Reviewer: Stan1341 Signed
Date: January 09 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Little game
Let me start off by saying I LOVE this story! I love this story so much I registered just so I could review it. There is something about the dynamic of a sister taking control of an older brother that is ridiculously hot!
That being said please start up with the sexual stuff! I'm talking in between breast rides, panty rides, insertion, ass action, etc...
I've never been a huge crush/vore fan and this story is taking a turn towards the vore side that I'm finding disinteresting. The end of this most recent chapter showed a swing back which was great.
Still, you've got this powerful female character who's in control of her miniscule brother. Lets be honest - just like the penis is a symbol of male dominance a woman's breasts and vagina is her's - NOT her mouth. I realize it is some people's cup of tea but not mine.
Please keep up the great work!