Penname: ionflame [Contact] Real name: ionflame
Member Since: February 01 2013
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Summary:

When Mary goes to use her teleporter pad, there is a malfuction and she finds herself in another dimension where everyone is much bigger than she is. Will she be able to get their attention or will their mundane everyday chores be the death of her?


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Feet, Footwear, Lesbians, Odor, Unaware, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4270 Read Count: 42148
[Report This] Published: December 11 2015 Updated: February 13 2016
Reviewer: ionflame Signed
Date: December 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

Loving this story so far. I know you've probably already wrote the next chapter but I'm rooting for patty not to find her. Instead, let's have some unaware sex. That's always interesting to see an author write about.

Summary:

A girl wakes up, unsure of where she is or how she got there. However, she soon realizes that she's not as big as she used to be.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52510 Read Count: 373808
[Report This] Published: October 09 2016 Updated: April 13 2017
Reviewer: ionflame Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

Please keep it Unaware! There seems to be a shortage of good, well thought out Unaware stories and I must say, your work is great. The detail is great and it is all very grammatically correct. Thank you for an amazing story so far.

My only wish is for it to stay unaware, but that is ultimately your decision.



Author's Response:

I plan to have a few more chapters that have some unaware in them (I have like 3 partially finished chapters thay take place relatively soon), but there will be aware soon. 

Reviewer: ionflame Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

Still the best story on this site so far. I'm really enjoying the unaware aspects, and as for some more fodder for idea I would recommend something to do with unaware. You haven't explored the sexual organs of either girl that much, maybe something unaware with Krystal and that new guy she got a number for? we also haven't seen any indication that it isn't just the tqo sisters in the house. I think also a little unaware with Jeene, (i forget how to spell her name, sorry) and Sara could be cool. If you haven't figured out already, I like unaware. Unaware and the protagonist living at the end of the story are my two favorite things about stories. 

Besides ideas, there's a typo in your first chapter where you call her Krystals older sister by a different name.



Author's Response: Why thank you! ^.^ I feel like I still have a ways to go to complete with some of the veterans on the site (Duggernaut, Mr. E, to name a few). As for the typo in the first chapter, HOLYCRAPHOWDIDIMISSTHAT? It's been fixed, thanks for pointing it out. I think unaware will be staying with Krystal, but I do have plans for Sara to be a sex toy for both (thinking strapped to one of Krystal's toys might be fun).

Reviewer: ionflame Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground

Great story! I loved the latest chapter. Unaware is my personal fave so thank you! As for ideas, I would love to see some more unaware Krystal and maybe some unaware from her sister. Maybe a plot line where Sara tries to escape, gets caught in clothing and has to remain still as to avoid capture. Becoming trapped in the private areas of either sister is also an idea. Maybe she gets shrunken down really small and visits past the cervix. But that's just rambling, your story your rules.



Author's Response: I think Jeanne is too intelligent to not notice Sara, at least within a few minutes. But more unaware Krystal is definitely in the works! As for super small (under a 1/2 inch), that will probably happen in a different story, I've kinda set Sara's minimum height to that.

Reviewer: ionflame Signed
Date: January 19 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Warming Up To It

Please dont kill her! 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

*mini screams of distress* 

More unaware? Hero gets trapped somewhere until she can be safelty unshrunk after your Beth storyline? Then Jeane gets unawarely treated by Krystal? That'd be cool. 

Please. 

 



Author's Response: lol, you're the only one who wants her to live. :P I'm not sure if I'll have another unaware chapter in this story, but I do have a one-off story that's almost completely unaware. I think you'll like it, provided I get off my lazy ass and finish it.