying the humans there (Earthies, as she calls them) for her people. Given complete freedom to do her work as she pleases, Arell has decided to abandon her observing position for a more hands-on approach. Bradley must now face a seemingly invincible foe to defend his planet!


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Crush, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50728 Read Count: 70403
[Report This] Published: July 22 2013 Updated: September 10 2013
Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 10 2013 Title: Chapter 9: The Ultimatum and War

Dude I love this stark fellow he's got some real balls hope you keep him around for a while more

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 10 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Bradley's Last Stand

So in all actually Arellano was just another fucked up human...good this shows that all sentient life host the same seven deadly sins. Lust, gluttony Greed, sloth, wrath, envy, pride. it may had taked some infulence on our part but Arell shows some of these sins.

I feel that your story should act as a sort of template for anyone who wants to make a giant alien race as the background to their giantess cause even if they act superior, morally the are not and anyone who thinks up a sentient race that's socity is some sort of utopia need to relize such a thing does not exist

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! I'm glad you think I did that well! It's more credit that I gave myself! :)

Spirited Away by Uncle Funkle Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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Categories: Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 46975
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: February 15 2014
Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: October 06 2013 Title: Spirited Away

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2013 Title: Spirited Away

Ah vanish, you got the worst luck

a strange friendship by quicksilver123 Rated: R [Reviews - 5]
Summary: a hunter injures himself and is found by a giantess who was banished because of her strange affection for tinys.
Categories: Vore, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1129 Read Count: 22376
[Report This] Published: August 14 2013 Updated: August 15 2013
Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: August 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The story shows promis but I think you need to be more detailed. You need more than just the bare facts of what is happening

Sovereign: Vampire's Evolved by asukafan2001 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A girl who looks fifteen but, is really over 800, drunk young adults, and this thing called the Sovereign which isn't even talked about. A ruined outfit, and a guy who might be a prick or your best friend. Not sure what this all means? This story may explain some of it or give you more questions.


Categories: Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Adventure, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1436 Read Count: 4181
[Report This] Published: September 03 2013 Updated: September 03 2013
Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 03 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Sovereign

....uh ok that was different

Author's Response:

Thats the exact effect i was going for. 

The Girl from Another Star by Malaka Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Four boys head too deep into the forest, and end up very far from home.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30948 Read Count: 85039
[Report This] Published: September 15 2013 Updated: January 20 2014
Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It seems that space related giantess stories are greatly popular lately I wonder if this has anything to do with Titan?...your story does show promise so don't think I'm just gonna compare you to the Titan universe ok? By the way what happen to the other 3 boys?

Author's Response:

I did have this story as an idea for a long time, but yeah, it was reading some of the great Titan stories (and several other sci-fi giantess tales) recently that made me finally want to go and write it.

The three older boys are still on the ship, but Mira doesn't know about them yet. And they're not eager to reveal themselves to her, not knowing what she'll do to them.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: October 09 2013 Title: The Girl from Another Star

“Holy shit, that’s Mars!” he exclaimed. “That’s the closest planet to Earth…I thought we’d gone further by now. Whoa, it’s so big!”
“Big? Ha! We have islands bigger than that on Varyaton. ‘Mars’, you say? Have you ever been there?” I like the chapter my friend but isn't this statement a little far fetched? A planet large enought to have mars be an island would be so big it could only be a gas giant. Of course this is a fictional story so anything goes but a little realism does go a long way.

Author's Response:

You're right, a planet with that much mass would probably have to be a gas giant, if not a star. A rocky planet that size would be too massive to exist. But I chose to make Mira's homeworld a scaled-up version of Earth, perhaps with a greater fraction of water, and less rock. From her perspective, Earth would be just over 100 miles in diameter, too small to be a suitable homeworld. So I made her world much bigger in proportion. Hope it's not too unrealistic! :) Mira herself wouldn't be able to exist in real life, her weight would be much too great for her body to support.

Special Someone by Gtslover4 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

John has a disease that has caused him to shrink. Around half of the world's pop shares this problem. Living with his shrunk mom and dumped by his normal sized gf. John meets a normal sized girl named Kim, and the two learn that true love comes in all sizes.


Categories: Couples , Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18493 Read Count: 60514
[Report This] Published: September 23 2013 Updated: January 31 2018
Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstar
Date: September 25 2013 Title: Special Someone

Good detail but I feel as if things are running a bit slow, there doesn't seem much of a point for this story except Hay! there dating! Yeah! I feel you need several big people who are against the idea, with at least one that's a guy, ....what I trying to say is that you need to create a problem for you main characters to overcome.

