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Elevator Girl: Granite Man's Last Rescue by macromega Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

The mysterious mastermind makes a deadly move; Dakota's health comes into question; and, as the title suggests, Granite Man makes his final rescue.

This is the eighth Elevator Girl adventure.

Elevator Man and Granite Man are the property of their copyright holders. All other characters and situations are the authors. This story is intended for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended.


Categories: Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Elevator Girl
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2619 Read Count: 5109
[Report This] Published: September 03 2012 Updated: September 03 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You got me with that title and summary.  Good job.

Looks like we're getting closer to the big reveal (as well as critical point with Dakota).



Author's Response:

Your assessment is correct.  (Wow, that sounds formal!)  The ride starts getting wilder from here ...

Elevator Girl Fights Cancer by macromega Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Dakota's cancer has become terminal, and Elevator Girl is determined to save him.  But can even she accomplish such a goal?

 

The ninth Elevator Girl story.

 

Elevator Man, Super Scuba, Granite Man and the Super 6 are the property of their copyright holders. All other characters and situations are mine. This story is intended for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Elevator Girl
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5177 Read Count: 13742
[Report This] Published: September 07 2012 Updated: September 07 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well that's one problem dealt with.  And one more made possibly worse.  Have you foreshadowed the final villian, because I have a guess of who it could be.



Author's Response:

Yes, I've foreshadowed.  As is often the case for me, though, I still may throw even myself a curveball (and I'm writing the sequence in which the villain is revealed this week) if I come up with an idea I think works better than the one I've been playing with.  We'll all find out together, I guess.  (Well, I'll know a little before the readers...)

 

I'm glad you're enjoying the stories!

Stainless by Saf Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

When a giantess and a human wake up in a metallic room with only the knowledge that they are to work together to pass a series of tests, the question of emotion affecting personal values is brought to a greater meaning.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7361 Read Count: 48966
[Report This] Published: September 13 2012 Updated: November 02 2013
Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Carbon

I was wondering if they were going to exchange names soon.  It's the fourth chapter but we only just started.

Interesting, so this uses fatasy races but in a modern or near future setting?

Also I'm getting an Aperture Science vibe from this place.



Author's Response:

They exchance names at the end of the last chapter, actually. ;)

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well, well, well, this is a welcome surprised. :)

Allison seems to be recovering from her fear pretty quickly.  Maybe it wasn't as severe as previously thought, but I won't quibble if it moves the story along.  Glad to see another chapter.

Elevator Girl Out in the Cold by macromega Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Elevator Girl faces her greatest foe -- and she and those she loves pay a terrible price.

Elevator Man, Granite Man, Super Scuba and the Super 6 are the property of their respective copyright holders.  All other characters and situations are mine.  No infringement is intended.

This is the 10th installment in the Elevator Girl series.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Elevator Girl
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12366 Read Count: 21924
[Report This] Published: September 14 2012 Updated: September 15 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Several things here:

1)Totally called it with the doctor.

2)Very Happy for Gemma and Stamitos

3)Glad to see the friendship with Jenna has ben saved.

4)Did I.C. know about the grandpa link to the tech?

5)Wow, that sucks about Dakota.  (and for me because it's cliffhanger.)



Author's Response:

Several responses here

1) Yeah, Dr. Dekker was pretty obvious from a reader point of view.  I played with twisting the plot to make it someone else, but just kept coming back to her.

2) Me, too.

3) Me, too.

4) This may sound strange, but that's actually irrelevant.  There's a fifth chapter to this installment yet to be posted, and it indirectly addresses that issue.  Simply put, since Kellie's a minor, and her mom is her guardian, Gemma actually holds the rights to the tech, at least until Kellie's 18.  That's why Gemma's on the board and not Kellie. (Dakota's involvement is explained in it, too.)

5) Yeah, and i don;t know that you're gonna feel any better after the fifth chapter, either ...

BTW, the reason for the delay on the fifth chapter is that I'm on deadline for a paying writing gig; I've got two in the works now, and one's a comic book about a size-changing superheroine.  After Chapter 5, there are still two more stories to be told in the Elevator Girl saga.  I'll get them posted as I can around the paying gigs.

Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: September 16 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I see what you mean.  I look forward to the next installment whenever you have time for them.

Naga Forest by Ghostbuster5 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Hospins is the last settlement of humans. Jared was a normal kid, until a farming accident forced him to flee, into a forest filled with danger of a giantess kind.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7230 Read Count: 59812
[Report This] Published: September 16 2012 Updated: November 19 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Meet Tina

Interesting, a nice naga story.  These are always fun.  (I'll actually worry that there are other not-so-nice giant creatures out there.)



Author's Response:

Thank you! We do not have enough Naga stories. And of those not many follow a Naga as a main character. And of course. Bria almost ate him cause he was a human, even though she was a nice person. So their are definitely even worse out there.

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Dangerous CPR

Not to nitpick, but didn't she kill those two guys in Ch 2?  I mean she feels bad now because she was wrong, but she's clearly willing to kill to take revenge on those who hurt Jared.  Seriously, if Bria wasn't already her friend...



Author's Response:

Well yeah. But to kill someone it makes a bigger impact if they are your size and sprawled across the ground, glazed eyes staring at the sky. The men were both swallowed and she immediately forgot about him. Always ask questions. I usually have answers. 

Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: October 09 2012 Title: Chapter 7: And that is why going down someone else's throat is not a good idea...

