Penname: Zalrus IX [Contact] Real name: Yes, please. Oh, that's sex, isn't it. Oh well, got to stay the course.
Member Since: December 22 2006
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Summary: A short young woman is cheated on by her husband and dreams of getting revenge. She meets a mysterious stranger who can make her dream come true...
Categories: Slow Size Change, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3141 Read Count: 43287
[Report This] Published: February 15 2008 Updated: February 16 2008
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 17 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Now, I agree with both of those reviewers. While this stroy does need a little fine-tuning, I do think that the story of a person that continulously growto be very good. However, I do think there should be some consequence, namly by being destroyed by her won hubris, or something lik that, even if the army can't somehow kill her. That's what I think.

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Zalrus IX 

Summary:

Cheerleading squad gets what is coming to them as they try to play a trick on a lesbian basketball player just before school is over. Little did they know what kind of suprise they are in for.

This was a request by a fan of my writings. This story is not complete yet but please continue to make requests. I love to get them. And will gladly do them if they have feet and shrinking in them


Categories: Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4733 Read Count: 15729
[Report This] Published: May 15 2008 Updated: September 14 2010
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: May 16 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

really? big block of text? I'm not going to rate this story unless you fix this gross display of non-indentaion! It's not that difficult. All you have to do is press "enter" when another subject comes up or there is another speaker. I really hope you do this, because it will turn off most people from reading what might be a really good story.

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Zalrus IX 

Summary:

A young private investigator takes on a missing person job from a mysterious client and ends up encountering a cult of young witches who wield enormous powers. UPDATE (OCT 2010) Sequel coming soon.


Categories: Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Muscle, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25000 Read Count: 148095
[Report This] Published: March 12 2009 Updated: March 16 2009
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Opportunity Knocks

Very Good story. I enjoyed it immensly and hope that you update it as fast as you have. One thing, though. Are you sure on your scale? I think two inches may be too large for you size comparisons, but mabye not. All in all, one of the storyies that I acually want to read more of. Bood job, sir!

Author's Response: A good point about the scale, I'm not sure, really.  This is my first attempt at a GTS story, so I wouldn't be surprised if I make some scaling mistakes.  I'll take another look, but I am also very open to suggestion.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: March 15 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Atonement

To answer your question, I don't know. I think she really means it, but if cornered, she will probably act like she says Nicole will do in this situaltion. But, to be honest, I don't think she has a choice. She can't go back, and that's that. So it isn't logical... but niether are people. So I don't think so, but I won't be suprised otherwise

I like where this story is going. A gold star for you.

Tighten up the scale and I hope to see you work soon.

Zalrus IX



Author's Response: She's definitely caught between a rock and hard place.  The question is whether or not she'll be willing to risk her life for absolute freedom or sell out our protagonist (again) for survival (would that even work?).  To be honest, I haven't decided yet.  I need to think about her character some more and hopefully let *her* make the call.  She is the title character, after all. 

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Chiaroscuro

THat was great! I really appriciate your haste to get the story finished, that the scale isn't that much of a problem. I also like bad people to get their comuppance, and this story does that very well. Good job sir. If it's any consilation, you get my seal of approval.

Zalrus IX's Seal of Approval



Author's Response: :D Thanks.  It's not quite over yet.  But it's a good spot to take a break.

One Man Trek by Westland Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: A 16 year old boy goes on the biggest adventure of his life. Not only does he shrink to a quarter of an inch and have to avoid becoming a bloody stain under his mom, 18 year old sister and 14 year old sister. He also have to some how get their attention without getting killed in the process. But is their full attention really the answer to his salvation?
Categories: Incest, Giantess, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10174 Read Count: 125579
[Report This] Published: March 15 2009 Updated: March 29 2009
Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed
Date: March 16 2009 Title: Chapter 1: How it all started

Yeah, I can't wait for the next installment, but I would like you to look at your spelling, which isn't the best thing in the world, and don't forget that scale!

Zalrus IX