With that in mind I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

I planned out for this story to be more of an sweet and feel good type deal. Opposed to some stories were it is just one bad thing after another. I actually feel I slightly rushed the relationship part so things like sex I don't plan to do till latter on to keep a real feel. That and these first few chapters are there mainly to build John and Kim's relationship. If you was wondering though I do have a villain planned out for this story and it isn't John's mom. Right now I don't know how much of a threat it will actually be but there will be conflict in this story so don't worry.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Way Things Are

I like the story so far you made a smart logical move with his mother having trouble trusting giants keep up the good work

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Way Things Are

To me pal it dosn't matter If the giantess is nice or not just as long as there is a decent and steady plot developing. I haven't read any of you stuff beside this one, but this story shows promises so maybe I go check out what else you have....just do me one favor though ok? A lot of authors seem to write a story that has excellent potential but at some point they get stuck and just up and abandon it.

Would you please keep this in mind and make sure you finish this story? Even if it takes you a while?

Author's Response:

I know the feeling and I have been guilty of starting stories and slacking majorly on them. I'll try to keep in mind some people might really be interested in my story and use that as a reminder.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: September 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Way Things Are

Kim doesn't seem like a girlly girl to me my friend I think she needs to stay that way. If there was a confrontation I would rather her throw a punch at Cindy than bitch slap her.

Of course it's your story so do what you please

Author's Response:

By girly Kim isn't a pushover. She can be emotional and sensitive at times but she isn't some super girly girl so don't worry. I'm looking forward to writing more chapters were she expresses both her sweet side and her more serious don't mess with me side.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: October 01 2013 Title: Special Someone

Last chapter I complained about Kim and how you would present her in the future either as a girly girl or a tomboy....with just on chapter you ended any and all concerns! Keep it up!!!

Oh and please, with Cindy cryin to her boyfriend, don't do something Clichè like the boyfriend tries to fix the situation and the starts comming on to Kim. Such situations are common and obvious and I feel as if such a situation would make the story weaker. That's just my opinion though.

Terra by lancealot501 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary: Terra is a half giant mercenary who ends up in an accident. What happens when she meets a small figure and falls in love? Will she find out the truth behind what happened 9 years ago and what he has to do with it? Read to find out.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59841 Read Count: 400680
[Report This] Published: October 26 2013 Updated: January 09 2020
Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The accident

Willing to bet money that Terra's mother is a giantess. She is half giant after all. Wonder if she needs relationship advice?

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Instinct

What I would do it type the whole thing in a word document, italic what you want, then copy and past the whole thing to the page here.

And btw the story isn't that bad. Sure it could be improved upon but critics that say they hope the story doesn't continue are just being mean. ALSO Amazon is a category on this site. And if you compair Terra's amazon height to Icarus short stature then it is giantess content

Author's Response: I actually copy and paste from my word document(I have a folder with all my stories). I'll hopefully figure it out some day.

Reviewer: Story smith Signed
Date: March 30 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Awakening

Epic shorty saved the day

Author's Response: More like created an opening, but I can agree with that.

Castaways by RMWALA Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Three friends get in a huge and messy accident, findind themselves stranded on an island completely uninhabited by people. There's a few species however that should be taken note of on the island, and a mysterious force surrounding that said island has left them with a big surpirse and unknowingly to them a big gift as they enter and attempt to survive their predicament. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Maternal, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25593 Read Count: 107314
[Report This] Published: January 14 2014 Updated: March 21 2015
Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 19 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Michael's Bigger Mess

Great! Couldn't have been better. Now a truely titanic women has come in. I don't have any idea how you will progress at this point though, maybe the trio will spy in this new girl and see if she might be friendly.. And maybe they might get caught...

Oh btw since you take reviews into consideration I think you might need to add that reviews give away some spoilers to the story in the summery lets people know so they don't loose the surprise when reading

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, but yah I'm kind of having hard time on deciding where to go from here :(

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 20 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Love Lost and Love Found

To character-Ok first think Natalie, your logic is flawed a bra cannot be found at the bottom of the lake if it is floating.

To author- I don't think the girl should be aware of them till later, by having the trio(mainly Natalie ) try to avoid contact with the Titan sized female it might add some suspense to the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, by the time I'm reading this the next chapter is already written though, make sure to review the next one to get your ideas in, thanks!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Separation Via Storm

So not just one or two giantess but four! Maybe you should create a whole native tribe of amazon sized women that protect some sacred relic of a past civilization that is the cause of the mysterious growth of women on the island, And unknown to them,despite the fact that their growth was instantaneous they are still secretly growing little by little, more and more

Author's Response:

I've been think about having a tribe there, there's no doubt about that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2014 Title: Castaways

Damn your fast with posting I just read the last chapter this morning and now there is another one!?!? Well done, well done indeed

Author's Response:

Thanks lol

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