Well that explains how Jared got better enough to help after being broken.  So school huh?



Author's Response:

Yes. Oh boy, he got broken up by only three giantesses. And one of them was half his age. Imagine what several hundred giantesses AND giants could do.

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 141895
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice, hopefully he can learn to become more comfortable around her.



Author's Response:

Well suffice to say, with ese events and his continued shrinking, their relationship will change a lot.

Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: October 23 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Okay, It's been a while since the last chapter.  What  exactly was the change?

 

Also, I hope he dosen't shrink away to nothing at this rate.



Author's Response:

Almost nothing. I just took out a little bit at the end and added a short paragraph. I got ahead of myself and went against my original intention to not bother with explaining the shrinking and elaborating on a few other plotty things that just ended up being boring and no fun to read or write.

Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice so far.  I'm a fan of "sporty girls" having known a few, and I can hear their voice in Alex.

So will we learn why her sweat odor causes him to shrink, or will it be a "it just does" story mechanic?



Author's Response:

Thanks. I did think about it, but I don't really have a reason for why it causes him to shrink. Pheromones etc but no real reason, because I don't want it to be an effect she has on everyone. Personally, the mechanics of shrinking/growth aren't very important when I'm reading a story like this. I know some people do. It's not a science fiction story and I don't intend to get into it when I've already spent a lot of text setting up the characters and all. Sorry.

Elevator Girl's Love Grown Cold by macromega Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

The long search for the missing Dakota Greene finally ends ... but the late Dr. Dekker's victory still stands ...

 

The 11th installment in the Eelvator Girl series.

Elevator Man, Super Scuba, Granite Man and the Super 6 are all the property of their copyright holders.  All other characters and all situations are mine.  No infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49)
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Elevator Girl
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9165 Read Count: 18122
[Report This] Published: September 21 2012 Updated: October 03 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first it sounded it really awkward reading "woman" repeatedly.  But than I figured out what was going on before the big reveal.  How sad, it breaks the heart.  (and yet it's still "Aunt" Lakota)

Elevator Girl's Last Act by macromega Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

As Elevator Woman retires, Elevator Girl uses her last act to enact a plan years in the making to grant Elevator Girl her final victory over her greatest foe.

 

This is the 12th and final Elevator Girl story.

 

Elevator Man and Granite Man are the property of their copyreight holders. all other characters and all settings and plots are mine. No infringment is intended.

 


Categories: Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Elevator Girl
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11606 Read Count: 17371
[Report This] Published: October 19 2012 Updated: October 26 2012
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The set up has been established pretty nicely. But will the plan actually go through as neatly is the question?

Nova Force: 2 by Ginbug Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A continuation of my story Nova Force:http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2043 which is also hosted my my Deviant art account: http://ginbug.deviantart.com/ you can also check out some artwork based on the story as well. (I strongly suggest reading the first to get an idea of who the characters are). 

 

Essentially the story is as follows: Richard and his giant sized girlfriend Kikata, an alien, are back at it. The disappearance of a friend leads them into an investigation that will, once again, change their lives forever. 

 

As for teh giantess stuff, you can expect: sex, gentle, playful, not so gentle, vore, mouth play, MALE giants (no sexual interaction on the page.), and lots of sci fi fun. 


Categories: Growing Woman, Adventure, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Vore, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69325 Read Count: 127231
[Report This] Published: November 12 2012 Updated: April 29 2013
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just because I haven't rated it yet here.  I posted my comments on your DA page.

 

One of my favorite stories

Randall by lancealot501 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

Randall and Ashley are complete opposites but are the perfect match for each other.

 

This story is a little different but still a nice change of pace.  Please review


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26949 Read Count: 146838
[Report This] Published: November 26 2012 Updated: March 11 2015
Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: June 01 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You know, I once knew a girl named Amber who was also blond and 6'4.

 

And they're juniors, right?

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story, I could really see this being an anime.

 

I have to say, Randall certainly passes out a lot.  Looking forward to more



Author's Response: I read through it again and could see where it could be an anime. Now onto Sandals passing out only occurs when some sort of physical harm happens. This is to show that while he is independent and strong in his own way, he still has some physical limitations.

Finding One's Place by Malaka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

A young girl is sent into hiding on the eve of World War III. When she heads back out into the world, it has changed dramatically...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18241 Read Count: 64947
[Report This] Published: January 20 2013 Updated: March 17 2013
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Awesome to see you writing again.  I`m liking this new story.  Your pacing with how she's dealing with the lost of the life she knew feels spot on.  I wonder if this story will be a series of events trying to fit into this village, or a series of places looking for a place that fits.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review! The story will be about all the challenges that Katie will have to face, so it won't just be about her trying to fit into the lives of the villagers.

Eternity by Saf Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A young noblewoman follows the norms of society in every way, aside from being a towering 100-feet tall. When she is unable to find love in her own class, she and her desperate family look to the commoners in hope of someone who will accept her for who she is inside.


Categories: Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1500 Read Count: 12072
[Report This] Published: February 27 2013 Updated: August 16 2013
Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great to see you back.  I'm a fan of your stuff.  I've dawn a comic very similar in concept to this story, so I'm interested to see where you take this.

On the story, looks like Alice was checking out a nice young doctor as a marriage candidate.  Classic, if you're going to look at commoners, it's the obvious place to start.  But does Alexander possibly now have a shot?

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: sketch Signed
Date: June 09 2013 Title: None

I'm surprised they haven't thought to shrink Jessica as punishment.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.